Daithi
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Yes I now understand why they say Cia is the master of the cliffhanger. You do it so well. I'm just so glad im reading after it was completed and I won't have to wait for an update. Tap was he'll bent he was going to protect Dane even if it cost him his life.
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The father is truly evil. I really hope the police find him before he finds the boys.
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I can understand Tap's parents but Dane's grandmother my god no his father is such a bastard. But then they are two peas in a pod.
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LOL Dane is starting to loosen up, weeks after the accident he is just now deciding he needs help in the shower....the little minx
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Poor Dane everything he believes ks being turned Topsy turvey. He was so worried about outing Tap with his team mates and they've known for a year. I would really love to know how he stayed such a bright sweet kid with everything he has gone thru. His mother must have been a helluva women to buffer him as much as she did before she died.
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Wow I can't believe the difference in Dane. It's amazing what a little,etc bitbofvlove and friendship can do. Only thing I'm afraid of is in the hospital there was at least some protection in the apartment there is none, what is to stop the father from trying to get at him now. Also what's going on with the police, are they charging the prick with abuse or is Dane going to get blames for an accident there's no way he caused.
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And small inheritance lol the boy is worth 2million. Guess we know why the father went apeshit over losing it. I figured since he's a lawyer he gas his own money and we think berserk because of who it went to rather than the amount.
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Dane ks getting quite a few friends and support from among the hospital staff. He desperately needs it.
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What an awesome relationship between Neri and Tap. That is probably why Tap was able to come out to his parents and be able to be the same happy person gets always was. It's amazing the difference one really good friend makes be it male or female.
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LOL kissed into silence. That was so endearing. I loved Tap's comment about him being worried that Dane wouldn't kiss him rather than being worried if he did. I hate labels. Why does who you love automatically make you gave to verify labeled. Bleh!! I liked this chapter I sorta like Mrs. E. I really hope she can help Dane.
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Too bad some of that anger didn't escape when his father went after him. I understand Tap not wanting to tell anyone he's gay but I think in this instance it will do more good than bad.
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I really wouldn't have wanted to be Dane's father and be within reach of Tap.17year old or not I'm pretty sure Tap would have easily come out the victor. Which granted would only be a smidgen of what the hypocrite deserved but Tap would have been the one punished.
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Anyone got spare kleenex. That chapter is so sad. Tap feels so guilty and it isn't his guilt to bear. No one knew about the lawyers visit. So neither of the boys could ever have guessed this would happen. Something good has to happen soon. My favourite saying is that every cloud has a silver lining. Well this cloud is so evil and black that the silver lining best be so brilliant that it is blinding Dane needs something soon.
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Well if Dane wasn't a dead man walking before he definitely is now. But it serves him right, his wife might have been sick but obviously not sick enough to realize the perverted creature she unfortunately married
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I really can't believe I'm saying this but I truly believe that the emotional and dammed being inflicted on Dane is worse that the physical. I don't know if it's a good thing or not for him not to want to take the easy way out. This whole chapter was read through tears. I really hope someone steps in soon, Dane may be strong but even the strongest have a breaking point.
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So according to Dane's father he burned himself, god is the guy really that stupid adn his grandmother is worse. Holy Hell his life is miserable how does he manage to get up every morning. Tap is a great guy i really hope he manages to get Dane to accept his help Dane needs a friend in his corner badly.
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Epilogues and New Beginnings
Daithi commented on Mann Ramblings's story chapter in Epilogues and New Beginnings
I always thought Heidi would be perfect for Eric. I loved this story it was way to short. I would love to read more of their story. Btw you could have closed the story down later that night it wouldn't have hurt my feelings. The sentencing should be extremely harsh for the red neck..... Great story this may have been your first but am very glad it wasn't your last. Awesome writing Mann!! -
I guess pissing off the little guy does seem to clear the air. I'm really surprised that is all Clay did to Eric if I was him I would have done a hell of a lot more. I was wrong in that Eric didn't have a romantic love for Clay but it was still a deep love all the same. Personally I would think that Eric would be happy that his two best friends got it on together but I guess he didn't want to share which is sad really. I'm glad they made up wish it had happen without tbe abuse and rape. Hopefully Clay comes out of this physically and mentally whole.
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Eric is blaming Steve but if Eric hadn't of butted in that night would never had happened. Yeah Ogre caved in but think about it Eric did the same thing to Steve as David did to Clay. The only difference was there wasn't anyone around to back up Steve. After getting slammed in the face would you really stick around for more. The homophobic didn't make his presence know till after Steve left. If you want to blame anyone blame Eric for being jealous and sticking his nose in where he shouldn't have ever and he is still doing it.
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Eric loves Clay and he's hurt and jealous as hell. I really feel for him he not only lost out on his love but to his "straight best friend. This is not going to go away quietly.
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Wow that was an unexpectedly touching chapter. Heidi is not what I expected but man can she tear you a new one if you tick her off. That slap must of nearly taken Davidson head off if you could hear it that clearly through the phone. But on the other hand he probably got off easier than if Ogre hit him. If Heidi and Ogre's reaction to what Little Man said wasn't enough to give subtle hints to both Paul a day David then if they saw Ogre and LM coming back into the mall together would clue them in fast. I really hope it doesn't screw with Ogre's football team, David seems a bit of a prick and I can see him trying to mess things up even more than he did at the mall.
