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And little different magic story than I'm used to reading glasses but very interesting. So if I understand it right Ullee uses a sort of mind magic that you can't see being used but you can see the result of sorta like illusions. Where Ian uses your more typical magic that you can actually see from his hand.

Finally it toooook forever pup. The first part was perfect it led into the theme of the rest of the chapter perfectly. You could tell that overnight everything in Rhyder's life just seem to coalesced into just one big knot of hurt. Shura was the that warm comfy blanket you want to wrap up into when everything just wants to go wrong. I actually agree with Cal I don't like the idea of Jase hanging around with Rhyder for three week if he is just doing it for fun because he is a player. Yeah it will ease Rhyder away from the hero worship of Sam but it will do a whole lot more damage to Rhyder's psyche after the three weeks is up. There won't be a big comfy Shura to soak up the tears when he gets home alone with no one to lean on. Hopefully it wont be as long for tghe next chapter eh??

Hmmmm i could have sworn I already left a review for this chapter lol. Anyway I really enjoyed this chapter it was Hot steamy and innocent to boot. I love the hesitancy Michael showed in the bedroom and when he explained why it endeared him even more to me. Asher thought it maybe he was going to fast but I loved the fact that he was all for the speed just didn't know what to do. So from start to end it was a beautiful story hot steamy and the Lightening strikes sending silver flashes through the room gave it a romantic quality all its own. Awesome chapter can't wait for the next one to be posted

What a beautiful chapter. Yes Isaac scored one hit but for the most part he stood his ground and Isaac lost ground and face. Isaac really should get in touch with the foul mouth creature that works with Chuck they both seemed to be of similar ugliness lol. I really like the way this story is unfolding and look forward to the next chapter.

Fully understood why when I read it and your explanation now, but I do not have to like it. I'm slightly vindictive and am not one to take things lying down. Yes I may try to follow a saying that I always keep in mind to the tune of what goes around comes around. But like I said I understand, the cultural differences as well as personality difference....still don't have to like or totally agree ***pouts in the corner

I like Liam he is sweet and adorable but he also seems not damaged but not really whole similarities Dan. And really putting two not whole people together doesn't seem right I also like Cedric he's caring right from the start, is he gay. I'm pretty sure even if not he's a great roommate so we shall see. But right my money is with Cedric . Sam right now is not even on the best friend list but again that could change.

Joey leaves like he did five years ago, doesn't even attempt to connect with Dan then wants to talk to him like nothing happened. The same with Sam she knew what Dan went through for five years and she never attempted to get Joey to get a hold of Dan. Then leads Dan to think she was coming to State for him but actually tells Dan that it was for Joey.. To finish it and what I think the worst thing is she didn't even bother to warn Dan. I think that was the cruelist thing of all. If a supposedly close friend did that to me I would find it extremely hard to forgive let alone forget.

Hmm joey is back, but interesting enough neither Sam or even Joey thought to see Danny. Which leads me to believe that Sam and Joey were trying to hide. That is really a low blow.

To be truthful I had read Jacob's story before i read Joey's so its hard for me to not feel some or rather a lot of resentment for Joey because of what happened with Jacob and him. But with each chapter you have chipped away a bit at that I may never truly come to love Joey as much as I do Jacob and even Alex but I have come to admire and truly like Joey as a person. This chapter actually helped me a bit to understand stand and actually like Joey more. He didn't deserve the way that Caleb treated him and definitely not the way Caleb's friends treated him. Yes I think he got a taste of what he actually did to Jacob but he still didn't deserve it. Yes Caleb is selfish and rather immature and he eventually does come around but I really don't like the way he just figures an apology or two should clear up the matter. This story I think will always be a bit turbulent for me but it still is a compelling story. I hope that Caleb does eventually grow up at least to within reaching dstance of the maturity that Joey is now showing preferable without the growing pains that Joey had to go through. This was a very blunt and quite sad chapter but also a telling one , look forward to the next chapter.

I found Don't Shout a truly unique story. I have come across some but not a lot of stories that include characters with disabilities I think this is only the second maybe third with a deaf character in it. I thought it was exceptionally well done in that not only could you see the amount of research you did. The story showed a great deal of signing the lessons at the schools the schools itself. You could see the accuracy of the research you did, and because of this you also got the emotions the feeling behind the students the teachers and especially Jared. To me this gave a whole new layer to the story that really deepened the bond between Jared and his family but also between Jared and Colt.because of that background I could understand a bit more easily the person that Shelby is can't say it helped me like her any faster but it did help me with the why she was the way she was. But take away the whole deaf layer and you still would have a powerful story. I really enjoyed this story it told a classical love story of a big hulking somewhat innocent farmboy falling in love with the quiet,small geek. But it was told in such a unique way that you made the story all your own. The difficulties of just meeting Jared getting through the tough protective barrier of Shelby, to learning to communicate with Jared was very well done. I hated what happened at the school its really the only thing I wish you had done different, the fact that Colt gave up his schooling without a fight and with no recompense was just wrong. Yeah he didn't need it he was way more successful than any of the other students that did it doesn't matter the fact that he gave up was just wrong in my eyes. Yes the ending made up some of it the brother coming back, to see Colt and Jared's son was touching and the success that the ranch showed was really gratifying . The fact that Jared broke through is fear of learning to speak really was the icing on the cake. All in all it was a beautiful story the layers in it and the time and effort that was so prevalent made it one of the best stories I've read in a long time. Its different than your other stories but that what makes you such a good writer every story you write is different, even your demon series carry a theme but still differ from the other. I read a lot of stories and books but i only keep a fraction of them to reread or collect this will definitely be a keeper for reading over and over again. Good work pup and you deserve all the accolades you rightly should receive for a beautiful story. Congrats!!

You are so very evil to not only put Atoki through that but Korl as well. That was a hellish chapter even for a story taken place in he'll. The sweet beginning the utter helping the muddle then safety at the end. I wonder if Atoki will say anything to Vru, if he does I wonder if Vru will even mention it to the Ifrit or whether he will try to take on Sartheil himself. We know from the designer decorating how Aris was dealt with. I'm glad Korl left Sartheil even if he didn't take up with Nassau I'm still glad he left tbe father. this was a very emotional chapter and not all of it lovey dovey though it does feel incomplete, but I'm sure the we be taken care of in the next chapter.

What a full chapter from a new baby, to a heinous teacher to a birthday. I loved the fact that Zach was so upset one minute then an hour or so later be was more worried about Beso than his dad, shows just how fast a young child's mind accepts change. I felt so bad about tbe phone year scott might have overreacted but he soon fixed the problem, and the jumping in the pool to play with tbe phone was an excellent way to smooth over hurt feelings. I also got a kick out if Scott's idea of a sex talk lol. That would work eh? Lastly its hard to believe there are still teachers lime that around that make the student pay for their age. Wonder how he actually can still have a job considering just how many 20-25 or even older that are going back to college and universities. It's not lime Noah is ancient, I'm glad that he refused Scotts idea to teach the teacher a lesson it would have been worth it but could have really backfired with both the teacher a day Noah. This was Noah can say tbe work is all mine all the way thru tbe class.

Ben does have a point amazing how something he did 15 years ago overshadows everything he does in the presentation even Hollywood does. Also amazing at the phenomenal memory of the other person. Guess wads of cash perks a memory right up eh? Great chapter as much as I hate those kind of articles you did good with the tabloid article. I also like the way he would rather protect Mark than try to defend do himself.

Thank you for posting tbe next chapter!! There is so much pain and it seems for each puzzle piece Hugh finds and connects it just brings more Pain rather than answers. This has been such a great story, yes dark but in a way that has you wanting to urge Hugh as he works through the memories and the pain. Please more chapters!!

Well Cedric is Interesting, after all how many guys do you know that minutes after meeting a room mate stripes down to undies without a care in the world.

Interesting he wakes up from a dream about lost loves then finishes the chapter wanting to know his brothers best friend better.

That is so sad. Great first chapter well written.

It was a roller coaster of a ride. A different more real look of teenagers in love. I hope in the future maybe a sequel for Jeremy he needs a guy just for him. Great story..

It's really sad how really oblivious kyle can be even when it's pointed out to him.

Okay so he is sweet and endearing even when he's not drunk...and my heart really goes out to Jeremy, a not so great life and now to be the one to take the boy he loves to another boys arms.

I like fancy but I wonder if she really gives good advice. Granted kyle has already told Ryan he loves him he just doesn't remember it.

Pretty bad when jason can't even beat up a drunk kyle. Kyle is very endearing when he's drunk but what will happen when he sobered up.

LOL kyle keeps gathering all these friends that want more than realize he's hooked on Ryan and want to be just friends. Kinda different.

So a guy admits he's on a date with another guy but the girl still wants to leave her number with him.....yep that makes total sense.

I really wish kyle loved Jeremy rather than Ryan. And for all the growing up that Kyle's been doing he is still periodically acting childish.