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I knew there was "a rest of the story" but wasn't really expecting that with Heidi. I'm glad she trusts Ogre cause odds are she won't go out and flap her gums to everyone with speaking distance. I found LM's reasoning for the "make up sex" interesting, granted he makes a hot dominant personality but still a weird way to keep Ogre on the so-called straight and narrow path or rather I guess in this case the "bent and narrow " path. As to his reasoning on continuing the silence to Eric seems like a smart decision. But Eric will find out and there will be he'll to pay and it isn't going to be pretty.

Maybe sure there is a story behind his actions but if Eric ever finds out who ripped LM's heart out and stomped on it it won't save Ogre's ass. Somehow I don't see LM telling Eric who it was. This was a very painfully chapter and really well done, it brought tears to my eyes when Clay finally broke down in Eric's arms.

Wow another hot chapter. Just how long is Eric's study groups lol. I like the little sneak peaks you give us of Ogre. The drawing, the uneasy relationship with his dad, the loving one with his mom. The green eyed monster that popped out before the gym was funny. But my favourite was when he acknowledged that he might have been carrying a small deeply hidden torch for LM for a while, it took away my concern of Ogre using LM to make up for Past regrets with Tommy. Great chapter Mann.

Finding out about Tommy explained a few things I just hope that Ogre isn't unintentionally using Little Man to make amends for Tommy. That would just about kill Little Man and I'm pretty sure it wouldn't do much for Ogre and Erics friendship either. By the way why doesn't Eric have ever a nickname?

I like the way through most of the chapter that the friendship between Ogre and Little Man was shot and reality seemed to be confirmed in tbe shower room at the gym. But at the house we find out that what was going through Little Man's mind was the same as Ogre', a ruined friendship. What I think made the whole chapter was the line about Googling giving head, he might have thought he screwed up the friendship but he was darn sure if he got another chance he didn't want to screw it up. I can. Understand keeping it secret but even from Eric, which by the way I think is to late. My guess is he has put 2n2 together which would explain his double phone call that night. But hey I could be wrong it could of course all be coincidental lol.

Wow if this is your first try at M/M fiction it is truly amazing. My tablet is in about the same state as Lisa's company, a puddle of glop on my lap. The story may have started out as your usual college scene but right from the beginning both Eric and Little Man stand out. Not so much because of physical delights but because they are close and play off each other. Then we meet Ogre, another guy next door thst really isn't. These three best friends stand out and really make the story really am looking forward to see where this goes. I love the idea of the body art, I hope he keeps it up in the story.

What a sad chapter.

Okay i think I have figured it out you said it was different worlds, so they won't necessarily collide but by doing the chapters for each world every other chapter it gives a sorta time frame between the two. It's happening at the same time but one chapter is in space while the other is on Earth. I think but I'm not sure. I'm glad that the deacon is gone and Hamish managed to get them safely into California, I hope that Andrew isn't dead but from i surmise is that he knew he was going to die to protect Hamish and Mathew.

Is the fact that the boys in his element never remember Paul due to him pushing them not to remember or is it because of him being a telepath and he really isn't there. Something isn't right there i just cant figure it out yet.

I agree this universe with the Reverends are perverted seems more like a brothel for minors than any thing else.

well his telepathic abilities will come in handy so that others don't have the pain of missing him but its going to be awful lonely for Paul. If he is this strong at six I wonder just how strong he will be when he reaches adulthood. I like the space chapters better than the earth ones in Las Vegas they are too dark and I think they will get worse.

Hamish is a telepath but doesn't realize it. Like sandrewn I'm confused about the difference in the chapters they seem totally opposite other than they both have telepaths in them. I'm sure things will be clearer as the chapters progress.

I like this chapter seems a little more humane than the last one but not really sure what one has to do with the other. I hope the three boys meet up together, we shall see.

They think they might have stopped the Holocaust but I'm pretty sure they just changed the name just like in the little song they sing. This is a really harsh reality.

or he could have just said he was trying out funky new contacts. I like the twists and turns in this story it is intriguing you never know what is going to happen next. I hope you continue with this story can't wait for the next chapter.

What was that thing coming out of the bathroom lol. okay with everything that has happened since he went to bed after work Ethan has taken everything in stride and he balks at the virgin comment, that's too funny. please keep more chapters coming i love this story.

"It isn't what it looks like" why do they say that when as Ethan says he was ploughing twinkerbell (love the twinkerbell) how could it not be what it looks like lol. it just gets better and better doesn't it now the the ex is on the doorstep... this is going to be fun.

I like the start of this. I love anything with elves so that is definitely a plus for me. I'm sad to know that all his squad mates were killed , and that he never reached the city to warn them. But on the other hand he did survive. I think its a little weird how calmly the doc just goes about checking reviving adn then fixing up the guys back as i its perfectly natural for a man to land on his bed out of nowhere in a deluge of water. and how did he come to the conclusion so matter of factly that okay this guy is an elf they aren't real but this guy is so i need to fix him up. But with a touch of suspened disbelief anything is possible look forward to reading the rest of this story.

Sams parents should. Even jailed and the priest and doctor to.

LOL Sam saves his best friends life and his parents want to ground him..ossesive much my god guys get a life or at least let your son have one.

Haha a paper eating horse....rather ironic actually is this the adult teacher version of the dog ate my homework....and will the kids actually believe him.

This could get sticky, Sam is falling for Brian while going out with Brian's sister. Yes there is no way that that scenario will turn out good.

wow how many high school friends do you know that would stay up all night to make sure you didn't go into a diabetic coma after drinking too much. Sam says he is neurotic but i don't think that's the word i would use. great chapter

I like the sound of this story. I'm not sure if I'm exactly enamoured on the way Sam"s parented treat him but other than that it sounds like a cool story. I love the description of Brian sounds like a big rumpled teddy bear.

I understand that they are Kei's parents but what kind of parents would actively try to tear him away from Alex. Aren't parents supposed to love and support their kids. They are lawyers but judging by the way they are acting I can see them bending the law to separate their son from Alex. If they succeed do they realize that Kei will just give up. He ks fighting for them both to stay together in the only way he can if they take that away it will kill them both Kei literally and Alex figuratively, is that really the parents they want to be??? This story is worse than tbe old horror shows you can see on tv you know what's going to happen, the pain and fighting that is going to happen but you can't click it off. There has to be a happy ending through this those two boys will be together they have to.