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Interesting jewelry lol. Also gives his answer without saying a word, if just by fashioning and wearing the unique jewelry specially in a place no one else can see tells of his love. Now they just have to get through the dual stubbornness. One has offered a compromise will the other take it. Love this chapter can't wait til next week.

well at least Jase was good for something lol. He broke the crush Rhyder had on Sam. Yes and he met a guy his own age..kinda cute too . Now you just have to find a safer reason than all the planes falling out of the sky to keep Rhyder in the states and at the ranch in two and a half weeks. Great chapter pup

HAPPY BIRTHDAY TREBS

The Grandmother knew what was going to happen and wanted to protect Haley. I wonder who it ws harder on the Grandmother knowing what was coming or Jason being the one still alive after and knowing he had to tell Haley.

I'm glad your back missed your stories. This one sounds painful going back through puberty at 12 years old lol. It must be murder knowing all he could say to fix future mistakes and deaths and knowing not so much he can't but shouldn't say anything. this looks interesting can't wait for the next chapter

As much as I hate to admit it Jase was good for Rhyder in one aspect. Rhyder was lonely and grasping at anyone who showed him affection. Jase while is the actual grass is always greener south did at least make Rhyder first time while not as special as Rhyder would have liked made it far superior that it could have been with a less experienced person. Rhyder grew up a little over the weekend and yes it was painful but a sorta rite of passage you could say. Jase is answer was pretty much the person I figured he was not a good guy but not necessarily a bad guy either. Caleb is a beautiful man inside and out and was the perfect person to help Rhyder understand where his bead is at and why. On the outside he is your stoic native American that sees everything but shows nothing unless you know what you are looking for. But on the inside he is the teddy bear that feels everything but understands as well. You know pup Rhyder needs someone his age and someone that understands him that will make even a walk across the corral special as well as the nights to remember. I don't want him to go back home to a place that doesn't see him. I don't mean to say that his family doesn't care they just don't see him as a person. Even this vacation was for his sister he was there simply because there was really no where else. He needs his place and his man that sees Rhyder for who and what he is not the shadow of his family....makes sense. He needs to stay with Sam and Caleb..you need to make it happen pup okay!!!!!

Absolutely the perfect name for the ranch in more ways then one. Has Luka and his sister turned up in one of the stories before. For some reason as soon as I read his name something clicked I'm just not sure which story or who's I read them in, either that or its just a fluke. Luka and Erik going to get together that would be cool. Great chapter can't wait to hear about Spain.

I hope we get to find out of Ari passes I don't want to think of him failing. So he was a bit off with the climate its no biggies humans figured out how to live with it and look at what he did do that should matter more than a few climate blips lol. Somehow i don't think the parts Gabriel is talking about are mechanical or part of the Core like the others are thinking about. Can't wait for the next chapter it's going to be a steamy doozey I hope hehe. Awesome chapter Nephy

um the adage " becareful what you wish for" comes to mind. Birch wanted Sayer back but when he got him didn't know quite what to do with him.. Sayer should have been a bit more subtle in coming back. I feel bad for both of them eventually once Sayer can explain I think a lot of problems will disappear at least with Birch accepting sayer back. The problem may be in getting Birch to calm down enough to listen. Now he has to deal with the damage from the fall down the stairs on top of everything. I just love your writing Cia and Faeries rock!!

Full first chapter....how can you be stuck in love?.

You always start off so simple in the first chapter. Then after that everything speeds up. What a daunting future. To be in a secure or what he thought was a secure relationship then bang everything is gone. But even with the little bit you have described Noah doesn't strike me as a person who gives up. I am really looking forward to this book only problem I foresee is too shirt chapters and too long inbetween chapters. Can't wait.

gah what a place to end it. I wanted to see what the old lady had to say after kicking her grandson to the curb in a roundabout way lol.

Paiolo doesn't need a weapon...he is the weapon...no one will notice other than Kyria i don't think. Wonder if he knew he could do that or f thats what he was training for in the temple

a deed of good will put him above everyone else and made the distance longer... It seems the only ones to benefit was the families of the three children they found and the town...sad

hmmm being an empath would explain how he new the difference in the training for the boys. But it will be interesting to see how this connects to the rest of the story.

I love the way your stories twist and turn like the threads in a weave but by stories end the pattern is complete. Very good story will the initial threads of another to tease and tantalize.

He got out of danger to turn around a day head back in. Hopefully the family thst protected them are safe.

Twists and turns but slowly things are clearing.......i think

Interesting..that it was the same three from earlier..Personally having the guy be hooked like the sailor from earlier in the day would have been just recompense.

Sins of the father or in this case sins of the brother. Ariana was killed and Albus bore the blame for decades not because it was his curse that killed her because no one sought to find out who actually through the killing curse. But rather because he was the one who had Gellert there so therefore his brother blames him. he had to live under the misguided blame for the death of Ariana now he will be living under the praise for the ending of the dark wizard. He gains his brother back but was it a good trade off. Gellert and the brother were fighting Albus tried to protect the brother but he is the one that ended up with the blame.. Very confusing and in the long run Albus is the one that paid the price?...was the price too great and are the rewards worth it?

Brandon is a cutie. I wonder if Dylan's "fall" off the bed was an actual accident or accidently on purpose to break Chucks embarrassment. The guys finely admitted out loud their love and now that the vow is fulfilled with the dinner with Kelli nothing is holding them back. Poor Raleight it's going to be interesting to see how this party goes and just obnoxious Raleigh will be . He still reminds me of an over anxious puppy lol.

this new place is still very regimented but not as bad as the ranch and definitely not as pad as Las Vegas. Everything seems to be alright now but somehow i think after the initiation everything is going to change. we will have to see. Great chapter a lot of detail now that they are in a more open setting.

In Canada we have OHIP its not the greatest but it does allow us to go to the doctor's and even hospital without having to pay out of pocket.It is dwindling rapidly we now pay for more things than what we used to. We never had to pay for Ambulance, things like that. Last year my husband and I had to drive for an hour to check on my daughter she kept calling us but we couldn't figure out what she was saying so we drove down to her apartment to find her lying on the floor she had had we called her dr. not realizing we had the dentist lol but was told to call 911 we did and in a few days we ended up getting a bill for the ambulance ride and because the hospital was extremely busy and she was kept in the hallway for hours with the ambulance crew because they couldn't sign off on her she was charged extra, thankfully the disability coverage she had covered it but that is over and above OHIP. We later found out that she had had a stroke and another the day after she was finally admitted to the hospital. So here in Canada it is a bit better because basic stuff is covered unlike in the U S but on the other hand we do suffer because we still lose doctors to the American people cause they can make more money in the states than they do Canada. So whats it really like here with OHIP yes we have the basics covered and with additional coverage taken out of pocket from employment it can be very good but having good coverage or even basic coverage doesn't really mean much when you don't have the doctors or medical personnel to help the people. The states have the people but don't have the coverage we have the coverage but a serious shortage of personnel to help not really that great of a trade off is it eh?

What a sad chapter. How does one go about telling your mate that hey yeah I'm leaving in six months and I may or may not ever see you again. Only thing is these mission are only for the highly decoratd or schooled people so really it would be not so much of a surprise right??

Okay I think there is a mix up I remember reading this same chapter quite a few weeks ago. right down to the conversation with the boy then meeting God then coming back to disbelief from the rest of them til the duo sun was pointed out. So either the other chapter was deleted at some point and reposted or but something is off with this chapter. I know i already read it and posted a review lol.