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I like that shaman, probably the only thing that would bring some sense to the those two stubborn boys lol.

Oh boy they made a huge mistake taking Mattie but oh boy did they compound it by multiple times by taking Dylan. Jessie will be out for blood. Spin will never forgive him self if something happens. Hopefully Casey is all right. Diego is going to be extremely upset when he finds out what happened as well.

You did good pup Bruce is a perfect boyfriend for Rhyder. And since he will be eighteen he won't need to go back until it's a higher age of majority in the UK. Rhyder needs a place where he is someone and at Iron Hill he has that, a place where people see and love him. It took him a while but he has made a place for himself just for himself and after finally finding good someone it would be beyond cruel to leave it to go to a place where he would be forced to once again be the equivalent of a non person again. Very moving chapter!!

this reminds me a bit of Goon but wth school rather than Military Jargon. Hopefully he has protected his sister and interesting that he is using his college learning to get him through grade/high school lol

wow Good intentions or not Ian really is a top notch dick lol. But on a good note the guys do have it right the more he tries to "help" the more Michael gets bent lol so I guess if you use a strong magnifying glass you can see where he is helping......but he really is a dick

amazing the difference a day makes. yesterday he was smeared from one end to the other and the Mail was the Hero. Today everyone is sympathetic and the Mail is the bad guy. And he only had to pretty near die to make it happen. And they don't understand why the paparrazzi don't seem to get a good break. Once he is home again and healed u will it be a downward slide again only time will tell.

lol yes i agree Noah needs to get laid not sure if i would want those two doing the picking though lol.

Interesting jewelry lol. Also gives his answer without saying a word, if just by fashioning and wearing the unique jewelry specially in a place no one else can see tells of his love. Now they just have to get through the dual stubbornness. One has offered a compromise will the other take it. Love this chapter can't wait til next week.

well at least Jase was good for something lol. He broke the crush Rhyder had on Sam. Yes and he met a guy his own age..kinda cute too . Now you just have to find a safer reason than all the planes falling out of the sky to keep Rhyder in the states and at the ranch in two and a half weeks. Great chapter pup

HAPPY BIRTHDAY TREBS

The Grandmother knew what was going to happen and wanted to protect Haley. I wonder who it ws harder on the Grandmother knowing what was coming or Jason being the one still alive after and knowing he had to tell Haley.

I'm glad your back missed your stories. This one sounds painful going back through puberty at 12 years old lol. It must be murder knowing all he could say to fix future mistakes and deaths and knowing not so much he can't but shouldn't say anything. this looks interesting can't wait for the next chapter

As much as I hate to admit it Jase was good for Rhyder in one aspect. Rhyder was lonely and grasping at anyone who showed him affection. Jase while is the actual grass is always greener south did at least make Rhyder first time while not as special as Rhyder would have liked made it far superior that it could have been with a less experienced person. Rhyder grew up a little over the weekend and yes it was painful but a sorta rite of passage you could say. Jase is answer was pretty much the person I figured he was not a good guy but not necessarily a bad guy either. Caleb is a beautiful man inside and out and was the perfect person to help Rhyder understand where his bead is at and why. On the outside he is your stoic native American that sees everything but shows nothing unless you know what you are looking for. But on the inside he is the teddy bear that feels everything but understands as well. You know pup Rhyder needs someone his age and someone that understands him that will make even a walk across the corral special as well as the nights to remember. I don't want him to go back home to a place that doesn't see him. I don't mean to say that his family doesn't care they just don't see him as a person. Even this vacation was for his sister he was there simply because there was really no where else. He needs his place and his man that sees Rhyder for who and what he is not the shadow of his family....makes sense. He needs to stay with Sam and Caleb..you need to make it happen pup okay!!!!!

Absolutely the perfect name for the ranch in more ways then one. Has Luka and his sister turned up in one of the stories before. For some reason as soon as I read his name something clicked I'm just not sure which story or who's I read them in, either that or its just a fluke. Luka and Erik going to get together that would be cool. Great chapter can't wait to hear about Spain.

I hope we get to find out of Ari passes I don't want to think of him failing. So he was a bit off with the climate its no biggies humans figured out how to live with it and look at what he did do that should matter more than a few climate blips lol. Somehow i don't think the parts Gabriel is talking about are mechanical or part of the Core like the others are thinking about. Can't wait for the next chapter it's going to be a steamy doozey I hope hehe. Awesome chapter Nephy

um the adage " becareful what you wish for" comes to mind. Birch wanted Sayer back but when he got him didn't know quite what to do with him.. Sayer should have been a bit more subtle in coming back. I feel bad for both of them eventually once Sayer can explain I think a lot of problems will disappear at least with Birch accepting sayer back. The problem may be in getting Birch to calm down enough to listen. Now he has to deal with the damage from the fall down the stairs on top of everything. I just love your writing Cia and Faeries rock!!

Full first chapter....how can you be stuck in love?.

You always start off so simple in the first chapter. Then after that everything speeds up. What a daunting future. To be in a secure or what he thought was a secure relationship then bang everything is gone. But even with the little bit you have described Noah doesn't strike me as a person who gives up. I am really looking forward to this book only problem I foresee is too shirt chapters and too long inbetween chapters. Can't wait.

gah what a place to end it. I wanted to see what the old lady had to say after kicking her grandson to the curb in a roundabout way lol.

Paiolo doesn't need a weapon...he is the weapon...no one will notice other than Kyria i don't think. Wonder if he knew he could do that or f thats what he was training for in the temple

a deed of good will put him above everyone else and made the distance longer... It seems the only ones to benefit was the families of the three children they found and the town...sad

hmmm being an empath would explain how he new the difference in the training for the boys. But it will be interesting to see how this connects to the rest of the story.

I love the way your stories twist and turn like the threads in a weave but by stories end the pattern is complete. Very good story will the initial threads of another to tease and tantalize.

He got out of danger to turn around a day head back in. Hopefully the family thst protected them are safe.

Twists and turns but slowly things are clearing.......i think