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Little bit of jargon I'm not sure of but I'm getting the gist of ut slowly

Very need to know... Interesting story.

That was rather abrupt and did the really tell them anything other than they will be having company the last leg of the journey....interesting

Attention getting right from the intro!!!

omg hes just thinking now that he might not have the greatest timing. Okay i have tears running down my face I'm laughing so hard. that was perfect pup.

omg that is so funny...sad for the bride but really really funny. It actually reminded me a bit of my wedding though it never got that bad. mostly it was my father refusing to wear a tux, nearly yanked my head off sitting a chair on the floor length veil on my hat. then two guests having a fight to rival wwf in the kitchen of the hall where we had the reception. But we got through including the thunderstorm that started in the morning adn didnt finish till after the dinner that night. So yeah I really do feel for your bride in the story ...been there ..done that ..don't really need a repeat....and that was over 30 years ago lol

Like I said earlier the first one wasn't really my cup if tea...but these boys are sorta like fungus they grow on you. This one didn't seem quite as vulgar but yum the sex was hot . Just maybe might be looking forward to the next meeting of these guys.

Oh Wow that is sooo coool pup. Well i bet they learnt one thing out of that, Vru aint no puppy haha. I'm pretty sure that after that small display of temper no one and I'm pretty sure no one not even the devil himself is going to tempt that temper by going after Nami. This chapter was awesome. I loved the way the demons puttered around and showed Vru some of their view of the top and he showed them some of his special talents. Everyone was happy and chattering away then whoa huge melt down I wish \i could of seen it ......er maybe not lol. really really great chapter Sasha

Poor Dean.. he is in a bit of a quandary isn't he. So he gets dumped by a girl which he seems fine with but now he is going to a gay guy for dating help. To top it all off he likes two people,noticed it doesn't say gender lol. So I think the next few chapter could get very interesting very fast... this is going to be good. good chapter can't wait til next week Andrew!!

I wonder if the attraction William has is because he was getting so much sex then he had to stop cold turkey. Now in his mind getting it on with the two best friends who he trusts for all the world so there is he feels he safe or a convoluted mess there of. Which ever I don't think he has thought it through to the point of what it would do to his best friends relationship or Cam's piece of mind. I'm not saying he is going after the guys for pure sex but in his mind they are best friends and it really wouldn't be sex since hes straight they are safe to him and he loves them both very much. I'm glad there were no complications with Catherine...I also wish that she could find a man for her that she could love as much as she did Cam's dad and would love her as she deserves to be loved.. great chapter... more please :-)

oops minor spelling error but has been fixed..... sentiment is double though

* * HAPPY BIRTHDAY IARWAIN * *

Erik is so cute and such a good fit for Rain...I'm glad that the incident with Cody didn't do any damage to Erik and he stayed the same sweet boy. I'm glad that Spin was able to reason with Mattie that yes being mature for your age is good but there are times when you need to be your age and your sixteenth birthday is one of them. Granted Spin had ulterior motives cause I'm sure driving flash rather than responsible vehicle would go go over with him much better lol. Btw the ranch is still one solo boy they need a good boyfriend for Erik now :-). T.J is finally coming into his own now that they have given him a second chance, and I'm pretty sure I know what he wants to get Devon for his birthday and I really hope that he can find her in time for May. Awesome chapter can't wait for the next one.

That may not be a true cliffhanger but it's a pretty good sized hillside lol. I'm kinda sorta maybe thinking Jase isn't that bad. Granted he isn't the greatest but he never took advantage of Rhyder and made Rhyder feel good about his rather speedy...um...actions I guess you could...so he can't be all that bad...only drawback is 3weeks can either be too much time to get a heart broken or not enough to have everything fun. Depending on how you look at it I guess.

I want Chick's nanna to be mine. What a beautiful soul she had. I loved this chapter, it explained a lot out not only Chuck but also the dynamics of Chuck's family.

That chapter was funny. You know Ari reminds of the little boy that did something wrong but doesn't realize it and when his parents (Gabriel,Uzzy,Pasha) try to get answer for their question just get the same answer because... This story has been so enlightening it started as one theme and morphed so beautifully into another it's been a joy to read. I can't wait til the next chapter..Surprisingly enough I will be sorry to see Ari go.

Ohh Cia I am going to truly love this story. I love stories about the Fae and this promises to be an awesome one. A true page turner that is going to keep me constantly checking for updates and since you are the master of cliffhangers I have a feeling this story is going to kill me over and over again rofl. can't wait for more.........(maybe a bit too much enthusiam?)

Haha pup you do like your twists and turns. Vru is soooo not going to be happy when he comes back down from the surface to see Atoki with a changed appearance even and especially the reasoning for it. I have a feeling that if they thought he'll was hot before it ain't nothing nothing compared to what it will be when Vru gets back. It's got to be bad when the prince is telling Korl to go up top. Give the devil his due he does think he can get away with anything since there isn't anyone to stop him. Hmm. Going he'll in the old town tonight I reckon. Can't wait for the next chapter for the fireworks lol

And beautiful story but very sad that Thorby and Bastian lost their life.

Nana will be happy the boys made kt to Marion will be a load off her mind.

Thorby is cute.

There group is growing. All three of their magics are different styles but compliment each other

I'm sorry that Josephs had to die but at least it was after winter so the boys should gave an easier time of traveling.

Their luck isn't so hot they escape one set of slaves to run into a different set again.

The boys are getting the full show of being on the run aren't they. Raccoons,bears and slaves.