Daithi
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I think that last statements of Taylan pretty much gave mitch his answer of whether it was too soon lmao. Wasn't he the one at breakfast that said they were a couple and they both had to make the decisions....nah don't think it's too soon.
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That was a really sad chapter, those two love each other so much. Even the mother wants them to be together, I understand why they aren't but man that was a bit of a tear jerker chapter.
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I like the dynamics between these three. Taylan with his game playing has a link with Kit but also has a link with Mitchell as well. That kiss in the middle of the street was perfect, a challenge well met.
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LOL one date and part of a sleepy morning makes Taylan part of the status quo, determining what they duo. Mitchell definitely works fast. God Taylan is so ruddy cute in the morning....but I do agree with him udder suckered ewwwwww
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Please accept my apologies not sure why but in the last few reviews have been calling Mitchell Michael. Somehow mentioning a warm bed and Taylan as a good combo could lead to so many sexy comebacks was really quite disappointed Mitchell never took him up on it. I'm not sure if I should be sorry for Taylan not having a close. Physical relationship with his family or not. He seems a bit befuddled with the closeness of Mitchell and Kit. It will be interesting to see how it has a bearing on his burgeoning relationship with the two of them.
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I really like the closeness between Michael and Kit, it's unusual especially since they only see each other for a weekend a month. Kit for such a young age is very astute, which is cool and probably causes his dad no end of frustration hehe. Great story.
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LOL this story is amazing, I read it a few months ago but I'm rereading it. Not sure why I didn't leave reviews.
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"I think I accidently created the Trinity"......that statement says so much once you find out more about Ari. He seems like such a cute but definitely an accident prone airhead. Accident after accident its not really that difficult to believe he created a trinity. My question is what is he going to do now.... I really don't think there is much more he could do for an encore. Great chapter a little too short but very apt. The term. Suspended disbelief. Comes to mind after this chapter.
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Oh this is going to be fun I can't wait for the weekend.
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I didn't expect that. Hmm gay and drunk, no wonder why he seems confused on how lol. Everything is kinda all twisted around. I don't think anything is working out the way they thought.
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Sneaky little bastard but I have to admit serves Michael right. It should be interesting to see what happens next.
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I can understand his reasoning but really to quit your job cause the boss kissed you and you enjoyed it..
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I really hope this little bit of a story didn't quiet your little voice. This would make a heck of a good story. But I have to give points to the guy if he wanted to get someones attention landing at his feet in a mud puddle would definitely do it. Terrific prompt initiative Kitt.
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LOL that was a funny chapter, will be interesting to see how Taylan reacts.
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I have a feeling that Taylan is going to find out the reasoning why you dont assume, cause I have a feeling he will eventually have really gooey egg on his face soon.
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LOL he may be the boss but he is a bit of a dim bulb isn't he. Threatening to fire the guy to find out something he could with a bit of work find out himself then turn around and make something up to ask a favour of him. Lol and he wonders why he is single????
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Hah yep this story is going to be interesting. Both strong personalities who won't back down.
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Haha this sounds like a story with a sense of humour. Looking forward to reading more.
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Writing Tip: Meaningless Words With A Purpose
Daithi commented on Trebs's blog entry in Writing World
eh- only if your Canadian lol huh- disbelief or questioning these and the two I previously posted are some of my favourites -
I think Blake surprised Ethan in more ways than one in this chapter. I also think that Blake sees and based a handle on things that maybe Ethan and the others don't. I enjoyed this peak into Blake look forward to the next chapter..well done.
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I like this chapter. It will be interesting to see what Sam does about the Governors seat. He has to know that his song being Gay and having a boyfriend will come up. Though it may not be a issue...okay scratch that it will be a big issue but I also know that he will not run if it will cause ant damage to his family. The fact that his family is growing and the reasoning behind it is also a big factor. But I do think he should go for it. I also understand Rogers hesitancy with JT and I don't figure it will be long before even that will be gone. I also totally agree with his comment about Cody being hell on wheels once the casts come off. I loved this chapter only thing is I'm now all caught up and now gave to wait like everyone else for the future chapter postings. Oh well hopefully it won't be long for the next chapter.
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I remember the incident over Michael, I was really disappointed when I found out but was happy with the ways things had been handled. I lime the way you went about it in the story. I would,do love to know how Sam managed to get an excellent nurse to give up her job in the hospital to become a housekeeper, don't get me wrong believe it or not her name was the first one that popped into my head when Sam mentioned getting a housekeeper. But a nurse giving her job up for a housekeeping job didn't seem likely, thank you for proving me wrong. They will need her help in the days ahead, not only the cooking and stuff but also with the nursing aspect but also the spiritual aspect. I love the way this story us going, yes there is a lot if threads all over the place a lot going on but you have them all tied together in a very believable way. It's not just one catastrophe after another but they all tie in. Fits very well with the dream that andy had about the multiple tornadoes recasting the town. Now we see the tornadoes are real but are actually. Symbol of what is happening in the town, my only fear is in the dream both Rogers and Andy's home were gone at the dreams end. That doesn't bode well for either family.
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Chapter 23 Tender Loving Care
Daithi commented on Enoch's story chapter in Chapter 23 Tender Loving Care
The circle is growing. Cody is one smart cookie, considering few people know of Andy's financial worth its amazing how he put two and two together and came up with the correct answer. On another note that secretary needs new manners. For someone who deals with hospital administration which involves people dealing with medical issues leading to emotional times and money she really needs to smartening up. Whether you 15 or 55 no one deserves to be talked to like that even if she is only a secretary. Okay rant done lol. Really great story I'm just sad that I'm almost up to the last chapter you have posted I am not looking forward to having to wait for upcoming posts. -
Chapter 22 Plots and Tragedy
Daithi commented on Enoch's story chapter in Chapter 22 Plots and Tragedy
LOL I'm sorry but he's going to try to derail a murder investigation and a run for the governor with a tee shirt. Fleming really isn't that smart is he. Lol interesting how he is getting all this information, including the physical damage andy had from saving joey. I still can't place how they have JT supposedly as the killer since he didn't even know his mother was dead till nearly four days after she was murdered. He was at the game and has physical marks and damage backing his story. And Since everyone knows that Fleming tried to plant the tee shirt what's to stop him planting more evidence. Did I mention that Fleming is really stupid!!! -
I don't like Fleming. Wonder if he has anything to do with the murders himself.
