Sasha Distan

Thank you Jeff! I totally missed this review too - so sorry. I think the boys needed a little bit of perfect just here.

Thank you very much, though I'm sorry the emotions ring so true for you.

hahaha! oh dear Petey! Jian is a lucky and gifted boy indeed.

Such high praise! I'll tell the boys you said hi. Thank you so much for all your reviews and your feedback Rndm.

Neither of them had the time to get re-dressed, but Kiaza had cleaned them both up with magic. He pushed the boundaries of Kiorl’s outfit in the sort of way the panther usually liked. Kiorl couldn’t help but feel exposed by Kiaza’s alterations. His shirt turned into a draped open fronted jerkin, and he was sure the slippery little snake had made his loin-cloth closer cut somehow too. Kiorl adjusted the set of his belt on his hips as they walked, and tried not to stare at Lahja’s back. He wondere

The universe conspires against them even more than they do! Tension mounts on all sides....

Thanks Parker! I like the idea of them colliding - that seems appropriate given the levels of stress, lust, and tension involved.

“Hey there, rock star.” Hrishi is waiting by the door; hands in the front pockets of his chinos, looking to me like sex on a stick. “That was a great show.” “Hey, thanks.” Most people left an hour ago. A few stragglers were being shepherded in the direction of homes, buses, and trains by the Starfish guys once we turned up the lights. We organised our opening group to help clean up and sweep the floor whilst we packed up our gear. It always takes way longer than everyone thinks it does to brea

I promise at least some of these published authors are lying... or telling very good stories to themselves. Yes, my characters shout at me, really, really loudly. What none of these podcasts told you is how painful that is! Ever try and teach a full day of lesson to 11-16 year old kids while there are two guys right in the forefront of your brain, fucking in the shower and swearing at each other every chance they get? (That was how I met Marty and Hrishi). Any of those authors give you an idea of how hard it is not to say something wholly inappropriate when that happens? and never mind the fact that when this happens, you basically have no choice in what you write - you're just along for the ride, typing furiously and wishing you could actually sleep. Everyone's method is different. Your characters might be deeper or more thoughtful because they need prodding. Some move quicker than others, but everyone has the chance to get there. And yes, and Robert Rex said, we're all learning. Do not get Kitt, or anyone else, started on how appalling my grasp of grammatical concepts is sometimes. Do your thing - you're the only one who can. Life is far too short to be anyone else.

What was it Chaucer said? "I will eviscerate you in fiction. I was naked for a day, you will be naked for eternity."

boy is slippery like a fish, no? Oh, if there were words enough for all his and Marty's issues!!! But I'm not their therapist, they just chose to come shout at me. One assumes there is hope!

Positive? Maybe, it's certainly a step in a direction of some sort. As for Hrishi being controlling... it's not like Marty doesn't want him to be. Rock star seems to love being told what to do. This story has been written and edited in full before chapters started being released. Mostly because I wrote it so damn fast (2 weeks and change). Most others are started, edited, and then we start releasing chapters once I have built up a buffer of six weeks or so.

Well aren't we people in purple keeping y'all busy. Good week guys!

Thank you much, I'm glad you enjoyed the boys. I'll keep an ear out, but I'm not promising anything.

Thank you Fae

Thank you so so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

I'll tell them you said that. I suspect Jian will roll his eyes. Thank you Jesse.

Thank you! I'm so glad you came along for the ride with us. Many many thanks.

Thanks Jesse! I'm sure you'll like Deorion. He's like Kiorl, only without the bloodlust. but still with all the sass.

thanks ma! It was rather cruel of me I suppose....

thank you very much. I'm really glad you liked them. GA is the only place you'll find anything new, all the stuff on other sites is pre 2014. Huan-Yu is a funny guy, I'm not sure I'd be able to write from his perspective. Interesting thought though. also, just for reference - my poetry is terrible, but thank you anyway.

Wow! I can't imagine playing for opposing sides! I imagine that could be hard sometimes. On the other hand, a bit like working with your other half, if they played for the same team, what would there be to talk about?

They really have got it made, huh? Thank you puppilull, I'm so glad you came on the journey with us.

See, I'm nice to you sometimes Hoho! Thank you.

thank you. Well, I'm not sure. I think what makes them so special is that we leave them so happy and complete.