Sasha Distan

thanks imp. I'm really only using comma's to break a longer sentence into two halves, or link too related but separate ideas, as is correct and conventional - people just don't do it very often.

you're very welcome. and thank you for the lovely praise.

Born Wolf went through four versions (each version has 10 mini versions, v1.2, v1.3, v1.4 etc) and three editors before it was ready for publication. I judged that we as a team spent no less than 18 hours on the final final (v4.6) version before it went to print. It hurts, it's a long process, and in my experience it doesn't get any easier. If it was easy, I'm fairly certain something would be wrong. I wouldn't limit yourself to submit by the end of the month, because if you leave time between read throughs, you are more likely to spot little errors (it took us until v4.5 to realise I'd given one of the characters the wrong name in a scene. famously the 4th Harry Potter book was published to the masses with the same error, only the character in question had also been dead for 4 chapters) in the text. otherwise your brain just reads what it thinks should be there. Good luck, and happy editing

thank you.

I think we could leave Rick and Theo to their own devices. After all, we know they're meant to be together. They'll be ok.

thanks very much. and lots of dogs love werewolves, or fear them. Very few try to attack something that strong.

Who's a busy reader then? *tickles under chin* go have fun!

with the posting of the Spring Anthology, including my story Instantly we have the conclusion of (this) album of the American Songbook Series. We are working on a few bonus tracks for the deluxe album version, and maybe and extended play track or two. Hopefully by the summer the print and e-book versions of the full album will be available for your delectation and enjoyment. The current track list is as follows: 1 - Great-Grandaddy's Gun (Grandaddy's Gun; Blake Shelton) 2 - Payback's A Blast (Get Even; Brad Paisley) 3 - Tailgate Hangout (Ready, Set, Roll; Chase Rice/ That's My Kind of Night; Luke Bryan) 4 - All Over The Road (All Over The Road; Easton Corbin) 5 - Drunk Last Night (Drunk Last Night; Eli Young Band) 6 - The Boy Who Was Summer (Sunny and 75; Joe Nichols / 19 You+Me; Dan + Shay) 7 - Nothin' Town (This Nothin' Town; Jason Aldean) 8 - Bright Thunder (Blown Away; Carrie Underwood) 9 - Ladies' Man (God Made Girls; RaeLynn) 10 - Lonely at the Top (Hope You Get Lonely Tonight; Cole Swindell) 11 - Country Girl (Fresh Off The Farm; The Farm Inc.) 12 - Our Song (Play it Again; Luke Bryan) 13 - Worth the Drive (See You Tonight; Scotty McCreery) 14 - Instantly (State of Grace; Taylor Swift / Crickets; Joe Nichols) Hopefully we'll round out to 17 or 18 tracks.

om nom nom... delicious words!

Thanks very much. But is it a werewolf story? I didn't see anyone howling...

I've never had anyone wish Lyme disease on one of my characters before! you really don't like him, huh? I feel bad for Ana, like you said, she's not really giving informed consent.

it's the translation of 'bacon', 'MINE'?

reasonable

blue

welcome and welcome. thanks stpatme, it's always fun to find other brownshirt supporters!

How does the groundhog know when it's the right day?

operation

lie

no, you'll find one of the (many) pop-ups wanted to screw you. Just ad-block your computer, and the internet will be SO much cleaner. PFTV is all about free and anonymous TV, they won't ever ask you for personal info.

Happy birthday little sister. you know I love you.

I caught up on ProjectfreeTV (no sign up necessary) The whole show is awesome, and Jude is adorable. Of course now episode 19 has aired, who knows what might be happening next?

Can we agree on the length of a week?

nighttime

comms

there is no way Hel will choose the streets over a warm bed, regardless of anything else.