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These are some of my lighter poems not so doom and gloom and depression hopefully this is better than the more intense poems that I have posted I'm more able to relate to my more darker poems than I am to the lighter one's but I hope that you like these and please let me know what you think how it makes you feel and what you feel I should change I take all comments very seriously. Thank you for taking the time to read
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Shadowy thought's drift through my mind, I sit and wonder why my path in life seem's so bleak , it just seem's to go from week to week . Lifes lesson's yet to be learned to many pass, so what's my concern . The scales of life are always stacked against me - neither here nor there - what's wrong with me ? Problems to great , life to short , some thing's I wish I could just abort - problem solved my life ended. How great for all if that's where it.....
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I do have a FEW that are light but so many are dark ,I had written them during a dark time and it was just an easy way to get out how I was feeling I'll try for something lighter but I make no promises. Thank you for reading
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Thank you for pointing those 2 words out it went right by me as I was writing This and quite a few others were written during a dark time that I went through I can't promise what the next one will be but I'm glad that you are willing to stick around for it Thank you for reading and commenting
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Twisted and Mangled , Tattered and Torn - Shredded beyond recognition , How my flesh burns in misery , Oh how it bleeds in agony . The demons cackle in delight at my distress , at my misery . How did it come to this ? My life in ruin , beyond all repair - beyond saving . The horror of life surrounds me enclosing me in eternal darkness , I try fighting but the despair I feel is to great a burden - a burden I can no longer bear . Fear has taken over , I can no longer hear anything for the poundin
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I love this story so much and to see Yuri regaining his memory is wonderful but a little scary too how well is he going to be able to handle remembering about the beating he got after he and Benny became mates ( I hope I'm remembering that right ) ?? I guess time will tell , I can't wait to read more !!!
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Thank you for taking the time time to read and comment , this one I feel very strongly about because some many people need to be more understanding towards others about who they are and who they are meant to be , they also need to stop trying to make others change and be something they aren't meant to be .Everything I write is very much from the heart mainly how I'm feeling at the moment. Thank you for your comment
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OMG !!!thank you so much Lisa for that comment very happy that you liked it I wish more people could read it ( the idiots of the world that is ) and become more enlightened and understanding to their children and others around them I think this world and the people living here would be way more happy than they are now but it takes baby steps hopefully more people will open their hearts and minds and accept that which was never meant to be changed and allow people to be who they are without bashing them and making them feel worthless Thank you I REALLY appreciate you taking the time to read and comment....
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I feel very honored that my poem was the first on here that you have read , I wish that we could end the ignorance and closed-mindedness of people , but people are always going to find something to hold against someone Only in a perfect world would everyone get along THATS the world I would love to live in but that is just a fantasy that is never going to exist. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment.
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Thank you for taking the time to read and leave a comment , with my poems its more about my feelings and there is never really any kind of flow that I follow if it sounds good in my head then I write it down if it doesn't look good in the end I change it.I appreciate all feedback
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I don't think you have to be a poetry critic to tell whether you like a poem or not , I'm very glad that you liked mine thoughThank you for taking the time to read and comment I do appreciate all feedback.. Some of the next few poems are going to be somewhat dark and intense I hope you will continue reading and let me know what you think
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Thank you , and yes I want people to be honest , be brutal if necessary , that is what I'm looking for .I'm glad that you were touched by it , in a good way of course... I have never been told that I was too neat or too grammatical is that good or bad ?? I hope that some of my other poems are received well BC they are pretty dark maybe somewhat intense. Thank you for taking the time to read and to comment I really appreciate it
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I love these 2 guys , they are just so sweet together !!! Why is it the mother always knows in the stories that her child is gay ?? I mean really , in real life how many mother's truly know their child's sexual preference ?? I guess I'm just nitpicking over a minor detail. I loved how it all worked out with the parents being understanding and Dallas' dad needs to realize its not a phase he was born that way...
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Don't call me an abomination Don't tell me I don't belong Don't tell me That I'm worthless or I live my life all wrong Don't judge me for who you think I am Don't tell me who I should be. I'm just trying to live my life, I'm just trying to be me. I didn't wake up one morning choosing this path that I'm now on, I wouldn't have chosen a path with all this ridicule and hate. This is the way I was born, I'm happy with who I am- why can't you love me for that, instead of hating who I'll alway
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Having dealt with deep depression I found that by writing it helped get a lot of my feelings out and made it easier to get through the days I hope that maybe someone will understand and maybe it just MIGHT be something that someone else can relate to
