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1brokNangel

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  1. Another AMAZING chapter....WHY do I get the feeling that Terry and Kaz were talking about Zander and Andy, IDK why but that's just a "feeling" that I got.... more, more, more PLEASE
  2. I REALLY hope David dumps the she-devil soon....because EWWW GROSS rubbing herself with HIS hand why didn't he just yank it away from her, LOL, before leaving he THOROUGHLY washed his hand....but honestly in a way I guess you could say he put himself in that position by kissing her like has been doing...that needs to stop. The scene with his dad AWSOME, with the way he acted it made me feel like he wasn't sure before that his dad loved him, but now he knows for sure that he does. Poor Twoey looks like he is going to be in for a shock,I hope this doesn't set him back...hopefully with David there it'll ease the shock and pain a little, I know this isn't going to be easy on David either, poor guys I hope Ginny can help them get through this. Thanks alot SD as if crying through 6 chapters already wasn't enough looks like another chapter that is going to make me cry is coming up......I LOVE this story can't wait for next chapter.....
  3. Inside my head voices rage Screaming, crying Calling out my name Forcing me to face my shame. The shame of fleeing, The shame of being, nameless, faceless shadows antagonizing me to face. that which I fear the most, MYSELF.
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    Dessert

    IDK if there is really anything left to say that hasn't been said already, beautifully written it really touched me deeply... To go so long and realizing that the one you were truly in love with was right there with you but you just walked away, and then get that second chance, so very few get that....AMAZING !!!! I know I'm probably forgetting something but honestly I don't have many more ways to say how much I loved this story it was just so wonderful...
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    Chapter 14

    Everytime I see a new story with your name on it I just can't wait to read it, all of your stories have some kind of abuse in them which makes it hard to read but I know in the end that there WILL BE a HEA and that is what makes it easier to get through to the end... But.....I have to be honest I'm truly having a hard time reading this one the abuse is no worse than the others, but this one is just really getting to me....it could be bc of that WITCH of a "mother" using such a loving innocent soul like Eddie, it's so frustrating to see how she is using Eddie's love for Bryan to do away with Wyatt. That alone makes me wish I could grab her by her throat and beat her senseless. I can't wait for the HEA I hope Bryan doesn't hold any of this against Eddie, and I hope his" mother" is put through absolute he'll for what she has done.....waiting patiently (lol) for next chapter...
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    Epilogue

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    That Night

    WOW.....I wasn't really expecting an ending like that very well written
  8. This is such an amazing story with just a few words....it breaks my heart EVERY time I read it...
  9. Mournful sounds arise from the depth of my soul The anguished wails of those i cannot identify whose voices i no longer hear. In darkness their lament continues with each call, my heart breaks. No words describe the ache I feel for their torment. Their despair and sadness washes over me - the grief too deep to contain. How one can suffer this alone? I begin to ignore their keening Longing to join them - I cannot My place is here until my time passes
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    Chapter 28

    OMG !!! This has been an amazing story......PLEASE say this is not an ending but a beginning , its to soon to let these boys go !!!!!! I also have to say for Jameson to kiss Luke just BC Erin asked him too that is WAY beyond brotherly love they have such a wonderful relationship as far as siblings go....
  11. OMG , is Robin MAYBE coming around , my heart just pitter-pattered almost to a stop when Robin told Tristan that he could call him Sparrow that was just so sweet... Another great chapter Sasha I really love these guys....
  12. LOL I would love to have seen Tristan flirt with Issac , Bay would have torn his ass up... And really for Tristan to think that he has given ANY kind of effort to showing Robin that he is interested in only him , he needs to think again he has not even begun , he still has a whole lotta romancing to do Keep trying Tristan !!!!
  13. My biggest concern is how is Jameson going to respond to Luke for the outburst he dumped on Erin , BC we've seen just how protective he is of Erin , Luke may get Erin to forgive him but I really don't think Jameson is going to be so forgiving I guess time will tell...and of course Sasha. ;-)
  14. yes , yes , YES !!!!! I'm so glad that Alex grew a backbone and dumped Mason and he wised up and found Paolo wanted him all along !!!! What a great story so thrilled for the HEA LOVED IT !!!!!!!!
  15. Sorry Sasha I was going to leave a comment but hit wrong button.....ugh I hate when I do that BUT on to my comment.... I love how this story is going seeing how all the guys are falling over Tristan and now he finds Robin who doesn't fall in line with adoration for him , so now it looks like Tristan is going to have to suck it up put his pride aside and really put his self out there show Robin that there is more to him ( I HAVE FAITH THAT THERE IS ) and that he is worth getting to know... Maybe Robin is just the one he needs !!! Looking forward to the next chapter !!!
  16. I <3 the whole idea of being telepathic SOMETIMES ( LOL ) definitely would have to shield my mind ALOT ;D ..... I have to be honest when starting the first chapter I was a little unsure about it mainly BC of the future setting and all seemed a little sci-fi for me..... BUT I'm really liking it the characters are very well written and the story reads well not to slow and not to fast It has got my COMPLETE attention can't wait for more !!!!!!!
  17. I am so done with Mason there is just something really fishy about him and Alex just needs to walk away before he really gets his heart broken !! I love , love , LOVE Paolo (hope I spelt that right) why doesn't Alex open his eyes and see what a great guy he is and possibly even a great boyfriend for him ??? Seriously they guy traveled MILES just to check up on him to make sure he was okay , how many people would do that ???
  18. I SOMEWHAT feel sorry for Tristin BUT he did bring it on himself , he tried going hard and fast with Robin without waiting to really see how Robin felt about him... Just BC someone says "it's not a date" , it doesn't give you full rein to run off with another person have sex and then come back like it was nothing... Tristan needs to apologize to Robin and then WOE him gently and carefully , he also needs to keep his eyes in his head and his d**k in his pants !!!!!!
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    Chapter 9

    I really am loving this story , but just have such a funny feeling that Mason isn't all that he seems to be , he seems more of a VERY closeted gay man who is only "out" when he is away on business , possibly married and has family back in the states.....I really hope I'm wrong !!!! Poor Paolo I feel so bad for him why can't Alex open his eyes and see what a good guy he is ???
  20. Shrieking in horror my minds eye seeing beyond all things unseen , the world beyond a vast wasteland of agony and grief ... despair never ending . Hopelessness reins throughout the cavernous halls the wailing horrors echoing through the surrounding darkness , the chill that lingers in the air , unknown creatures stirring in the dark delighted by the suffering the poor souls that are trapped forever in the embrace of eternal dark , suffering unknown horrors - the agony -
  21. Sorry but I have to say I hated this chapter ( :'( please dont take that the wrong way ) it was so hard to get through BC of the tears , so sorry to see Andy die so young but unfortunately that is how life is , its not always fair . You told it so well the heartbreak the deep emotions , I wish I could write half as good as you do , I hope that you can come up with someone to help Brent move forward I know Button and his friends will help but sometimes you need someone more , looking forward to reading more
  22. I absolutely loved this story , so glad that Louis saved Brody from Trey it sounds as though he really would have put Brody through the wringer if it had continued for to long , and for Louis to live the rest of his life being in the place that he loved was the best part so few elderly people get that and he had it all BC of friends who loved and cared about his happiness Such amazing characters , you truly have a wonderful way with your characters and how they come across in the stories You are definitely a gifted writer
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    Story

    IDK if it is because I have been dying for a really good hamburger or what but when you described the burger in the story OMG My mouth just watered I could almost taste it !!! okay now to the story I really liked this one but then again whats not to like about your stories they seem so real , the characters so alive , I enjoy the feelings and emotions that come through , and the whole thing with Brad wanting Jerret to dress up like cupid that was to funny wish that there had been more but you got alot of information for the readers in this one story that even though I would have liked more I dont feel as though I missed anything. cant wait to read more about Benny and hopefully more of Jerret and Calix
  24. I know that I have walked this path before - I am aware of that fact as I walk along. I gaze across the mist covered fields, watching as the sun slowly rises in the sky - I can see the animal's quietly make their way out into the open field's as if they too are unwilling to break the silence that surround's us. Looking around , wondering at the beauty and grace of every living thing that is waking to the glorious morning that has appeared. How amazing is it that we all came to be
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