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I'm not happy that its over but I am happy that N'than and Smeeth can now live happily in peace. 💙💙 It is unfortunate that the general got to walk away....hehe, he deserved to lose a foot.

I LOVED IT !!!!!!! yes I finished the whole story in one night after that first chapter I was so hooked I read it all, I just couldn't stop reading !!! The visuals you gave made me feel like I was there, I think I said it once before but I'll say it again, you are truely an amazing story teller.

Interesting very, very interesting I'm hooked....curious as to who or what the man-boy is that Stravor's father felt the need to give him a warning about him.

Exactly, I feel like there is still more to be told...more that needs to be said, I just wasn't ready for the story to end 😭😭

Sorry but I'm disappointed (not in the story, I LOVED the story) just sad that it was so short I wasn't prepared for the ending. I hope Peter finds someone to love him like he "loved" Simon, he deserves that after all he's been through and all that he has lost. As far as Simon I'm on the fence about how I feel about him.......

Well it certainly looks as though Theo/April/Wednesday (<snicker) has some explaining to do, not just to Jett but the Dads too. Poor guy he really is up the creek without a paddle....and Jett grounded until he's 25, that killed me. Absolutely cannot wait for the next chapter. I'm going to miss the guys when the story is over, can we have a story about Zane and Dan ?? I think that would be an interesting story.

Maybe he gets it from his dad....

Thats what I thought Simon was trying to do, get her close enough then stab her. Poor Peter....he lost his friend and his crush who it looks like was using him to get to Angela, SSMH, this just broke my heart.

General Jeptha needs to disappear 😡, from the 1st and 2nd chapter you can tell that N'than has no desire to tell about any relationship that he had with Junias so why can't he just leave N'than alone let him be happy. I hope Smeeth is able to protect N'than from all those that wish to harm him. Will we find out what happened to Barrukinda, I think he should be taken to shark infested waters and dropped overboard.

That sounds lovely, I never thought about that.

Let the war begin.....I can imagine the entire pack, with the exception of levi's family of course, is ready for blood. Poor Levi (LOL) looks like he's going to die, better late than never.

OH YEAH.....HE is about to arise 💖💖💖💖💖

I knew it !!!!! Pretty sure I called it last chapter, now for the spilling of the beans.... I'm thinking April/Theo will take it in stride, BUT Jett...he is totally going to lose his $**t........