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I think the only reason Mike would step in would be to make sure Ryder was kept safe, I really think he wants to keep him safe, I guess we'll have to wait and see if I'm right.
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Three Months in the Summer
1brokNangel commented on Aceinthehole's story chapter in Three Months in the Summer
I hope this is a start for Oli and Teddy to become closer, poor Oliver getting different views of the relationship between Ryder and Teddy he must be really confused about the whole situation. Why do I have feeling that Nate might have a crush on Dr. Haner ? Am I the only one who has that feeling ?? -
Chapter 90 Caught With My Pants Down
1brokNangel commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 90 Caught With My Pants Down
😂 me too, tell me not to do something and I do it....lol -
No no no......I just cant. Poor Ryder, I know how bad it can be with depression, I deal with it everyday. If he thinks breaking up with Teddy is the right thing to do, he's just fooling his self.....it's going to destroy them both.
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Tissues. I need lots and lots of tissues. 😢😢😢😢😢 WHY ?? Why did you have to kill grandma like that ?? What about the person that hit her, did they just hit and run or what ??
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Point Not So Pleasant
1brokNangel commented on Aceinthehole's story chapter in Point Not So Pleasant
As soon as you get the chance you really, really, REALLY should read his other stories they are so intense, deep, amazing...the characters are just as great as Teddy and Ryder. Ace has definitely got what it takes to draw readers in, you may need a few tissues, but I'm sure you'll enjoy them just as much as The Hidden Ones. -
Let’s Leave Everyone Hanging
1brokNangel commented on Dayne Mora's story chapter in Let’s Leave Everyone Hanging
Still waiting.....very (somewhat) patiently waiting for more. Please update soon............. -
All I Want for Christmas…
1brokNangel commented on ObicanDecko's story chapter in All I Want for Christmas…
That's exactly what I'm wondering !!! -
Time to fire that muse clearly it's not doing its job....place an ad in the classified section of the paper that you are looking for a more motivated muse.
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Really Blake could you have been more of an ass, I thought he was Ryder's friend....SMH
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I need more. These guys need an HEA more than any character I've ever read about.....please give it to them. I got to the end and it felt as if my heart had been ripped out...poor Erik.
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Mine! Part Two Chapter Forty
1brokNangel commented on Cia's story chapter in Mine! Part Two Chapter Forty
Loved it....but like with all stories I wish there was more....MAYBE the guys will come back in another story. -
Well it's gonna be hard to throw a book at a dead man .... Jack shot his self as his truck filled with water. IDK how I feel about that, he definitely doesn't deserve to live but on the other hand it doesn't feel as though justice will be served properly.
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this was so heartbreaking, poor Caleb.....I'm really hoping for a HEA, but right now I just can't see that happening. I'm still hanging in though, I have to see how this ends.
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2-2 - Questions and Memories
1brokNangel commented on Cynus's story chapter in 2-2 - Questions and Memories
whether it's possible or not, I still wonder IF that is the real Ethan. (??) With bringing someone back from the beyond you would figure that the days that they were gone everything would be rewritten, so how bad is the current history now that Ethan is back and Caleb is gone ? -
What was in the letter from his dad ???? And why didn't he want Davey to see it ?
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This is a VERY strange twist but I don't believe this is Ethan...it may be his body but I really don't think it's his soul. The soul of the real Ethan is more than likely still lost or I hope that's what happened. I don't wanna believe that he would take Caleb's place considering that in his journal he had already written that when Caleb went to collage he was going to kill his self. Please let's get to part 2 soon, VERY soon
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thank you for this amazing chapter.
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I'm now wondering IF they bring Ethan back if maybe something will attach itself to him or Caleb and come back with them (dark stories can sometimes put weird ideas into a person's head). What happens if Caleb finds him and Ethan won't come back, will Caleb make the decision to stay instead of leaving Ethan behind ??
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IDK why, but from the first chapter I thought maybe suicide would come up. I'm just wondering now what is it that he took of his mothers ?? A very sad chapter but I'm hooked, regardless of how hard it gets I'm DEFINITELY staying for the end I have to know what happens.
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My heart is breaking for Ethan , the way you wrote this amazing chapter really made me feel every word !! Can't wait for the next chapter...
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I took your advice and changed it, thank you for pointing out things that I didn't notice when I wrote this. Thank you for reading.
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Thank you for taking the time to read it and for the comment, it does "feel" complete but it MIGHT talk to me again I'll just have to sit back and wait.
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Thank you Lisa I'm hoping to get back into writing again soon.
