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I think I was as surprised as Mason when Billy showed up...I am DEFINITELY intrigued about Billy now, how does he know about Toby ?? Seriously that was amazing. IDK how I'm going to make it to next Sunday....and can I just gloat a little having called it early about Levine being behind Toby's murder, I also have a clue about he's partner can't wait to see if I'm right.....I wonder IF @Wesley8890 might have an idea about it.
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Wow....I'd love to read more, that was really interesting. Loved it 💜💙💜💙
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I KNEW IT !!!! I was always told never feed a stray because it keeps coming back for more.....LOL
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I at first thought it was the alpha but since he didn't tick on Jimmy's wold senses I had to rule him out....but now I'm wondering if it isn't one of the guys closest to the alpha.
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CLIFFHANGER.....SERIOUSLY, I really hope Sawyer was just taking a shower...for that rogues sake Sawyer better be safe..... I was on the edge of my seat with this chapter.
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I got a feeling it MIGHT be his "puppy" creature that he helped find food for in the last chapter, possibly looking for help with breakfast....I hope.
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PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, will you do a sequel......these guys are AMAZING characters I love Chomper....IDK if going with Deke is such a good idea who knows what he'll teach Chomper.
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Now that is an interesting theory, it sounds better than him being in on Toby's murder.
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Sorry but THAT'S wrong....."I don't want people to TREAT me with kid gloves", you were right about the kid being added. Also shouldn't GRAMMER errors be GRAMMATICAL errors ? I mean after all if your going to be a pedantic SOB you need to make sure your usage of the English language is correct, RIGHT? Nothing worse than a grammar Nazi if you yourself don't use the proper words when correcting someone else on their grammar.
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I had to look up the word pedantic because I had no clue what it meant, so for anyone else, like myself, who has no clue what pedantic means here's the definition : pedantic is almost always an insult. It typically describes an irritating person who is eager to correct small errors others make, or who wants everyone to know just how much of an expert they are, especially in some narrow or boring subject matter. This story is definitely NOT narrow or boring, I cannot wait for Sunday's to get here just so I can read and find out more of what's going on.
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To me using, looking down ON everyone, implies contempt, not the other way around, I think different readers see it differently.
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You have now put that thought into my mind....I can hear the seedy music as they enter that establishment the dark ambience, I like that idea. 💜💜 @pvtguy and @Wesley8890 comments also make a person stop and think that maybe they might be heading in the right direction. If, IF Po is involved its really going to break my heart I really like him, I do have a lot of questions about Renzo, but ill hold on to them until I learn more about him.
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I too love cheesecake and naps get warm and comfy then turn the fan on full blast and sleep.....lol
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Good morning/afternoon/evening, I wanted to make sure I got the entire day covered.
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I hope it gets better for you....hugs
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The whole Scooby Doo gang they always get the monsters.....lol I don't care how old I am I will never be to old to watch Scooby Doo
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OMG !!!!! @Wesley8890 I think I'm gonna have to make you my new best friend, I LOVE the Ghost Whisperer.....Toby is definitely not going anywhere until his murderer is found....for the time being I'm still holding Levine Goldman responsible for Toby's murder, until more clues are uncovered that is. Maybe we should get the Scooby gang on it.......😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
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NO WAY !!!!!!!!!!!! There just isn't any way that Po would be that vicious, not sweet little Po..... 😕😕😕😕😕😕
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I have to agree with everything that @Daddydavek said.....Levine seems like such a sleazebag(IMO), I'm wondering like everyone else.....What did happen? Did Ryhs witness something? was Levine involved? They say that sometimes if someone witnesses something traumatic their brain will block out that memory making the person unable to remember what it was, is that what's happening with Ryhs? So many questions that need answers so @Laura S. Fox I'm definitely in until the very end, Billy IS freaking awesome !!!!!
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The word zorgon keeps reminding me of Zathura.......
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I was wondering the same thing about the ghost maybe Toby...Levine "seems" like he could be the kind of person that could get rid of someone with no guilt involved on his part. Rhy's comment has me wondering something not so good, I hope I'm wrong.
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I loved it....with the ending like it is it seems that another story about them could be written......
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This isn't the end is it ??????? 😕😕😕😕
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OMG......PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE tell me that we don't have to wait a full week for chap 2......IDK if ill be able to wait that long, I'm completely hooked, I'd have love to see the victory dance that the ghost did that would have been funny. I love Po he seems so sweet and innocent but it also seems he's on top of his game....I canNOT wait for chap 2.
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This story was FREAKING AMAZING I loved it, I feel bad that Jack and Billy were murdered but bad things happen all the time...Emma deserved to die she was way out of control, yes Jack and Billy were no better but she was complete wacko....thank you for sharing this wonderful story.
