Kitt

Sure there is! Try watching a horseback riding lesson where the rider still hasn't caught on to posting on the correct diagonal after more than a year of lessons!

Not being a home at 5 and play on the lawn sort of dad doesn't necessarily mean he is a poor parent either. I don't recall JP ever playing on the lawn at Escorial with Brad, Clair, Billy or Ace, and he was still a pretty awesome dad.

I had forgotten that Matt had tested positive back when his kidneys were being a major issue. You must have one hell of a set of plot notes! Nice to see Wade coming back to earth. Planet Alex was a nice place to visit for him but he has way too much to lose to try living there. Thank you for a fantastic way to occupy my mind on an insomnia night.

Mark has a point! Sometimes it is hard to appreciate walking through the forest when you are beating your way through the undergrowth!

Now how did I know Mir would try mopping the floor and Andy would be the one to stop her? Well done sir, and you found the perfect jumping off place to end this one with the possibility ( I hope probability ) of more. And if the guys give in and call the poor kid peanut, I will personally go on a Grandma Sandy hunt!

There is a fine line point here that no one has looked at. Yes, it probably is a good thing that both Wade and Matt will have to forgive each other before moving on, no matter whether that is to friendship or a more meaningful relationship. But there is a big difference between forgiving, forgetting, and trusting. My gram used to take great pleasure in taking my dates aside and telling them to be very careful when considering actions that might hurt me. Her exact words, and I know this because each and every one of them came back with the same thing, "Kitt will probably forgive you a stupid hurtful action, she may even trust you again after, but she will never, ever forget it."

As I pointed out in a review a chapter or so back - the believed progression of potential infection was Cody > Brad > Wade > Matt. But somehow at least one link in that chain has been broken, possibly two pending Wade's results, so we are right back to the big question. Who could have infected Matt if this is not a false positive?

Wouldn't that depend on who infected whom and when? Brads last time with Cody was right after 9-11 so was about 9 months back.

I cannot speak to the rest of your readers, but I was not really surprised by what we saw as you let us peek inside Wade's head. One thing did surprise me however. " I’m such an organized person, and so deliberate with my plans, that I usually didn’t believe in love at first sight, but that’s what had happened with Alex. From the minute I’d met him here in London, I’d felt an overwhelming attraction to him." This doesn't strike me as love at first sight, more like lust at first sight, in spite of the less than satisfying state of affairs for Wade and Alex. While most people associate the word lust most closely with intense, unbridled sexual desire, it is also defined (Websters Ninth New Collegiate Dictionary) as having an enthusiasm or eagerness for something, to crave. This can be applied to almost any area of a persons life. In Wade's case it is fitting in, having similar socio-economic backgrounds, et al. What surprised me was not Wade's lust for the relationship with Alex, but that he did not recognize it as such, and would mistake it for something deeper. While it might evolve to love eventually, something I find doubtful due to the lack of sexual compatibility, there is a long way to go to get there. Thank you for a great start to my Saturday morning!

OK - I think I may be missing something. I thought the suspected progression of possible infection was Cody to Brad to Wade to Matt. If Brad is negative, that ends the potential infections there does it not? So either Matt was infected by a source yet to be revealed, Wade was and passed it to Matt, or this is a case similar to JP back when Rodger and Mouse were found positive and he was miss diagnosed? As usual you have written a chapter that gets us all feeling and thinking. Well done sir!

I can't for the life of me see how you can top this one, even if there is a wedding on tap for chapter 20! Write faster mister!

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Very interesting. That directly contradicts the information given in the Blood Born Pathogens class I completed three days ago in which saliva is classified as OPIM - other potentially infectious materials.

Somehow Brads attempt to have a strangle hold on the information about Kevin and Cody's HIV status and its implications doesn't surprise me. With Matt, Wade, Stef and by now JP knowing, how he expected to keep it from Will is beyond me! Not to mention Will gets almost as stressed when he knows there is something people are not telling as Brad does. After all the discussion amongst the family on Kevin's behavior, I am a bit surprised Matt didn't tell Cam about the possibility of being HIV+. Thank you Mark for a nice afternoons reading on what has turned out to be a somewhat soggy 4th here on the east coast!

Hmmm - at this rate Benny and Clive will rate their own title. Separate but related stories like Loring Place! Sentimental gangsters? Who knew! Excellent story.

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Now it is. Was it that way in '02? I still maintain it is no one's responsibility but me to protect myself from STD's including HIV. Should an HIV+ be upfront and honest? Hell yeah. Should I blame anyone but myself if I have unprotected sex and contract a disease? NOPE.

Thank you Ron. I got to that point and thought it might be a good spot to let you all know the boys looking for the amusement park finally got home safely!

Thank you Cole! I am glad you liked it.

Isn't that what I was supposed to do? Keep you on the edge of your seat? Thanks!

It all just got too much for Ryker and Carmen.

Thanks Bro! I have always wanted to wander through abandoned old farm houses and the like. I blame it on my uncle buying a 300 yr old farmhouse when i was 6 the whole family went in to explore it the weekend after the closing!

Glad you enjoyed it! The bee's didn't bother me at all, but the oddly clean house did!

While I totally agree in theory - there are a couple things that make me say you are carrying that statement a bit too far. Brad/Robbie was supposedly a committed relationship = no need for condoms Wade/Alex G not to that stage yet - and in light of current events I am sure a sufficient supply will be on hand Brad/Kevin condoms were used Now - as for the rest of that tangled web of sexual relations - about the only ones I can really condemn is anyone who slept with Cody, and possibly Alex D. Anyone who will bareback someone knowing they are as easy as Cody - be they male OR female - is out of their cotton picking minds! Ultimately it was KEVIN'S responsibility to protect HIMSELF. It was not Cody's responsibility to protect Kevin, altho he certainly should be honest and up front about these things. I am sure he had no idea he was positive when he slept with Kevin, and the same applies if it were Kevin who infected Cody. Just an observation here about HIV transmission - while the risk is greatly reduced during oral sex, HIV can be transmitted through saliva. The tissue under the tongue is permeable and the preferred method of administration of certain drugs such as nitro glycerin for heart issues, and can be a source of infection with BBP's. There is always the chance of a sharp tooth creating a break in skin during oral as well allowing an HIV positive participant to infect a partner that way as well.