Kitt
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You do know how to plant the seeds for possible blow ups down the line! I've known cops who were fantastic with kids and those who were just high on the power they think a gun and badge give you. Hank seems to be teetering on the latter. Does she really think she is a match for Will???? Thanks for a quick turn around.
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Interesting to see Will acting his age. We have become so used to his mature behavior it is easy to forget he is 15 and that is how 15 yr olds think. There is a reason it is generally believed that 15 is too young for deciding someone is the love of their lives. As for the one readers comment about adults not addressing the issue of cheating with Will, if they had read all the previous books they would see that most if not all the adults in the story have had a time or two when their morals have been a bit questionable. Glass houses and all of that......... There have been no mentions yet of Jeanine's reaction to Wills emancipation. Perhaps that will be discussed at dinner in Malibu? As usual a fantastic read. Never stop writing!
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As usual an excellent start to the next installment. Your work is quite enjoyable and I look forward to following yet a new twist to the Crampton/Schulter family drama.
