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So why is it I can hear the " dunh dunh" shark is approaching music from "Jaws"? There are so many different spots the offal can hit the air circulation device! Are you trying to stretch our nerves to the limit???? Another addictive and wonderful chapter. Thanks.

Ok, since a missed click posted an empty review on the last chapter I will post my comments here! It may seem odd to add my review such a long time after you published the last chapter, but i have just recently found the sight and am now working my way through. I love your quirky characters and the crazy situations they find themselves in. I find myself reading "just 5 more minutes" till i am late leaving for work or up till the wee hours, So, will we see our little cat getting into more trouble in the future? Thanks for sharing your work

Ok, so Tony has to stay in that closet a bit longer but now he has Will visiting for company. The important thing is them both figuring out how they feel. And why was Berto not such a big supprise??? lol I find myself wondering just how much trouble Dana will make for Tony and Will. I can see her putting 2 and 2 together and then ripping the door right off of Tony's closet. That could mean major trouble for the older boy. Lets hope Wills maturity doesn't pick then to desert him and let his emotions carry him away.

Well finally! It's about time Tony sees the light around the closet door! Perhaps now he can start to peek out a bit more and begin to embrace life. I know the characters are young but life is just too short to lie to yourself about what is it you really want. As for Hank, the jury is still out there. I'll wait and see where you take her and the relationship with Jeanine before i decide if i like the character or if she will turn out to be someone I like to hate. Your descriptions of Rome make me want to see the city, and that is saying something since i am firmly ensconced in an effort to see every state of our own beautiful country before starting on the rest of the world. Your writing is captivating. It has been a godsend over the last few months. Nothing like a good story to occupy time when you can't do the things you want to. Now that i can do again I watch for each new chapter and make the time to read as soon as one appears.

You do know how to plant the seeds for possible blow ups down the line! I've known cops who were fantastic with kids and those who were just high on the power they think a gun and badge give you. Hank seems to be teetering on the latter. Does she really think she is a match for Will???? Thanks for a quick turn around.

Interesting to see Will acting his age. We have become so used to his mature behavior it is easy to forget he is 15 and that is how 15 yr olds think. There is a reason it is generally believed that 15 is too young for deciding someone is the love of their lives. As for the one readers comment about adults not addressing the issue of cheating with Will, if they had read all the previous books they would see that most if not all the adults in the story have had a time or two when their morals have been a bit questionable. Glass houses and all of that......... There have been no mentions yet of Jeanine's reaction to Wills emancipation. Perhaps that will be discussed at dinner in Malibu? As usual a fantastic read. Never stop writing!

As usual an excellent start to the next installment. Your work is quite enjoyable and I look forward to following yet a new twist to the Crampton/Schulter family drama.