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Is it just me that remembers Billy spending time with his dad and the new woman in his life? She was even a substitute teacher in one of his classes for goodness sakes! How could he not know that his mom was the dumpee rather than the dumper?
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Minor nit pick I caught on this re-read...the correct designation is USCGC. United States Coast Guard Cutter. I marrief a Coastie.
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"Cynthia Rella" <<<<<<<snerk>>>>>>>
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Glad you enjoyed it! The big island is one I didn't make it to the three years I lived there.
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Happy Anniversary! Which island are you going to?
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Worried about the intensity Ss'merit regards Kohen with.
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Prompt 367 - Emotion Challenge
Efmaer commented on Valkyrie's story chapter in Prompt 367 - Emotion Challenge
As a 22 year cancer survivor I can say you pretty much nailed the first reaction. I remember sitting there with one part of my mind hearing the grim statistics but most of it consumed with just two words..."Oh fuck!" -
.....AAARRRRGGGHHH!!!!!! I *hate* when you drop a bomb and then we have to wait for a week for more information!
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I can totally empathize with Sam's desire to withdraw from reality. I did the same thing, but it was all internal in that I got lost in books, so the only additional thing I got tormented about was being a "nerd" for liking books.
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Pause, then onto "Discovery"
Efmaer commented on Cole Matthews's story chapter in Pause, then onto "Discovery"
Holy shit!!! -
There needs to be a confused emoji.
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There are actually scientists that believe there are, and always have been, six sexual roles. Male and female heterosexual, male and female bisexual and male and female homosexual. The heterosexual role is of course for species propogation. The bisexual role is to be adaptable and support the tribe in whatever role is needed. The homosexual role is a bit more specialized. A homosexual female will, by her natural choices, never be so pregnant that she will not be able to go on a hunt, or protect the cave site and the tribe. A homosexual male will not be in the competition to get as much sperm into as many females as possible.
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Damned onion cutting ninjas snuck up on me at work. I TOTALLY wasn't crying. Really.
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I am so glad that California just passed a law that the entire state has to offer rescues at pet stores that sell pets.
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Cute story, but I just have to say DON'T shop, adopt! Puppies in pet shops are from puppy mills. If you want to know why that's bad let me know.
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Very nice call back.
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It made my eyes well with tears even though I was at work.
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Well, that was a fucking surprise!
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Mine! Part Two Chapter Twenty-seven
Efmaer commented on Cia's story chapter in Mine! Part Two Chapter Twenty-seven
Oh, fuck... -
I think you might have won with this one. Short, yet powerful and complete.
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Thank you for giving me such great company on a sleepless night .
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Very well done. It would be very interesting to see where they go from here. I can't imagine them not keeping in touch since they developed such a close relationship.
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A Story to Touch the Heart
Efmaer commented on Nephylim's story chapter in A Story to Touch the Heart
I've read this story at least half a dozen times and thoroughly enjoyed it each time. (Even though it makes me cry every single time.) -
I debated "liking" this chapter, as it isn't something you can like in the normal sense of the word. I finally decided to click the button as an accolade to the powerful writing and stomach churning reality built with the words of a very talented writer.
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Not sure how I missed this one, but I'm glad I found it tonight. It helped distract me from a first class case of nerves about Monday. Thank you
