So....493 days since this was last updated. I just finished the second story and was pleased to find out there is a third only to bash in to a metaphorical wall head on.
Any hope of this story being finished?
Okay, third time makes me tweak hard enough I HAVE to say something.
"...flick his tongue across a taunt brown nipple."
taunt
/tônt/
noun
a remark made in order to anger, wound, or provoke someone
taut
/tôt/
adjective
stretched or pulled tight; not slack.
I might be wrong but I don't think that's ominous. I think its normal protocol, letting people know they are about to take off and they need to get the flock out of the way.
I've been thinking of the alleged Captain as Shitstain. Bouncer certainly helped, but Essell absolutely helped induce said shitstain in his drawers. Go Essell!
....ummm...Garjah put a block on the original planet where Essell was found, not their homeworld. As for how they're searching for him? He stole a ship that has identifiable signatures and possibly tracking devices.
I don't think so. "You’re acting a lot like I’m unclaimed and you need to ensure no one takes me away from you.” I think as soon as they complete scenting one another the bond will fully settle into place and Essell will not feel quite as possessive. It will still be there because of the bond, but not as raw and uncontrolled. Just my guess though.
Not related to the story, but hopefully helpful. I work and have worked for call centers since 2005. You have the right to speak to a representative on US soil, and legally they have to accomodate you. Doesn't guarantee someone you will understand, but the odds are better.
This is going to sound dumb, but what movie? Sasha writes so well I'm drawn in to the story full force but have no clue what the source material is. ...and I *SO* did not cry when Keith helped Shiro edit his journal. It was the onions. Yeah, the onions.