Miles Long
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Trevor seems like am old soul; it's no wonder his yang seems a little boisterous. Elegant introduction of our hero and his best friend Lisa. I don't doubt that her temperament is a source of chaos in his life. Thanks.
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Devastating beginning, this is my second read and while I see things from a slightly different view point, I am no less moved by the intensity of Trevor's loss and immediately drawn into the intrigue. Thanks for a great kick off.
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Too funny, their Father didn't make Adam too bright did he? Nice start, looking forward to the rest, thanks.
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Chapter 15: Cousin Interference
Miles Long commented on intune's story chapter in Chapter 15: Cousin Interference
What a web of misunderstanding and false conclusion jumping. All we need now is Matt to throw a wrench in the works and admit his feelings to Lucca. Thanks for sharing your work. -
Uh oh. Jeremy, tsk tsk for making Lucca's life harder. Again my thanks to the author and his team.
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Love is a sticky mess sometimes especially when it's unrequited. You have me completely caught up in this drama, thanks for the emotional thrill ride.
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Chapter 12: Second Song, Jumping Ship
Miles Long commented on intune's story chapter in Chapter 12: Second Song, Jumping Ship
Gulp, Lucca and Sam are swoontastic. Lovely chapter, thanks. -
Food does buy silence, but silence is overrated. Sam and Lucca have a nice dynamic, I look forward to more. Thanks.
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It's taking all of my discipline to to immediately jump to the next chapter, but I had to give kudos for such a good story King Leavin' Me Hangin'. So without further adieu...Kudos!
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Chapter 9: Surprise, Surprise
Miles Long commented on intune's story chapter in Chapter 9: Surprise, Surprise
I think I'm in love with the entire cast of characters you've created here, even Mr. Evans. What will I tell my husband ? -
Chapter 8: Truth and Trouble
Miles Long commented on intune's story chapter in Chapter 8: Truth and Trouble
You are officially the king of ending chapters by leaving the reader hanging . Great read, regardless, thanks. -
Chapter 7: The Trouble With That Is...
Miles Long commented on intune's story chapter in Chapter 7: The Trouble With That Is...
The build up in this story is delicious; I must read more! (Thank you ). -
Chapter 6: Can't Keep Me Away pt 2
Miles Long commented on intune's story chapter in Chapter 6: Can't Keep Me Away pt 2
Okay this is turning I to a mystery of Scooby proportions, what in the world is going on? Really enjoying the character vortex you've created, thanks. -
Chapter 5: Can't Keep Me Away pt 1
Miles Long commented on intune's story chapter in Chapter 5: Can't Keep Me Away pt 1
Jeremy and Lucca working together, this is an interesting opportunity. Your characters are starting to intertwine like necklace chains in a jewelry box. Good work, thanks. -
Our characters are starting to coalesce, it feels like things are going to get really interesting really fast. Great build up; thanks again for sharing.
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Hmm Lucca seems to be in a bit of a mess of his own making. Eager to see how this all comes together. Thanks for the good work.
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New characters to ponder and wonder how they fit into the larger picture. Can't wait to find out more about everyone now. Thanks for keeping me on my toes .
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Lucca's an odd little duck, full of contradictions. He thinks Matt doesn't care about him yet he's there to pick him up, seems pretty thoughtful. Looking forward to figuring it all out. Compelling start, gotta go read more, thanks.
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Clever ending to a witty and fun series. Writing from the perspective of young kids is always hard, but as Meg got older you really captured the truth in her voice. Awesome work Thorne thanks for posting.
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Jacob is a personal disaster without Marcus, and frankly Marcus isn't any better without Jacob. Their love is one of the most redeeming things about them both. Together they are so much more than sum of their sorry romantic lives apart. Really great characters, thanks for sharing them with us.
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Fucking hell it's about fucking time those two twat farts found their fucking testes and finally came clean to one another. Fanfuckingtastic work Thorne, thanks.
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Even after all this time they are still to proud/scared/doltish to just admit how they feel in the present for one another. Engrossing snapshot into one of my favorite dysfunctional couples. Thanks.
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Our relationships with our parents impact our relationships with others in so many ways. I completely understand Marcus' behavior and have always related to him in many ways. Superb craft, thanks.
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Funniest get caught by parents story to date. I enjoyed the look into Jacob's past and hope that Oliver went on to find someone less rambunctious than our prickly hero. Thanks for sharing.
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The banter between them was just a fun as ever, but I have to admit I my stomach dropped when Jacob asked if he could keep Marcus this time. They've come so far but never got past one another. Stellar work, thanks.
