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Happy Birthday!
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Whew Hoo...that's quite an impressive feather in your proverbial cap. Looking forward to doing my part to got you to 20K .
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I find myself in pretty deep denial over Robbie's death, which is why I am so late to respond. I was really worried about how hard Frank would take the news because outliving your children in any capacity real or ficticious is heartbreaking. Lovely interchange between the Schluter men; I fear Brad is a possible wreck in waiting. Will for all his past sins continues to show us this lovely side of selflessness when crisis or tragedy arises; it honestly makes it easy to forgive him for some his more rash actions. I look forward to some deeper insight into JJ, he's got such potential. Thanks for such a compelling read.
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Longest epilogue ever . Although I love long chapters, I think this might have been better served as two separate chapters, but I enjoyed it nonetheless and would have loved to read even more. Quinn's idiosyncrasies made his first time experience a funny read which made it that much more realistic as nascent sex is often pretty humorous. Awesome job, thank you.
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It comes down to this 02/02
Miles Long commented on DomLuka's story chapter in It comes down to this 02/02
Normal isn't all it's cracked up to be and like beauty it's in the eye of the beholder . Enjoyed this chapter quite a bit as Quinn's life starts to settle down and Brenda's meddling may actually benefit Jude rather than turn his life upside down. As always thank you for your great work. -
It comes down to this 01/02
Miles Long commented on DomLuka's story chapter in It comes down to this 01/02
"Whoa...hey, Quinn... why is your mom going into the strip club?" How can you expect one not to giggle hysterically ending such an emotionally charged chapter with that little cliffhanger. Brilliant, simply brilliant, thank you. -
I don't miss high school at all . Seriously though awesome chapter, thanks.
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Grow some balls, Quinn Moore
Miles Long commented on DomLuka's story chapter in Grow some balls, Quinn Moore
Brenda is hard one to figure, she's definitely proven to be more than the draconian "Do as I say" sort of parent she started out as, but she seems to share Quinn's reactionary nature and that's not necessarily a good thing. Anyway, I am completely enjoying the blossoming Jude/Quinn relationship. -
A million thoughts run through my head in response to your well crafted chapter and rather than go on and on I will simply thank you for the quick update and try to keep the tears at bay. Looking forward to more.
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Turn Around 03/03: You win some...
Miles Long commented on DomLuka's story chapter in Turn Around 03/03: You win some...
You are the master of crappy parent characters DomLuka . Thank you for your excellent work? -
Turn Around 02/03: So here we are
Miles Long commented on DomLuka's story chapter in Turn Around 02/03: So here we are
Quinn lives in a drama vortex and I LOOOOVE it ! Must read more, thanks! -
Turn around 01/03: Take what you can get
Miles Long commented on DomLuka's story chapter in Turn around 01/03: Take what you can get
Two thoughts... Quinn coming out to himself was like a huge earthquake and now he's experiencing all the aftershocks big and little a big quake brings. Sharing one's diary is an extraordinary act of trust, I hope Bree understands that. Excellent chapter, thank you. -
The aftermath...Quinn really needs to look harder for his grace; he's still acting like a coo coo banana man. Things in Meyers' office should be interesting. I'm loving the drama, thank you.
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One day Quinn and Bree will laugh that they both were crushing on Jude. Lovely chapter especially the end where we learn a little something about Jude. Thank you for posting.
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No one puts Quinn through the ringer like himself. I guess if Brad had any lingering doubts, finding a very disheveled Quinn and Jude chased them away. Great chapter, good pace, excellent tension. Thanks, as always.
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I'm proud of Quinn, really proud of him. He stood up and shared with Brad, and although he didn't get the response he was looking for he did it. This is where I go back to knowing objectively that Brad's response was shock and not anything else, but the story is so engrossing I can't help but empathize with Quinn's subjective and semi-irrational perspective. A++ work .
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The anticipation to the lunch meeting is just delicious, and how Quinn sheds even more baggage by sharing his locker with Taylor thinking very little about what that might entail. It's those little actions that really give us a picture of the good guy Quinn is and will be again once his identity crisis settles down.
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Married? You write us a lovely little chapter where Winkler finally finds love and he's married...where's the frowny emoticon? . Oh who am I kidding I can't stay mad, this story is too good . Eternal gratitude for your work.
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Taylor comes through big time...YAY Taylor! I wish that I could have a YAY for Brenda, she gives moms a bad name. DomLuka you tell great tales, thanks.
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The dynamic between our heroes keeps getting better and better. I look forward to what happens next...so super grateful I don't have to wait . As always thank you for your work.
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Ah Mrs. Moore, nothing like never being there and when things run afoul, rather than listen, just bark orders. Objectively, Quinn really is making things much harder than they need to...but subjectively I'm there with him holding his curly hair. Thanks for giving me the chance to get lost in your work.
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The Good, the Bad, and the Insane
Miles Long commented on DomLuka's story chapter in The Good, the Bad, and the Insane
The drama continues to be contagious, it's funny how upon the second reading I have so much more empathy for Quinn than I did upon first pass. I love how Quinn's crisis has forced him to rethink some of the things he took for granted with his friends. Awesomeness all rolled into one compulsively obsessive neat freak. Thanks. -
Just when Quinn finally admits it a high school guidance counselor of all people confirms his fears. ARGH! Excellent work, I'm totally addicted. Thank you.
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Marissa probably deserved that a little bit, but hitting Brad was a bad call. I'm completely engrossed in Quinn's struggle; I find myself wanting to hug him and shake him and then hug him again. Great stuff, thanks.
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Quinn is so harsh on himself; it's heartaching to read about his self loathing. I wonder if his best friend Brad were going through what he is if he would be as harsh, my guess is no. I do not envy Jude having to deal with hurricane Quinn.
