Miles Long
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Great chapter. Halle-fucking-luiah a real conversation between Will and Brad and finally some insight to what's been causing Brad to behave so extremely. It's not surprising, Robbie has always been the one person who could decimate Brad's esteem with a stray look in the twink direction. Surprised about Will's teacher's behavior, seems unusual, but it dramatically it works and I think Brad needs to work off some aggression and this guys as good a target as any (not that I condone going off on teachers) . Thank you for your awesomeness!
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Milo's dad is a perfect example of just because you have money doesn't mean you are a good person. In fact, Milo's dad is an awful person, and I don't see him having a successful relationship with anyone if how he treats his son is any indication of what a jerk off he is. Milo has a good plan, turn 18, walk away, don't look back. Hopefully, for Nelson's sake, that walking away doesn't include the whole town. The story just keeps getting better...thank you.
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It wouldn't be Thanksgiving if there wasn't drama; too bad Milo finds himself in the middle, but Nelson will keep him company . Glad things worked out with Haily, she didn't seem like a fair weathered friend and I'm glad she's found solace in Jerry, he seems like a solid guy. Wonderful work!
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Ah Haily, maybe now you can find someone who will appreciate all your you-ness . I'm proud of Nelson for moving clean with Haily even if it was under duress. Milo's reaction as well was a really nice surprise. Not sure I get the loyalty to Jame, though but we haven't really seen him in a good light so I will take it on faith. Yet again DomLuka I am completely addicted to one of your tales. Just super fabulous work, super fabulous.
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I love the progression of this story. I like the characters so much I find myself wishing our heroes had an easier time even though its the conflict that makes this tale so good. Nelson is so cute and sweet and naive and oblivious, I love his realness. It's a treat to see Milo stop hiding and asserting himself with his uber annoying friend. Great work, thanks.
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Halloween, such a perfect holiday! Milo pokes his head out of his turtle shell and its nice to see him not so burdened with angst. I continue to enjoy their playfulness and the dichotomy between them that makes them such a passionate pair. Great work, thanks.
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Nelson has the patience of a saint and Milo, well he can be amazingly caring and then be kind of a stinker, and then be super sweet all over again. Jame is gonna be an issue, I want to feel sorry for him because his acting out seems like a huge defense mechanism, but it's hard when he's so conniving. Brandon Sholer seems to be pretty interested in getting Nelson's attention...I bet there's a there there . Enjoying the hell out of your work, thanks.
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Why can't things be easier for our heroes? Nice work developing the relationship and the playfulness of the dynamic between them. Milo may be intriguing but Nelson's turning out to quite the catch. Holding my breathe through tunnels for them . Thanks for your good work DomLuka.
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My conundrum this morning was work or George, work or George. George won out once I realized I wasting valuable reading time even debating the issue. I am enjoying your view of history far more than when tasked in school and for that I owe you my gratitude. Simply stupendous story ! PS...I couldn't resist the alliteration
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The chemistry between Nelson and Milo is boiling and while I'm giddy for them I worry about Nelson getting his heart broken because Milo is so reserved...so super reserved. However, Nelson's right when Milo isn't being a jerk he is a pretty engrossing character . Awesome work, thanks for sharing.
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Interesting twist on Marie; I did not see that coming in any capacity so good job for keeping me on my proverbial toes. Thanks, as always I look forward to your updates.
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Say what you will Nelson's persistence is starting to pay off. First kisses are always exciting and awkward and special and awkward. This chapter was a lovely example of that. I love Milo's "Which one did you see?" It completely undermines his aloof behavior and really, did Milo actually think offering to kiss Nelson would inspire him to leave? Silly boy . As always thank you for sharing your work.
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Milo I had my fingers crossed and you still acted like a giant P-R-I-C-K! What's that about? Great chapter, thank you. I'm looking forward to Milo explaining himself!
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Nelson has got to be one of the most Quixote like characters I've come across in a while. He's naively romantic and impetuous and will no doubt suffer a few blows from people less whimsical. Fingers crossed its not Milo.
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Nelson is about as subtle as a giant zit on prom night. Trying to vet another's sexuality by asking for a nude portrait of himself, really? But to the story teller's credit, it didn't seem as coo coo bananas an idea then as it does in hind sight . Fun chapter, thanks.
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I am completely infatuated with the world you have created DomLuka. Great job contrasting Nelson's own infatuation with Milo against Milo's obvious annoyance, also kudos for making Nelson's crazy behavior seem completely reasonable when looking at it from his perspective. Wonderful work, thank you.
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Combine Space Mountain, the Big Dipper and the Demon and that captures the thrill ride that is the kick off chapter to With Trust. Truly splendid story telling with the way you gave us just enough insight to the key characters to peak our interest and leave us wanting more and to end it with police intervention...well that's just deliciously diabolical . Thank you for sharing.
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It's been written before but I can't help writing it again, it's the aftermath that rips the heart strings. Brad is really lucky to have the family he has; he needs to remember to let them in and help him through...hopefully Cody is helping to remind him of that while screwing some of the pain away. Jeff was a wonderful surprise, thanks for not forgetting about the supporting characters that help make this story so rich.
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In the past isn’t always in the past
Miles Long commented on DomLuka's story chapter in In the past isn’t always in the past
Taylor is a hurricane of hilarity. He and Luke are just too adorable together and I think Luke has found a new set of friends in his new hometown, which is good as Jude and the gang are a good set of friends to have. Thanks for the good read! -
TAYLOR you're acting surprisingly Quinn like in your floppiness, what the hell?!?! Laughing at myself at how badly I want to shake Taylor and hug Luke. I'm enjoying this story immensely, thank you!
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From the Hamletian beginning to the playful interchange with Luke's kinda brother Rory this chapter kicks ass. I love the connection between Taylor and Luke and the quippy pace makes the story a fun read, or re-read, or a re-read to the tenth power . Excellent work, thanks.
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Two of my very favorite characters together in one super story...YES! I don't care if its not finished, I'll take all the Luke and Taylor I can get. Great start DomLuka, thank you.
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Super interesting take on a story involving coming out. I think having it be from Nick's perspective really added to the poignancy as well as starting to answer Joel's question about what is stronger love or hate. Nicky's evolution and acknowledgement that Joel is his friend before anything else was touching and redeeming after his previous attitude. Good work, thank you for sharing.
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Nana showed a lot of wisdom setting the group counseling up and it was refreshing to hear from Darius about how he feels about his family. The whole brotherly triumvirate was pretty special and enlightening for readers and family members. Still weepy about Robbie, but... As for Elizabeth, she's still evil but she's also kind of sad. It's hard to sympathize with her because she seems to have brought it on herself with her own selfishness. Wade does not have an easy road ahead with that thread. Stellar work, thanks for sharing it with us.
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Thanks for not leaving us hanging with Winkler; I also appreciated the Calvert vignette even though I am dying to know how our man Granger is faring. Excellent work as usual, thank you.
