Miles Long
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How is it that Owen thought he could navigate? Especially at night . Love how Lacy's night with Chris was interrupted so comically. Lots of juicy tidbits to feed my addiction.
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I get upset with my dessert sometimes too . Travis seems to be losing his nonchalant attitude about working for the elder Gordon, not surprising given what an A-Hole Gordon insists on being. Travis and his antics just keep getting more and more addictive. Good chapter, thanks.
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Travis' playfulness is one of the most enjoyable parts of this story. I'm also personally relieved that he no longer has his sights on either Aiden or Owen, who are puttering around in a miscommunication quagmire. Great update, thanks.
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Kyle your good intentions are going to get you a blackened eye . Enough about Kyle and on to the kiss...This was a proper, feet wiggling, butterflies in the stomach kiss. I love how you built up the anticipation in the scene with Travis' cautious boldness and Dennis' guarded nervousness. Just delicious! Top marks and unyielding gratitude .
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Tears blur my sight as I try to express how wonderful this story is without being redundant. Great work having both our heroes facing their demons in their own way. Thanks again for your work.
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"But it’s the one place I’ve ever been with someone who loved everything about me." Simply the most poignant line written, maybe ever . The rich emotional intensity is as enthralling as it is gut wrenching. Truly exceptional writing, Thank you.
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The more Travis and Dennis interact the more it seems like they are a complementary match. Their first kiss was beautifully disjointed and heart wrenchingly interrupted. Writing of heart wrenching Aiden is calling the obvious kettle black if he thinks Owen doesn't want to get back together. Spectacular chapter, it's just too good DomLuka, thank you.
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Travis is living in a glass cage of emotion isn't he? Very similar to Dennis, no wonder they are drawn to one another. In a weird poetic irony way I think that they are both really good for one another and can help each other battle some of those demons. Having Dennis break things down for Owen was also a nice twist due to him providing insight to the motivation behind their previous contentious relations. Superior chapter, thank you.
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It's a relief to know that Winkler and Jacobs completed their journey and are safe (relatively writing of course ). As expected Granger's latest adventures are enthralling and should he make it to Paris they will no doubt be just as engrossing. It was a solid gesture on his part to give Thompson that pouch despite the petty treatment he received, but that's just the kind of upstanding act that makes Granger so admired. I could follow this story forever. Thank you and your team for all your effort and creativity.
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Dennis, Dennis, Dennis, there really is so much more to you, good for you for trying to find it. Owen, despite your x's verbal diarrhea it's not what you think. Aiden, way to make a sucky situation exponentially suckier. DomLuka awesome work, thanks for sharing.
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This story is like peanut butter cookies, too yummy to not just wanna eat the whole batch. Dog napping Valentine and training her to sit? Turning out to be classic examples of Travis hi jinks. Aiden's jealous...Yay! Grateful as always for your work.
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Dennis would benefit from a healthy dose of therapy to help him overcome being raised by such an A-hole*. In fact, Travis may wanna get in on that therapy thing as well. DomLuka your characters feel so real, I worry about their overall well being . Gratitude abounds for your wonderful work. *I'm trying to curb my cussing; we'll see how it goes as the story progresses .
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This story keeps getting better and better; thanks once more for another great chapter.
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There's alway room to be more tired for the right activity . Way to go Lacy setting your sights on Chris for the evening. Owen is just too adorable...how can he and Aiden not be together? I'm enjoying getting to know Dennis with his silent calm compared to Travis and his frenzied ADHD approach to life . Stellar work, thanks.
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The Curious Incident of the Mail in the Night Time
Miles Long commented on Thorn Wilde's story chapter in The Curious Incident of the Mail in the Night Time
Wringing my hands worried about Mark. Great update, thank you for sharing. -
Thanks for the chapter update, although now I find myself dancing on eggshells in dreadticipation for events to come. Figuratively holding my breathe and wishing for the relative safety of the CAP crew.
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Making chairs and sledding, Dennis is really branching out . Enjoying the hell out of Travis' antics, thanks for the great story.
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Travis has the kind of mania that wears me out just reading about him . Seriously, I am enjoying the dynamic between Travis and Dennis and now Aiden as well as the blossoming friendship between Owen and Dennis. Nice work, thank you.
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Travis really does have balls to spare doesn't he . Kyle's passivity sort of sets him up for interpersonal grief and his obsession with Travis is kind of odd. It's nice to see Nicky still has that bull in a china shop way of dealing with folks. Finally Dennis, he really seems to be on the road to redemption as he tries to figure out his life without the oppressive direction of his family. I loved continuing to catch up with friends. Super chapter, thank you.
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I officially love Travis; however, finding that Owen and Aiden have split up it feels like I took Dennis' fist in my gut. It was nice to catch up with my friends from The Long Way. Reluctantly I thank you for a great chapter even though I'm reeling over the O&A split !
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The family storm is brewing as we count down to the big day. From Robbie's words and actions it sounds like things aren't as sound with he and Brad either, too bad it seems they don't realize that happily ever after requires constant attention. and Stef...what happened to you ? Thanks for another update in another great CAP tale. PS More, more, more please !
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I love how Granger usually comes out of the bleakest events relatively unscathed and somehow manages to be not only gracious but selfless putting the well being of his men before dogma or pride. Super chapter, thanks.
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Like a pregnancy riddled with complications Travis Beltnick is born into the universe amid pain, tears and in this case literally blood. Compelling start to the follow up story to The Long Way. Thanks for sharing.
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Touching wrap up to a beautiful story, thank you.
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Heart wrenching reunion full of pathos for Owen and Nicky, yet it ended happily giving them both clarity and closure on their little tragedy of errors and showing Owen it is possible to integrate a bright part of his old life into his new life. Super chapter, thanks
