Empathy

Congrats Kev

Like everyone else I enjoy hearing that people enjoyed what I wrote but I'd love to have a little bit of criticism as well. My newest story has gotten a lot of good feedback in a short time, and sense it's something that I struggled to write I was very appreciative of every comment and review I got.

Hope you have a great time. What's a guy to do without his editor though.

Congrats Big Guy.

Congrats Krista

I usually drop in to check things out from time to time. Been busy writing most of the time I'm on the comp as well as working with the new Committee.

The WSSC: The Writer Support Sub-Committee is in the process of gather members to participate in the Editors/Beta Readers program. You can read a bit more about that program here: Editor/Beta Readers Program At the moment I'm looking for a few members to participate in the Beta Readers side of things. (feel free to sign up to be an editor) The Beta readers will consist of members who can be sent a story before it is made final and posted to the site. These members can give each story a once over as well as an early review. The Beta readers will be broken into groups so that the readers don't become bogged down with the amount of stories that appear on the site. There is no criteria for being a beta reader, other than the desire to read. Anyone who may wish to participate in this please PM me. (Empathy) and title the PM Beta Reader. You can read more about the Writer Support Sub-Committee here: Writer Support Sub-Committe And look for more projects and activity from the WSSC in the near future.

Congrats Nick and Happy Anniversary

I almost feel the same way about the sci-fi section, I don't think it's part of the sites main traffic areas.

Yeah Com is really good with that. I can't wait for Born of Fire. And the Bloodbank should be pretty cool when it launces.

I don't know really some people have thousands of 'friends'. For me it's like an online catalog of hot guys haha. I add hot guys or accept request from hot guys that's pretty much it. I have a personal page as well and on that one I only add people I know.

Ok I though you mean 'legal' in a different way, i was gonna say we should form a line. Sounds like you had a good time. Congrats on the license.

I refer to it as slutspace, and I'm entirely addicted. I have two accounts, one public and one private. private account has 700+ friends my public about 20

He does more than kiss in Mysterious Skin, I thought it was a very good movie.

Well I'd feel sorry for you but you get to go to california and I know you're gonna have a good time despite not taking as much cash as you'd like. I'm 22 and I've still never been to Cali. Eh parent's are weird but you get 800 to spend and will still have 700 more dollars waiting for you when you get back. haha just bought two pairs of forces today.

The problem with diets is that most people don't understand what a diet is. the usual food and drink consumed by an organism (person or animal) a Diet. In the modern sense of the word we take it to mean foods we can or can't eat. And we say we're on the atkin's diet or the south beach diet. Really all you have to do is decide to eat healthy and continue to do so. Not do so long enough to lose weight for summer or before the class renunion, all the time. Whatever method you find that works for you, should be something you stick to thereafter. haha I went off on a tangent. Yeah I hate diets too.

It's difficult to get readers sometimes. Not that I'd know much about it really as I'm pretty new to all this myself. You can put hours of work into a story, and feel really good about releasing that story to the world but it's never enough unless you have readers to give you their opinions.

Hey Jeff I agree, If I have to skip arond it ruins the read.

I agree every writers writes with his own unique perspective in mind maybe subconsciously maybe on purpose. I had a friend read my story a few weeks back and he said that I write they way I talk about life. I'll be honest, I have a pretty bleak outlook when it comes to most things and you can usually see that in my writing, unless I purposely go in the other direction.

well I must say you dealt with it better than I would have. I would have lost my cool I know it.

yeah I agree sex scences should be few and far between in a good story. The sex certainly shouldn't drive the story and it should be well written. I'm actually about to tackle the task of writing my first sexual scene kind of...haha

arg, that would be perfect for Angel Among Them, but I'm afraid the only way I could make use of it would be if I made a webpage to feature my stories and honestly I've only got the two so... If I end up using it I will certainly make sure to notify you and credit you as the artist in whatever manner you'd like.

OMG, I'm actually working on a short story called Angel Among Them and that Image would be perfect. though I'm not sure where I'd use it.

something like this? or

Any help would be great