Sammy Blue

Josh "It's all of this," I said fidgeting a bit. "It’s all of this, Ethan," I repeated, running my fingers through my hair and pulling on it. “You know," I pointed to random objects as if Ethan could see inside my head. "Jacob’s parents, Ian, the farm, Cody, everyone at school, just everything,” I babbled. “Do you think we’re doing the right thing? Jacob and me, I mean. Am I doing the right thing?” “What do you mean?” Ethan asked with a puzzled expression. “What about it you think is wrong?”

This is really great, I can't wait to read more! It's a really interesting idea and I was actually surprised that it was a modern times thing (cars, etc.instead of a medieval setting). Anyway, looking forward to reading how this develops...

Okay, so Shay is on some other planet and Mira is there too. And those evil aliens are there, too. Which means the evil aliens can't be far from earth, considering that whatever planet Mira and Shay are on they had to get there and that means that it seems to be not cut off from earth. Shay seems to be really powerful now... I think I will miss this small, scared boy :S Though I guess he still is a small, scared boy, just that he now has the ability to kill whoever dares to stand in his way... <.< I am kind of worried about what he did back there... Basically executing a bunch of people? I mean, I get that he's angry and stuff, but that was a little cold and extreme... it makes me worry about him and his sanity...

Damn my quota for likes is full for today Anyway, great chapter! I can't wait for Tony to meet the team and all... I can sense some minor trouble coming that way, but maybe a sponsorship from a gay organization might change some attitudes, too. Or it causes extra conflict? Who knows... I wonder where Paul went that night... I kinda feel sorry for him.. he'll freak out bad when he sees Tony...

Sweet! Nice read, thanks for the recommendation. I was kind of expecting to read about Albert figuring out what's going on between Leo and Colt, but you didn't really go into detail there... oh well.. still, nice story!

Yes, it is a little confusing and I wish I could have gone without it, but there is so much happening, I don't have much choice. It might continue a bit like this, but I'm trying to avoid it. :3 Cody and Josh/Jacob... it depends on how much he heard and a bit of lucky guess... maybe he knows even more than we can imagine right now? Who knows... I don't think Ian is suspicious about his identity. Ian is probably just worried about him. He sees that he is acting weird, avoiding his brothers, has changed his personality a little... so he wonders what's wrong... hey, "maybe Jacob's doing drugs?" I hope he doesn't suspect that one Thanks for your review! PS: Sorry for the cliffhanger :S

Heeey! Why did you do it this way? The first half I laughed my ass off and then I got all depressive. Seriously, the first half was pretty funny and even though there was some conflict, it didn't have the usual extent... The second part was just sad. I have seen this coming and I really just didn't like Matt anymore, or so I thought. It was pretty sad to see them go different ways, even though I have known it would happen and actually almost hoped for it. I feel really sorry for Matt. I'd write something more deep and stuff but i'm like on semester holidays and drunk :S Oh and: Happy 1000 Reviews! yay! Sammy Ps: Your writing is awesome!

Haha I know, I'm cruel Thanks for your compliment! Far too few people are commenting on Ethan! We will see what it is soon, I guess... but not in the next chapter. The weekend swap is a risk, but first let's hope they even make it that far.

I'm sorry for the ending! I see your point with the weekend, but it depends a lot on what exactly they do during the weekend. But if they are not very careful, they will cause problems. I guess their best call would be to try to stay out of sight. I guess either way, Josh would prefer a weekend mostly alone with Ethan. We will have to see if that works out, though... Thanks for your review!

Hehe, don't get your hopes too high. But yes, it is getting harder... Cody is probably the smaller problem, though. They can tell him and ask him to keep it a secret. But that wouldn't be as easy with Ian.

I already feel bad for Josh, because of course he is almost like living in a dream that will end at some point. It seems very likely that Jacobs parents will accept Josh as Jacobs brother, but there is still this issue with Josh being gay... who knows how Ian and Conrad will react to that... Ian and Philip might be suspicious, but without a little 'extra' they won't be able to figure out what exactly is wrong... you are right though, it seems harder and harder to keep going without anyone noticing... Thanks for your review!

Thanks! I will try to write quick and upload it soon.

Thanks! I like it this way, too. When I started writing, I really pushed forward to get more action in, but now I really enjoy taking it slow.

Haha Yeah that cliffhanger... ;D Thanks for the idea with the chapter title again!

Josh As I left the clearing, I almost had a little jump in my step. I was so happy. Finally, I was making friends; not only Ethan and Sarah, but now also Cody. Then there was Jacob. He was just awesome and I wished I could be more like him. Right now, my life was good, better than I could have ever wished for. Even my muscle ache and the prospect of it becoming worse after working on the farm this afternoon couldn’t dampen my mood. As I stepped back onto one of the small trails that led back t

Yeah, I know that problem, it seems like that function is broken. :S Looking forward to it!

Really looking forward to reading more! I wonder who will be correct! It's a shame not more people have voted on this poll, I wonder what others think! You should have linked it on your last chapter in the chapter end note. Sammy

You are wrapping things up, eh? I really liked this chapter! Brad is backing off a bit, and Frank was amazing. It's heading for a nice happy ending, even though that sounds weird after 9/11... well, life goes on! However, what I liked most was the part from JJ and the way he changed there. Of course just this one conversation won't make him a different person, but he is headed in a direction that I really like and I hope that we will read more from him in the next book!

I will try my best. I'm usually a sucker for happy ends, though, or at least for not too devastating ends, so I guess we'll be alright.

Thanks! Glad to see you're back to reading, I was fearing we had lost you to the Koreans.

Thanks for your review! I will reply in English, so everyone else can read what we're writing. First of all, thanks for your compliments! As for Josh coming out, I cannot see that happen any soon, at least not willingly. However, Philip seems to have his suspicions... so we will see what happens. That one would not end pretty, though. And someone is bound to find out what is going on at some point. So many people have suspicions on one thing or another already. More than they are willing to realize. Parker doesn't seem to be all that happy about what happened to him and Mr. Fisher, Philip and Ian already have noticed things and a forth person is about to join them in the next chapter... Don't worry about your English! Practice makes perfect!

Hey, here it finally is! I've been waiting since Saturday when I read it on AD. I like it! It's still confusing but it's starting to get clearer. I wonder if Ty is gay, too, or what his problem ist. Considering that it is a gay story, the odds are good! The way that he's going, he will get into serious trouble though. I hope he gets his s...tuff together :3

Thanks a lot! Enjoy!

A nice short story! I didn't find any problems, other than that the first sentence seemed a bit odd to me. Maybe it's because English is not my mother tongue. Maybe it's a missing comma? I don't quite understand it (I get what it's saying, just grammatically it seems confused to me). And then there is the story description: affect/effect. I'm not 100% sure but isn't it effect and not affect? Anyway, nice writing, very short but all wrapped up and complete. Keep it up! Sammy

Yay a new chapter! I was not quite expecting it after the hell that broke lose after the last one. But let's leave all that behind... I really liked this chapter and have nothing to bitch about. I particularly like the relationship between Will and JJ. It's very rare that they even talk, but the way they do... I don't know, it seems so real to me. Despite all their differences and all, they are brothers. That counts even more now, after 9/11. I hope that there will be more about the two of them, now and in the next book. It will never be a major topic, but those small things along the lines are really nice to read. If JJ loses it this weekend I hope that Will will be there for him and that we will get to read about it. Sammy