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  1. Carlos Hazday
    As cavalier an attitude as Brett has towards most things, I've tried to show his love for Ritch is as strong as Cesar's and as both's for CJ. Ritch was a scared kid and look how he's turned out. They're doing something right. I think they'll end up doting on grandchildren.
  2. Carlos Hazday
    LOL I had multiple computer issues this morning. I think they're all corrected now. As for the final scene, that was by design. I wrote two versions simultaneously. One from Brett's POV and the other one from Ritchie's. From the dads side, I wanted to show them visiting Colorado a few times. Their other son stayed in Washington for college so this is new to them. From Ritch's side the purpose is to continue growing Will's relationship with the dads after meeting them in August. Next step's meeting a few more at Christmas I also wanted to establish the availability of the Vail house. Ritch will be there a few times over the next 3 years.
  3. Carlos Hazday
    I think Ritch had to grow up in that aspect since he spent so much time with The Squad. One of those if you can't stand the heat things. I'll have him on fire by the end of the story.
  4. Carlos Hazday
    Ethan will continue to be part of the story. If not before, he'll be back in DC in 2041. I do have a title for his spinoff, but not much else right now. He and the other NYC characters will feature prominently when CJ, Ozzie, and the kids move to the penthouse at 50 United Nations Plaza.
  5. Carlos Hazday
    I've drifted away from HS friends. The last one I interacted with was my best friend growing up when he fixed my broken ankle. I maintain contact with a bunch of college ones, mostly frat brothers.
  6. Carlos Hazday
    THANK YOU!!! If Marvel comics/movies/tv can do crossovers, so can I. These stories are written hoping new readers will join the fold, so I try to assume they know nothing about the older characters, and provide short descriptions to define them. Since the first two spinoffs were Singer and Ranger, their protagonists get at least a mention each. I'll also feature at least one character from Malibu and 2 from New Year's Day in the future.
  7. Carlos Hazday
    Thanks, bud.
  8. Carlos Hazday
    Even when he's a cocky doolie?
  9. Carlos Hazday
    Yeah, but they will continue to reunite on a regular basis. And we know a bunch of them end up CJ's administration. The Squad was brought together primarily by CJ. Ritch will surround himself with cadet friends who most likely will end up posted in different bases. However, just like I recycled characters from other stories who've become part of the extended, recurring cast, I have plans for a handful of flyboys.
  10. Carlos Hazday
    A lot of those family interactions are based on how my brothers and I deal with each other and with our dad. Ruthless is one way of describing it.
  11. Carlos Hazday
    2 chapters this week, both over 6k words, and you want more? LOL
  12. Carlos Hazday
    Brad will have a longer cameo in the near future, stock up on tissues. Thank you, Dugh. I recently mentioned to someone binge reading all CJ-verse books that my writing had evolved since the original story. I'm glad you, and hopefully others, feel I've improved. Lots of work and regular spankings from @Mann Ramblings.
  13. Carlos Hazday
    I need a vacation. Today started with computer problems and the day has been a total waste. Let's hope I can get on my Harley and ride away from Florida for a few days sometime soon.
  14. Carlos Hazday
    Soon after starting college at the University of Florida, both my nieces had fake IDs. Their sorority had the contacts.
  15. Carlos Hazday
    In case anyone's interested in reading more about A Home for Warriors...
  16. Carlos Hazday
    On the last day of 2020, even though Ethan Feldman had returned to New York City, every bedroom at Everhope was occupied. Ritch had spent the night and so had Chipper and Thiago. Another Squad member, Thiago Baravento had attended Walls—School Without Walls High School’s in Foggy Bottom—and was one of CJ’s oldest friends. A single father of an eighteen-month-old boy, he was about to enter his final semester at Howard University’s College of Pharmacy. “Hey, guys. I’ve got something to tell y
  17. Carlos Hazday
    I say we slip him a weed gummy. That should loosen him up.
  18. Carlos Hazday
    Have you been peeking at my chapter descriptions again?
  19. Carlos Hazday
    His work as a former president, particularly with Habitat for Humanity, has proven his heart is bigger than most. Even if he used it to lust.
  20. Carlos Hazday
    Fucker wouldn't say. Some bullshit about a gentleman not kissing and telling.
  21. Carlos Hazday
    Standing around for hours on end, particularly if it's really cold, is not fun. By never being a Biden supporter I hope you mean voter. If we can only support the work of someone we vote for, we're destined to perpetuate the cycle of acrimony and blame that has paralyzed our country in recent times.
  22. Carlos Hazday
    Liz will live on in their hearts.
  23. Carlos Hazday

    Chapter 33

    Carlos Hazday commented on Mann Ramblings's story chapter in Chapter 33

    I'm innocent!
  24. Carlos Hazday
    Let's see if this clears it up Aba temporarily moves to Georgetown to await Ritch Ritch arrives in DC - Owen and CJ stop by for lunch CJ and Owen fly to Australia - Ritch drives Aba to Everhope Christmas in DC for Ritch, Australia for CJ & Owen (I should have provided a link to Ripper Christmas) Family foundation meeting once CJ and Owen return from Australia New Year's Eve at Everhope Because I've written about the family celebrating Christmas before, I did not want to repeat myself. I sent almost everyone out of town and dispensed with the actual holiday with one line.
  25. Carlos Hazday
    I recall returning home from college for the first time and spending more time with friends than family. I tried to balance it for Ritch, but decided to parade a bunch of Squad members to create group dynamics with him. He always had a good line here and there but now he's on a more equal footing with them.
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