Carlos Hazday

Finally found the time to read this, and I figured out what's coming. Shit's really going to hit the fan soon, and I want a front row seat. Send me the rest of the story now so I can beta read it?

Vodka and lemonade. Didn't make it to the third cocktail. Ended up crashing early. I'm moving starting yesterday and I was exhausted.

It's been a horrible week. I normally write in the mornings, but I've been typing away since supper. Best damn therapy in the world! Anyway, I'm in the middle of a scene where BRB, I need a cocktail. Let's hope I remember to come back, it'll be my third.

What? I don't. At least not anymore. My current MC is a skirt chasing slut.

LMAO- It's ranked as one of the top law schools in the country! Anyway, this all happened before it was renamed for Scalia.

What comes first, The egg or the chicken? The MC or the plot? Gary's correct when he says they go hand in hand. Particularly with my stories leaning on real events and places, sometimes the plot comes first. Say a football game I want to highlight for whatever reasons. The characters fall in line, experience the event, and provide dialogue appropriate to the story. Other times, it's the character who leads. In my current story, the MC starts as a teen but his maturing has led me to create situations where he can display his changing persona. More and more, I just write and hope readers enjoy what I produce. Screw the methodology and what anyone else says is right. Luckily, @Mann Ramblings keeps me in line.

Have I mentioned how much I've disliked Senior as I've read? The chickens are cool. Parker's descriptions are vivid enough I may have sweated a bit when Rick was fixing the busted pipe. Once again the author gives us an MC we can't help but fall in love with.

@wildone I hope Jack would have approved my stealing Brock from his Baked Beans story. I wove him into my little universe, and he'll appear in another story soon.

I recall snippets of the story as I read, but I left no chapter reactions before, so I must have read it before I became a GA member or on another site. My appreciation of Jack's writing is common knowledge; I've praised him frequently and went as far as stealing one of his characters and giving him a prominent role in one of my stories. I've shaken hands with Presidents and Vice-Presidents. I've seen Sinatra and Springsteen perform live. And yet, I regret never meeting or chatting with Mr. Scribe. His settings are believable (often real life ones) and his characters relatable. His dialogue might be a bit different today, but when this was written, it was spot on. I've tried to emulate his approach by not focusing my stories on romance, but allowing it to be part of the greater picture. Jack's work is thoughtful and entertaining, what else could an author strive for? With 100% chance of rain today, I can't even go for a walk or a jog. I think I'll spend it finishing Life's a Grind. I strongly suggest you try it. You'll like it! Thank you, Cia, for featuring my favorite Classic Author.

Just looked at the word count. Wow! No wonder you stressed over finishing the chapter. Hope the next one's under control. @WolfM If you haven't been reading, as soon as you're home from saving Purple Flame Winery from the wildfires, you should tackle it.

I see Jimmy keeping Sawyer away from Fergus until the next moon and trying to help through the first shift. If Sawyer has eveN a trace of lycanthropy in his blood, he'll be the first victim to survive the change. After, Jimmy can concentrate on taking over or starting a new pack whit whatever's left after the coming bloodbath. Nicely done. Are you changing anything so I'm wrong?

LMFAO Owen, like Harley, was one of those secondary characters readers liked as soon as he was introduced. Let's see if you're still Team Owen by the end of the trip.

From Cadet's prologue. I hope to start posting on January 1, 2021.

LOL Dragon came first, and Rash was created with the break up in mind. Dragon's a player and I wanted someone like him to balance out all the damn monogamous characters. If you mean pot smoking, it will be clear what he does in a couple of chapters. CJ's not a saint, that I can promise.

The patience you exhibit in recounting the details is admirable. However, not knowing who the rogue was and whether Sawyer will survive trumps your skills. We need answers!

Thank you, Todd. Things have changed significantly for the GLBT community since those times. You're right, it's been both good and bad and I draw from real life when writing. I'm glad you enjoy my work.

There's a full coffee mug with my nephews' picture on it by my right hand. I always have to turn it, so they can't see their uncle nekkid writing stories. Y'all forget I live in South Florida; it's too warm to wear much. Thanks for the assist, Steve

Between his father, Rita, the Brewers, and Kohler's ghosts, Rick can't catch a break. The poor man deserves some light in his life.

Way to turn up the heat! Who's the bIg, bad wolf? Come on, you can post the next chapter now! Let's give Sawyer the link to GA. Plenty of silly, mushy, bodice-ripper, MM stories here.

G’day, y’all! Can you tell I’ve been writing something with an Aussie and a Southerner as the main characters? Who cares, right? After all, you’re here to read what other authors have to say. I’ll shut the heck up for now. ҉ ҉ ҉ Which author/poet (alive or dead) do you identify with most, and why? ҉ ҉ ҉ @BDANR I'd say Essex Hemphill. His work moved me with its rawness, activism, and he elevated other marginalized, talented authors not seen as having a story worth hearing. He's unapologetic in his delivery, imagery, and leaves a lasting impression on whoever reads his work. He is one of my biggest inspirations and influences my own artistry. I only wish I could've known him, but he passed when I was still a toddler. It also didn't help that he lived on the other side of the country. ҉ ҉ ҉ @lilansui I have more than one, because I am constantly searching for inspiration. First, I do lean a lot on Paulo Coelho for words of comfort. Manuscript Found in Accra is a favorite. He has a way with words that makes me nod and agree no matter the occasion, and I think that's powerful. His books are great for when I'm feeling my soul is a little battered. When it comes to writing inspiration, I find it in manga-kas. I love manga and how insanely creative it can get. My first and forever inspirations came from creators like CLAMP of Legal Drug and Maki Muramaki of Gravitation. They got me writing my first fanfiction. The list gets long from there, all I can say is that I could spend hours reading manga because it entertains me on such a basic level. It can get obsessive. I love discovering strange concepts that sort of open new worlds to explore. There's nothing impossible in a manga. You just need to level up, 😉. I can obsess over genres I come across, when their characters take a grip of me and won't let go. This can also turn so obsessive it morphs into full blown research and character write ups. 😆🤣 My latest author obsession is Mo Xiang Tong Xiu. She writes great suffering and enduring love. 😎🙈 And now, I have decided that this is a tough question to answer. So many authors stick with me and I want to mention them all. Why only one? hahaha ҉ ҉ ҉ @lomax61 I’m choosing to answer this question in terms of the author’s writing style, body of work, and characters they’ve created - and not as the person themselves. When I first aspired to writing gay fiction, the gay authors I read tended to be serious fiction writers, the likes of Edmund White, Alan Hollinghurst, and Paul Monette. You know, the kind of fiction where you have to pay attention and often have to go back over a paragraph to make sure you understood what the author was trying to say. Not a style to which I was ever going to aspire. Thankfully, I soon stumbled upon Armistead Maupin and Joe Keenan, both who not only have a unique sense of humour, but whose gay characters are never tragic, and are mixed up in stories with plots that are fun to follow, if at times a little absurd. At the same time, I discovered the very English Patrick Gale, whose style of prose I continue to admire (but who is far more fearless than me when it comes to subject matter). The author that brought me out of the writing closet, so to speak, was Josh Lanyon with the Adrien English series. Finally, I thought, an author of gay fiction who could write believable and relatable gay men with all their quirks, foibles and insecurities, but men who are still essentially men (very different men, admittedly). Moreover, one of them is not simply a pronoun shift from she to he (as happens with all too many female authors of commercial MM fiction). The Adrien English series is still my go-to favourite when I want to settle in an armchair, kick off my shoes, and lose myself in something warm and familiar. Around 2015, when Josh came out as a women (Diana Killian, I believe), I felt as shocked and betrayed as the rest of the MM reading community. But at the end of the day, good writing remains good writing, and I love the readability of Lanyon’s prose, the light touch of her humour, the way she builds her mystery plots around her main characters, gives them brilliant dialogue, and never loses sight of them, growing them along the journey. I even love the way she has me invested in minor characters. So the simple answer wrapped up in my long-winded response is that the author I identify with most is Josh Lanyon. ҉ ҉ ҉ @northie An interesting question which can be taken in all kinds of directions. I'm sticking with the 'author who's influenced my writing the most' angle. I often seem to kinda cheat with these questions where one, and only one, answer is permitted. So what's new... In that vein, I'll present a runner-up before I settle on the main act. Pat Barker is best known for the Regeneration trilogy which looks at an element of WW1 from a very different angle. She comes from north east England (like me) and that comes through in her writing, whatever the actual subject. It's difficult to put a finger on - language, style, outlook on life, but I know it when I read it. That's what I'd like my writing to be like, and to match her spare, characterful prose. My main act is Susan Hill. You'll probably know her best as the writer of The Woman in Black. It's an excellent, scary ghost story with heart-stopping moments achieved with an economy of style. (Spot a trend?) She writes about ordinary people and allows us into their thoughts and actions. Even the worst offenders in her detective novels see 'normal' to others as they so often do in real life. My favourite novel of hers is Strange Meeting. In one tiny corner of a WW1 battlefield, she creates a quiet, profoundly moving meeting of two lives. A friendship deepens, broadens, until you wonder whether in another age the two men would have become lovers. Then one is killed and the other wounded and you're left to ponder. ҉ ҉ ҉ @ObicanDecko I definitely don't mean to sound presumptuous and imply the quality of my works matches that of these authors, but just in terms of subject matter and style, I identify myself with Lloyd Alexander, who wrote fantasy (mostly aimed at younger audiences), specifically The Chronicles of Prydain; also there's James Hilton, whose adventure/fantasy novel Lost Horizon always inspires me, and it definitely had an impact on my short story The Island of Poa. I find their ideas refreshing and original, and their style of writing enjoyable and easy to read, which is something I aim for in my stories. ҉ ҉ ҉ @Parker Owens I find it hard to choose a single author with whom to identify. There are many I admire, others I might wish to emulate, others with whom I might find common life experiences, still more with whom I’d like to share a long weekend lunch. Bring them all together at once, and the room might get very crowded indeed. W. Somerset Maugham comes to mind. Here is a writer who believed his own work to be labored and mechanical, as I have often felt. Yet I have come to admire his variety and prolific output over decades of work. I have a number of his books still on my much-culled shelves. Robert Louis Stevenson is another I can take to heart, if only for our shared weakness as children and similar birthdays. I still smile at his Deed of Gift, in which he gave his birthday to young Annie Ide of St. Johnsbury, Vermont, who, “… was born, out of all reason, upon Christmas Day, and is therefore, out of all justice, denied the consolation and profit of a Proper Birthday ….” He, too, was an exile of a sort, though he felt the need to go all the way to Samoa. And then there is the composer Alexander Borodin, who wrote brilliant and beautiful music – symphonies, operas and exquisite chamber pieces – all while teaching and doing important research in chemistry and medicine. I empathize with his dual passions in creation and education, in science and in music. His story inspired me as a young man to try writing in my own spare time: first music, then fiction. It is a tragedy his untimely death cut short such a marvelous musical output. This list could be a lot longer, but I fear I may have already tried the patience of GA readers ҉ ҉ ҉ @Timothy M. I had a hard time answering this question. At first I didn't understand it, but Carlos gave me this explanation: What author do you like so much they influence your writing or you try to emulate them? So then I spent a while trying to come up with author names and reasons why. I've read a lot of stories in the past 50 years, and there are plenty of authors I enjoy reading and admire for their skills. But I don't identify with any of them. To me, the idea is absurd. The main reason for this reply is I would never presume to compare myself with real authors or pretend I could live up to their example. I'm simply not able to say I want to write like this author, or identify the 'technical' reasons why I like their stories in order to emulate them. And this includes all my favorite authors on GA. The only way I can manage to improve my writing is via the hard work of my editors and input from my readers. What they praise or approve of, I try to keep doing. ҉ ҉ ҉ @Valkyrie I can’t think of one author I identify with the most, but there are several throughout my life I would say I identified with for one reason or another. When I was a teenager, I read a lot of poetry and the work of Sylvia Plath really spoke to me. I was pretty dark as a teen and struggled with depression, so I identified with the darkness of her writing. I would also say Piers Anthony, since I love a good play on words, and his entire Xanth series is basically one pun after another. I also identify with Tolkien and his love of language. Language is something that’s always fascinated me. I actually spent a summer once translating and learning Tolkien’s runes and Elvish language with a friend of mine. When I went to college, we wrote letters to each other in runes and Elvish. Unfortunately, I’ve lost the skill throughout the years. ҉ ҉ ҉ I don’t know about you, but I had to google a few names after reading the responses. A couple of things were added to my reading list in the process. On a serious note, I really, really need questions. How about helping?

THANK YOU! I last traded emails with Marc last year. I sent him an early copy of RIpper Christmas since something he sent me inspired the title. It was fun to weave Tyson into my series.

That still doesn't account for his mother dying and him not knowing. He was gone 3 days. Period. Impossible for his mother to have died 3 years before. He would have still been living at home. There's another inconsistency in this chapter. D'gar claims a fuzzy head partially from not having eaten the whole day, but he ate at least two meat rolls when he went to get klah while waiting for his friend to wake up.

Yep, You're right. CJ's decision might not have been the same a week, a month, or a year later, but at 15 he wanted to avoid publicity. The fathers could have interfered, but they've been allowing the kid to make decisions on his own and spread his wings.

I wanted the killer to remain unknown exactly because of what you say. The idea of Indio being taken down either in revenge by a cop or as prevention by another thug. Hope you enjoy the coming twists.