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Carlos Hazday

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  1. Carlos Hazday

    Team Adam

    Suspicious much? The fact Chipper and Bliss have been playing hide the salami may have something to do with it. We'll see where this is going in the next two chapters.
  2. Carlos Hazday

    Team Adam

    You once mentioned a 7k word chapter felt short because it flowed so smoothly. I took the comment as a great compliment. Not sure I'll write any than long again, I'm trying to tighten up the story telling, but I promise every other story I have either already written or in the works has chapters longer than 1k. I may revisit the approach, but it has to be the right story for it. I thought it worked for Singer.
  3. Carlos Hazday

    Team Adam

    Thank you! Let's see if I can keep it up
  4. Have you tried moon drop grapes? I saw them yesterday at the grocery store, bought a bag, and it's half gone already. Delicious!
  5. Carlos Hazday

    Team Adam

    LOL SPOILER- Chipper makes it to the finale. You get to stick around to the end this time LOL Hell, I already named the artists making it to the final four!
  6. Carlos Hazday

    Team Adam

    Thanks, buddy!
  7. Carlos Hazday

    Team Adam

    Seven more chapters. The story will conveniently finish posting the day after Thanksgiving in the USA. Not that I planned it that way or anything...
  8. Carlos Hazday

    Team Adam

    Where you in class? Did your students see you sweat?
  9. Carlos Hazday

    Team Adam

    Agreed! The pregnant pauses before winners being announced in all competition shows drives me NUTS!
  10. Carlos Hazday

    Team Adam

    LMAO - You do realize I have a surplus of like 5 words over the first 20 chapters right? I think I'm still safe. Instead of parroting the usual crap artists say about the military, I had Chipper make it personal. By referencing his two friends, the significance of his birthday, and agreeing to go out with the Marine, he avoided sounding insencere. Maybe Chipper's attorney knows of someone willing to break legs? Oh, wait, Tonya Harding tried that and got in trouble.
  11. Carlos Hazday

    Team Adam

    Thanks, Chris- I thought the tune was catchy and when I looked at the video, I felt it was a cautionary tale about the dangers of fame and fortune. It was a good example of Chipper's drug use taken to the extreme.
  12. Carlos Hazday

    Team Adam

  13. Carlos Hazday

    Team Adam

    “We understand you have a message for a fan.” The producer interviewing Chipper sat out of camera range invisible to the television audience. “I do.” Chipper had suggested she ask him the question. “A corporal stationed at Marine Corps Base Quantico reached out with an invitation, and I’d like to respond. “I’ve talked about my close group of friends before—The Squad—but what I haven’t mentioned is a couple of them are military veterans. One served in the Navy and another in the Army
  14. I trust you, Steve. And since you only have to deal with me once a month, I don't think you'll mess mine up.
  15. Carlos Hazday

    Social Media

    After the shows over with, he can go back to posting nudes... They may just enhance his popularity! LOL
  16. Carlos Hazday

    Social Media

    Technology in general, not only social media, has altered our lives in way few people could have envisioned. Sooner or later we'll adapt but caution should always be practiced when on line. Thanks for the praise
  17. Carlos Hazday

    Social Media

    Since Tijuana keeps coming up. you and @Wesley8890 should take a look at this story from @Mann Ramblings
  18. Carlos Hazday

    Social Media

    Thank you!
  19. Carlos Hazday

    Social Media

    Thanks! I try to round out the characters and show different facets of their lives. There's more to Chipper than just his voice.
  20. That one was too obvious. Chipper likes the old tunes, but Empire sounded like more his speed.
  21. Yep... definitely not a nice guy LOL You may not want to wait standing up, you may get tired. The next Squad story is only halfway written and won't post for about six months.
  22. Carlos Hazday

    Live Show

    Thanks, bud!
  23. Carlos Hazday

    Social Media

    Thank you for validating my fiction! LOL Few people realize participants in reality shows sign away a lot of rights to be on the air. And it's not only TV shows. Anyone climbing The Vessel at New York City's Hudson Yards agrees the owners of the structure have the right to use any pictures taken from it and share in public. Without remuneration. It's similar to the user agreements for apps and other software, they have us by the balls without alternatives.
  24. Carlos Hazday

    Social Media

    Big Brother's watching whether we like it or not. Even when we distance ourselves from social media, someone else's posts can get us in trouble. If we don't want risk the possibility of getting in trouble, we have to be very vanilla about how we behave in public.
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