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  1. Carlos Hazday

    Mary's Place

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    @Jaro_423 I'm certain you'll figure out the reason I had the helicopter crash quickly. One of those life-changing events.
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    Growin' Up

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    @Jaro_423 I know some people download chapters so they can read offline. Maybe something to try? As you can figure out from other comments, having Brett's helicopter crash did not win me any fans LOL Hopefully you've figured out what happens by now.
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    That feeling permeates the story. They might argue and fight, but the love always wins in the end.
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    GMA XII

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    Chapter 10

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    She's still a bitch and deserves pain. Also, she must be Canadian. She keeps saying 'sorry.'
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    Chapter 9

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    A little pregnancy, and she changes her tune? Doubtful. If she doesn't want to keep the rug rat...
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    Chapter 8

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    One of these days I'll find time to string enough chapters together. On to the next one.
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    I've heard that before. Seems I close one story arc and open two. But I guarantee I eventually close them all.
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    @Jaro_423 Mr. Google is always helpful. Did you ask him? I guess it's an American brand.
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    Wait until you read the chapter about traveling in Israel.
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    Cautious Man

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    @Jaro_423 Thanks and thank you also for the typo corrections. Takes me a bit to fix since I'm taking the opportunity to correct comma placement at the same time. Lots of those to fix now that I have a better idea of how the rules work. LOL
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    @Jaro_423 Got your PM and will deal with that issue in a bit. I try to use sex scenes to advance the story. Detailed when I think it's important enough, summaries and off-camera when secondary.
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    @Jaro_423 I drew heavily on my own experience visiting many of those places during a 2009 trip to Oz. I fell in love with the people and the country. You draw the result I intended about Brett's change of heart. Interacting with Owen on familiar ground helped him realize the man was okay.
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    @Jaro_423 Thank you! I tried to use concepts I believe in and thought CJ would echo. Not sure if I mentioned this in a previous comment, but I borrowed the structure from a dance song. LOL Owen will be around for a few more chapters.
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    GMA VII

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    Thanks for reading, bud
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    GMA X

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    GMA IX

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    GMA VIII

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    GMA VII

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    @pvtguy Thanks, Tony. I share your desire. If I had their money, I'd be jetting off everywhere too.
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    GMA VII

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    That's okay, you can be the first man in history to give birth. No drinking, no smoking, and healthy eating for 9 months or more aren't on my bucket list. And let's not even talk about childbirth. I'm NOT into pain!
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    GMA VII

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    Thanks, Dan. Unlike many other young men in gay stories, I wanted CJ to have a strong support system so he wouldn't turn into one of those shy, introverted, anguished types. His outgoing personality is a result of his fathers' grooming.
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    GMA VII

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    Hey! All I did was order the turkey baster from Williams-Sonoma...
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    GMA VII

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    You're welcome!
  24. Carlos Hazday
    @Jaro_423 Google Maps is our friend! LOL To this day, even when I'm writing about places I've visited, that app serves me well. In some cases, I end up moving up and down the block using Street View to catch details. Readers seem to enjoy my travelogues.
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    @Jaro_423 You're correct. I did try to recap a few things and will do so again a few times. Even while binge reading, the cast grows, and I want to make sure readers remain familiar with characters who'll be around for a long time.
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