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Uziel

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  1. 20:30. Watching the telly. Wishing I could do something more useful.
  2. 17:00. Just woke from a nap. I should be reading.
  3. It's a poppy song. I've heard lots of times. But it doesn't bare that much significance about gay rights and such to me.
  4. Summertime Sadness by Lana Del Rey. This sound is captivating. It's the first of its kind for me since Adele's Set Fire To The Rain.
  5. 13:48. Digesting my lunch. I got LOADED on the Sunday lunch.
  6. Happy Birthday, mate. Hope you have a cool one:). *bro hug*
  7. Uziel

    Chapter 1

    You're a good writer. I'm already... Well, snagged on this. You captured Jason's thoughts well. Looking forward to the next chapter:)
  8. Uziel

    Chapter 2

    This is good. And no, I don't mean the tumor. I mean the story. It's pretty captivating and thrilling:). Good work, Nephylim.
  9. Uziel

    Father's Day

    This is just sweet. It isn't sappy as these type of stories sometimes get. It was really enjoyable. Thanks:)
  10. Hello everyone! Welcome to the site:)
  11. Usually, I like the sex much later. When I've kinda understood the characters. But it's fine here. And hot. And Ben's/your bolloggese sure is tasty:P
  12. Okay. So, I'm here. I've finished reading the whole chapter. And I'm reviewing.. I like. It's realistic and the characters, especially Mark is captivating. It's the first chapter, so I'm expecting more fun.
  13. Harry Potter!!!
  14. I don't know what that was, but it's horrible. I saw the expression on Will Smith and his family when she did a bend over and it was shocking. It was hilarious.
  15. Uziel

    Chapter 2

    Okay. He's back. Wondering how that's going to go for the both of them in the long run, with Birch being angry and all. I'm like the drama and exciting. Looking forward to the next one:)
  16. Uziel

    Chapter 1

    Eleven, it wasn't just you, anyways:). So, this is the first alternate earth, fantasy I'm reading here and...it wasn't a let down. In fact, the first chapter is pretty good. Apparently, you're already wildly popular, as shown by the number of people following the story. I like the whole big picture & idea. The only thing is the difficulty ascertaining who's telling the story . Good work:)
  17. Uziel

    Chapter 1

    Okay. I'm drawn. I'm looking forward to the huge New Plan. Good first, chapter, though:)
  18. Uziel

    Chapter 2

    I'm glad you've posted the next chapter already:). That said, I noticed some... things. ‘what kind of a benevolent god would send my into a hell hole like this?’ I think you mean ME and not MY? Also, I've noticed that you use a lot me adjectives, and prepositions (example: anyway, though and a lot of so's). It's not all bad but too much of everything is bad. Okay, I think that's it for now. Moreover, I enjoyed reading this chapter.
  19. There aren't a lot of those here. But I sometimes see artistes MIMING in the street trying to selling their album. I hate those...
  20. Okay. I shower twice a day, usually. When school's in session, I shower at 6 am and then between 6pm and 10pm. When school isn't in session, I don't shower till 9am and then 7pm.
  21. Happy Birthday, Adam. Hope you had a good one.
  22. Happy Birthday, Grim:). Hope you had a good one?
  23. Hello, yourself:). Hope you find whatever it is you came here for:).
  24. Uziel

    Chapter 1

    I like this! I haven't read anything like this here. Really. It's good. And it's different. I like the quality. I'm expecting more.
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