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Gyah... i can't wait till the next chapter... I am about positive that Eddie won't die. But you really never know with Dom. So he could be burried in the next chapter. And i totally agree with Ann on the whole "if anyone will die it will be Aaron" issue. But i also agree with her last part... the bastard will redeem himself... because i just dont see Dom leaving him as TLS. So there you go... and also i think we will get 2-3 more chapters of this... you never know how many Dom has hidden away some where... so yeah. later ~ nick

Okie Dokie... Great story Dom you are my hero... that was a b*tchin chapter though. I had never felt some many different things in such a short period of time before in my life.

Great Chapter Dom... Great Chapter. Let's see what can i say that hasn't already been said.... I predict that DD will end at 37... and if it id true and you like numbers that are factors of five then i will say 40. The reason i think it will end at 37, is because next chapter finish up the week (35), the chapter after that tells of him going back to nevada to find that nothing is the same and that he has made a mistake and he returns to arizona (36) and finally in chapter 37 dom raps everything up by giveing everyone their happily ever afters. But honestly, we all ahve to face the facts, the end is drawing nigh... Yes i know it burdens me with grief too. Ok Prediction Time 1. We will find out i n the next chapter if rory stays or goes. I am almost positive that he will go back with his grandma and meet his step grandpa. He will return to school and see that his friends have moved on over the summer because they didn't think that he would be back. He will be miserable with out his best friend Luke there to tell him that he is doing good and comforting him. He will of course miss his beloved boyfriend. Also he will realize just how much he cares for Eddie and Jase, Thus resulting in Rory's return to Arizona. 2. I think Aaron will come back, so Dom will have to tie up the lose ends with him, that way we aren't left with a "That's All" thought. 3. I believe that if Dom knows how to play his cards (and believe me i think he does) he will not give Luke the happy ending of finding any one and there for possibly making a spin off all about Luke and his POV. About him finfing true love. 4. I also find that Dom will do some more detail to Seths character by making him trip out before Rory goes. Seth will freak out and beg Rory to stay... This will be the way that Seth will tell Rory that he loves him... Just like in the rest of Dom's stories, there is always a moment were Dom puts those three little words in for the first time and it gives you joy for the characters. So... This was a long winded post... i just had all this stuff to get off my chest and voice my opinions. So as always... Thank you Dom for putting out another great chapter. later ~ nick

Firstly... I LOVE <3 WT!!! I love the way that Dom has set everything up, and the way that Nelson has the upper hand on Milo, by knowing about the naked painting of him. I do have to say though that i get a feeling that Caleb might just have a little more than just friendly feelings for Nels. Caleb has to be my favorite character in this story. He seems that he cares for Nelson in a way that no one else does and i think that is really sweet. I am still trying to decide if i want Milo and Nelson to hook up though, because i don't know if i really like Milo that much. I think him and assface would be a great couple... that is if they are not already a "secret" couple. Because there is never hardly one with out the other. Just thinka bout it... Milo takes up for assface all the time anyway. I agree with LittleBuddaTW, on this matter. I really hate assface he is up there with Aaron. They are both pricks. But I think i shall run away and start the CNITE group... Caleb & Nelson In The End!!!! I REALLY LOVE THIS STORY DOM!!!! later ~ nick

I know some one else has already posted this, but it's from Dom's first story, The Lo(n)g Way, Chapter Ten: Surprise!. Every time i ready it i smile and blush in a way that i never have before. I just think that it is so sweet and romantic. It makes me wish that i could find some one.

Nope i have first dibs, because i have never had sex. I'm a virgin.

My thoughts exactly, Philistine, i figured that she was sick or something was wrong. Maybe her house got destroyed by a fire or something. A very good point jack727. Even though she wanted Rory to live with Eddie because he was also gay or for any number of reasons, she still wants to be close to him and be part of his everyday life. So maybe possibly she will move to Arizona. Or she could be there to finnaly give Rory closure on his life back in Nevada and explain what could have possible happened to his friend or any number of things. But again great chapter Dom. Major props later ~ nick

Author: Nicks_a_Writer Email : nicks_a_writer@hotmail.com Story Name: Out There Link: http://nifty.guiltygroups.com/nifty/gay/hi...hool/out-there/ Genre: Modern Chris Swanson is your normal closeted 16 year old that attends you normal high school. He has never been kissed by another boy. All this changes when he meets Basketball Hero and School New Guy Brady Williams. Will love make a slam dunk or will it foul out. Story Code: TT The Story is still in progress please add this story. Thanks. later ~ nick

Deifnately Evil, , because he doesn't care for anyone but himself. He is also self centered. even though he does have tough parents that doesn't give some one the right to be treat everyone else like sh*t. later ~ nick

i'm not following anything later ~ nick

They are gone and are becoming SRITEs. :nuke: And for the few of you that are LGAITEs, just because Grandma Alice reared her ugly head doesn't mean that Luke is runnign away with her. later ~ nick

Turely amasing chapter Dom I was not expecting that plot twist at the end. All i know is that Rory is going to have some decission making comeing up in the next few chapters. And come on we all know that Rory will stay with Eddie, Jase and Luke. And of course he is going to stay for his boyfriend. But i know that he will make the choice on his own, or he will not have matured any at all if he don't. I am wondering the same thing as Rabble_Rouser. But great chapter Dom, it was awesome. I loved what you did with the Luke/Rory/Seth situation. later ~ nick P.S. I love Seth

OMG I can't believe you ended like this. I really dont know what to expect next, you always amaze me with you writing dom. I really dont know what to say you have turned our world up side down with that whole Luke likes Dave scenario and then to throught the twist at the end of the chapeter where he could still have feelings that are torn between both Dave and Rory. All i can say is that is just not fare the way you doing us dom, just not fare. I used to be 100% LRITE, but i am in love with seth my self , you turned him into a too good character and i never want him hurt... so i just dont know what to say any more dom, you have rendered me speechless. But do you are super and i want chapter 33 by no later than wednesday, because i fear that i will not be able to make it that long without know what the heck Luke is going to say. I also have to agree Redone I totally agree. But i loved this chapter and can't wait for DD 33. later ~ nick