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“Did you two hook up before I got here? Be honest.” Not a question I would have asked in a text message - how do you assess their credibility?
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I could argue that given the family he grew up in, Orel must be fluent in the ways of fine dining. (And one could counter-argue that if that were true, he wouldn't be wearing a pizza delivery uniform). We'll know soon enough.
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These Finn Grady stories get better and better. Thanks!
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Thank you for this. My biggest disappointments with GA are unfinished stories, to the point that I won't read in-progress stories from authors with a lot of unfinished work.
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While obviously no one would want to marry someone who cheated in the days before the wedding, I don't see it as Lyn's place to tell Bella - his loyalty is to Brad right or wrong, and Bella is a stranger. I would let Brad know how I felt, strongly encourage him to tell, then end my involvement. Not sure how I'd feel about Brad going forward, but a lot would depend on his faithfulness after the wedding.
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I'm a reader, and I just want to see more of what you are already doing.
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I've been reading this stuff since I had to wait for my modem to connect me to AOL so I could access Nifty. Gotta say, this is one of my top five stories of all time. I anxiously await every chapter. Thanks!
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I think the coach should be able to explain to Joel why he needs to join the team. He loves baseball, and clearly misses it, yet is unwilling to go back to his old town/school/team, leaving only one good solution. Just play at the new school, and if he wants to sit out games with his old team or whatever, figure it out. Joel has conflicting wants and needs, but instead of tackling the uncomfortable decisions, he does nothing.
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Is Tommy really turning into Jonah, or is he just responding appropriately to Jonah's outgoing and humorous personality? Giving as good as he gets?
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What a great chapter. Thanks! Angry me wants Jack to send a thousand copies of his parents' letter to their country club. Practical me wants him to forget they exist, and the sooner the better.
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Act III - Holding Out For A Hero
wallycleaver commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act III - Holding Out For A Hero
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I hope Nick uses the photos to blackmail them next time they want Jack to come home for a "holiday." Really enjoying this story - one of the best I've read in a while. Thanks!
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"The Best Year" is one of the stories by which I judge all others, an all-time favorite. Great to see another long (hopefully) story from Krista - Thanks!
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It feels like with every chapter, there is less reason to continue the centuries-old enmity between Skai and Nave. Couples are forming, everyone gets along, people on both sides want to be friends with each other, nobody wants war. Plenty of reasons for optimism, and I can't wait to see how it all turns out. What a great story - thanks!
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I've loved this story since the first chapter of Book 1. This is the first one that was so good I read it twice. Thanks!
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I'm a grateful Granger fan, not a long-suffering one. Nine books, thirteen years, almost 400 chapters. Well-developed, consistent, likeable characters. Historically accurate action contributing to fantastically interesting plotlines. These are the gold standard stories by which others are judged. Happy New Year!
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I have fantasies about Dexter walking under a falling piano. He's irredeemably loathsome.
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If I ever need a criminal defense attorney, I'll know just who to call. Great story so far - thanks!
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Did Todd have a reason? Weren't they strangers? And if Todd, why did he let Killian go? If I had to guess at this point, and assuming it's a character we know, I'd go with Killian's father, who might have spared Killian. Either way, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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I can't help thinking Jake and Danny are rushing things by leaving now, before Danny finishes high school. Hanging around for a year (or not even) would solve the school and age of consent issues, and since Jake can live anywhere, it wouldn't have to break them up. To me, this is the age where it's critical to get at least enough education to be able to get a basic job if everything goes sideways. Great story - thanks!
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I'm really enjoying this story, and I'd be most happy to see it continue in one form or another. I don't have a strong preference about ending here/new book or just continuing this book. That said, I can see a couple of advantages of the end/new option, which I think opens up many opportunities. Book 2 could be about Carter and Jeremy during their time apart. Or, Book 2 could be Jeremy and 3 Carter. Then a book about them reuniting. But regardless, a 40-chapter book, or 2 at 20 chapters each - no real difference to me. I appreciate the effort you're putting into writing a great story.
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These people are incredibly toxic. I guess Carter is the protagonist, but even he's questionable. Please don't take this as criticism - I can't stop reading!
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I have mixed feelings about the premise that Andrew did something wrong in "purchasing" Matt from slavery. If you were walking down the street and some degenerate tried to sell you a baby, wouldn't you buy it first, and then worry about the best course once the baby had been moved to safety? This is a great story, with a different plot from most - very much looking forward to seeing what happens. Thanks!
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I've missed this story a lot, so I'm happy to see it back with a rewrite. So far, so good. Thanks!
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And maybe her companion will become Calvert's beard as well.
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