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“Did you two hook up before I got here? Be honest.” Not a question I would have asked in a text message - how do you assess their credibility?

I could argue that given the family he grew up in, Orel must be fluent in the ways of fine dining. (And one could counter-argue that if that were true, he wouldn't be wearing a pizza delivery uniform). We'll know soon enough.

These Finn Grady stories get better and better. Thanks!

Thank you for this. My biggest disappointments with GA are unfinished stories, to the point that I won't read in-progress stories from authors with a lot of unfinished work.

While obviously no one would want to marry someone who cheated in the days before the wedding, I don't see it as Lyn's place to tell Bella - his loyalty is to Brad right or wrong, and Bella is a stranger. I would let Brad know how I felt, strongly encourage him to tell, then end my involvement. Not sure how I'd feel about Brad going forward, but a lot would depend on his faithfulness after the wedding.

I'm a reader, and I just want to see more of what you are already doing.

I've been reading this stuff since I had to wait for my modem to connect me to AOL so I could access Nifty. Gotta say, this is one of my top five stories of all time. I anxiously await every chapter. Thanks!

I think the coach should be able to explain to Joel why he needs to join the team. He loves baseball, and clearly misses it, yet is unwilling to go back to his old town/school/team, leaving only one good solution. Just play at the new school, and if he wants to sit out games with his old team or whatever, figure it out. Joel has conflicting wants and needs, but instead of tackling the uncomfortable decisions, he does nothing.

Is Tommy really turning into Jonah, or is he just responding appropriately to Jonah's outgoing and humorous personality? Giving as good as he gets?

What a great chapter. Thanks! Angry me wants Jack to send a thousand copies of his parents' letter to their country club. Practical me wants him to forget they exist, and the sooner the better.

Best chapter yet. Thanks!

I hope Nick uses the photos to blackmail them next time they want Jack to come home for a "holiday." Really enjoying this story - one of the best I've read in a while. Thanks!

"The Best Year" is one of the stories by which I judge all others, an all-time favorite. Great to see another long (hopefully) story from Krista - Thanks!

It feels like with every chapter, there is less reason to continue the centuries-old enmity between Skai and Nave. Couples are forming, everyone gets along, people on both sides want to be friends with each other, nobody wants war. Plenty of reasons for optimism, and I can't wait to see how it all turns out. What a great story - thanks!

I've loved this story since the first chapter of Book 1. This is the first one that was so good I read it twice. Thanks!