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I've loved this story since the first chapter of Book 1. This is the first one that was so good I read it twice. Thanks!
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I'm a grateful Granger fan, not a long-suffering one. Nine books, thirteen years, almost 400 chapters. Well-developed, consistent, likeable characters. Historically accurate action contributing to fantastically interesting plotlines. These are the gold standard stories by which others are judged. Happy New Year!
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I have fantasies about Dexter walking under a falling piano. He's irredeemably loathsome.
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If I ever need a criminal defense attorney, I'll know just who to call. Great story so far - thanks!
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Did Todd have a reason? Weren't they strangers? And if Todd, why did he let Killian go? If I had to guess at this point, and assuming it's a character we know, I'd go with Killian's father, who might have spared Killian. Either way, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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I can't help thinking Jake and Danny are rushing things by leaving now, before Danny finishes high school. Hanging around for a year (or not even) would solve the school and age of consent issues, and since Jake can live anywhere, it wouldn't have to break them up. To me, this is the age where it's critical to get at least enough education to be able to get a basic job if everything goes sideways. Great story - thanks!
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I'm really enjoying this story, and I'd be most happy to see it continue in one form or another. I don't have a strong preference about ending here/new book or just continuing this book. That said, I can see a couple of advantages of the end/new option, which I think opens up many opportunities. Book 2 could be about Carter and Jeremy during their time apart. Or, Book 2 could be Jeremy and 3 Carter. Then a book about them reuniting. But regardless, a 40-chapter book, or 2 at 20 chapters each - no real difference to me. I appreciate the effort you're putting into writing a great story.
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These people are incredibly toxic. I guess Carter is the protagonist, but even he's questionable. Please don't take this as criticism - I can't stop reading!
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I have mixed feelings about the premise that Andrew did something wrong in "purchasing" Matt from slavery. If you were walking down the street and some degenerate tried to sell you a baby, wouldn't you buy it first, and then worry about the best course once the baby had been moved to safety? This is a great story, with a different plot from most - very much looking forward to seeing what happens. Thanks!
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I've missed this story a lot, so I'm happy to see it back with a rewrite. So far, so good. Thanks!
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And maybe her companion will become Calvert's beard as well.
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This story gets better with each new chapter. Thanks!
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If you had asked me 6 months ago, I'd have said I wasn't interested in stories with supernatural characters like vampires, werewolves, etc. Somehow I got engrossed in this one, and now I find that it's my favorite story/series. Apologies to GA if they've had to increase server capacity because of how often I refresh looking for a new chapter.
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One of my all-time favorites. It's at the top of my list of stories I'm hoping get resumed at some point.
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I've enjoyed every chapter so far, and the pacing seems just right
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A Saturday in the Country
wallycleaver commented on JamesSavik's story chapter in A Saturday in the Country
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This is one of my favorite stories - thanks for the new chapter!
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This has been one of my favorite stories on GA, and seeing the new chapters prompted me to start it from the beginning. If anything, I enjoyed it more than I remembered. Thank you so much for writing it - I hope there's a lot more to come.
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One of my favorite stories - great to come home to a new chapter. Thanks!
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Etalos has got to be in there somewhere, don't you think? This is one of my favorite stories, and the idea that it's going to get a lot longer makes me happy. Thanks!
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I was disappointed when WAR ended after Dustin's World, but then it came back for one more story. I very much hope that happens again. Either way, thanks for eight very enjoyable stories.
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I started reading this story last night and just finished chapter 5. Really enjoying it so far, and I'm looking forward to seeing how this relationship develops. Thanks for writing.
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The Light in the Darkness
wallycleaver commented on jkwsquirrel's story chapter in The Light in the Darkness
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I don't have any pearls of literary wisdom to impart, except to say that I'm really, really enjoying this story. Thanks, Nephylim, and Merry Christmas.
