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Uh, guys, I'm smack dab in the middle of Memphis, and I can tell you this isn't real. I'm shocked at the responses to the article. Tennessee may be the sociopolitical asshole of the whole country, but we're not that bad.
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It's All Downhill From Here
Aaron Penrose commented on Percy's story chapter in It's All Downhill From Here
This was so sweet. I love how you resolved everything. Truly a great story. -
Internet blessed me today!
Aaron Penrose commented on asamvav111's gallery image in Members' Album Gallery
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Alright, guys. My last thread here garnered me all sorts of sage advice I have since incorporated into my writing, so now I'm back to pester you all with more questions! After weeks of letting this insane imbroglio of ideas steep, I think I'm finally ready to put pen to paper (or, more appropriately, fingers to keys) and start writing. But I'm concerned because my two prior attempts at novel-writing failed miserably. I lost interest. I started feeling like it wasn't going anywhere, I was expressing my ideas poorly, and the whole thing was trash. In the short story format, I can have a sin
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Percy, I love this. Let me be the first to say it: damn, what a title! This is easily my favorite title I've seen on GA thus far. It's straightforward and it has a great ring. That said, you're doing a fantastic job characterizing with the scenery and all the climbing terminology. You've got a lot of good stuff going on here. I find Aaron to be quite compelling. I'm interested to see whether his heart is with Seth or with the thrill of the climb. The setting is incredibly vivid and beautifully depicted. I'm intrigued. Can't wait to hear more about these two.
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Prompt 309: No Second Chances
Aaron Penrose commented on Aaron Penrose's story chapter in Prompt 309: No Second Chances
Oh, I'm the meanest of the mean. My boys usually have to go through the wringer before they get to have any fun. This Carver guy is new to me but he is proving to be a fabulous muse. Self-absorbed rich pretty boy turned scarred angsty social pariah? All over it.I love that you were able to sense the silver lining in all this. He definitely needed to see the accident scene himself--not to count his triumphs (too early in his recovery for him to be anything but bitter), but simply to accept it, I think. To understand that he can't go back with any amount of surgery or wishful thinking. Thank -
creative Prompt #309 - Creative
Aaron Penrose replied to comicfan's topic in Writer's Circle's Peeks & Prompts
Didn't abide by all the rules here, but this was such a good prompt. It got me out of a mean bout of writer's block. My take: https://www.gayauthors.org/story/aaron-penrose/aaronswritingprompts/3 -
“Little brother, I don’t mean to sound insensitive, here, but don’t you think it’s about time for you to, just… get over yourself?” My mouth fell open. Silence lapsed. Andrea sighed loudly into the receiver and I jerked my head away. The static-y noise was amplified tenfold by the new hearing aid. I’d have to speak to my doctor about adjusting it again. “Look, Carver, I’m enjoying these lengthy phone calls—really I am. It’s nice to get to talk to you for once. And I’m sorry you’re having so much trouble adjusting to life with facial scars. But you can only wallow in all this misery for so l
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The River Ran Backwards
Aaron Penrose commented on Aaron Penrose's story chapter in The River Ran Backwards
Thank you! As far as the police thing goes, I'm almost certain a missing child elicits an almost immediate response from the police, no? Especially if that child's parents were to claim he was unstable and a potential threat. In any case, I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and thank you again for the kind words. -
Quotes, scare quotes, and thoughts
Aaron Penrose replied to knotme's topic in Writer's Circle's Editors
Oh. Slightly less confused. Do you mean making a show of it as in surprised to see her? Perhaps "..around the corner and raised his eyebrows when he saw her." -
The River Ran Backwards
Aaron Penrose commented on Aaron Penrose's story chapter in The River Ran Backwards
Well, thanks. I'm just, uh, you know, glowing with pride now, lol.In my writing, I've found I have a strong impulse toward capturing the essence of change. Those redefining moments are so rare, and so very essential to our natures. To know I have captured it in writing makes this feel worthwhile. Thank you again--that meant the world. -
The River Ran Backwards
Aaron Penrose commented on Aaron Penrose's story chapter in The River Ran Backwards
They weren't failing for lack of trying! I wish I had had a little more time to go back and add more information about his parents, like an overheard conversation, or more inner dialogue, but alas. Thank you for the compliment and for reviewing. -
The River Ran Backwards
Aaron Penrose commented on Aaron Penrose's story chapter in The River Ran Backwards
Thank you--that's high praise coming from a great writer like you. You know, I never really stopped to think about how much I loved the Mississippi until I wrote this. It has been outside my window for a very long time, and it's rare that I pause to admire it. Hopefully there will be more to read about him soon! -
The River Ran Backwards
Aaron Penrose commented on Aaron Penrose's story chapter in The River Ran Backwards
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. -
Quotes, scare quotes, and thoughts
Aaron Penrose replied to knotme's topic in Writer's Circle's Editors
I'm confused by the first example. What is it supposed to imply? The scare quotes confuse me. Must know context. I think it would read better without, personally. Or if the writer is trying to say he 'saw' her in the sense that he instantly took in her entire physical appearance, why not just say that instead of trying to denote the idea with scare quotes? If that's the idea, I'd change it to, "...around the corner, and (immediately/just/then) devoured her with his eyes" or some such. Definitely italics for the second example. -
What is your highest education level? Do you want to go back to school
Aaron Penrose replied to W_L's topic in The Lounge
Academia has always been a breeze for me. I have an insanely photographic short-term memory that allows me to pretty much memorize walls of text within minutes. I have a 4.0 two years into college, and I have never once studied for a test, or even begun a paper any more than one single day before it was due. My retention is atrocious, obviously, but damn my superpowers come in handy. I put myself through a lot of sleepless nights with my procrastination habits, but so far it hasn't come back to bite me, so whatever. Anyway, yes, I think education is extremely important. I absolutely love c -
I read this and then read the first two installments right away. I love these two, and I love your depiction of their relationship--very realistic. All three of them are compelling. Even though Mark made mistakes, you show us he isn't all bad, and you do a good job of justifying his flaws. Sometimes our natures are just plain mismatched, and things can't be fixed, now matter how much we love someone. The storm was a good analogy for the end of their relationship. Looking forward to the next one.
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Great story! I was hooked from the first line. This is my first time reading your work and you can be certain I will read more. I thought the chase was a good way to simultaneously create intrigue and in-depth characterization. I love the concept that deep down, Miah enjoys being hunted. I think you should stay with his POV to explore the psychological aspects of that predator/prey relationship more; you could take that much further. I also think it's entertaining to learn about the shifters gradually through Miah's eyes, since he's a more tangible (and human) character.
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The River Ran Backwards
Aaron Penrose commented on Aaron Penrose's story chapter in The River Ran Backwards
Haha, so glad I reeled you back in. Thank you. -
The River Ran Backwards
Aaron Penrose commented on Aaron Penrose's story chapter in The River Ran Backwards
Thank you! I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. I've also lived close to the river my entire life, and it never ceases to inspire. -
muffins yummmm
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The River Ran Backwards
Aaron Penrose commented on Aaron Penrose's story chapter in The River Ran Backwards
No, thank you for the compliment! I'm happy to please. -
The River Ran Backwards
Aaron Penrose commented on Aaron Penrose's story chapter in The River Ran Backwards
I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for reviewing. I put a lot of work and even more of myself into this, so your kind words mean the world.