Caz Pedroso

A pained whimper snapped Simon’s attention away from the hiding cubs and back to the adult. Now he took more notice he saw the adult held one paw off the floor. He moved closer slowly and started to hum a tune his mother had used on their farm to calm the animals when they were nervous. The cat watched his every move but didn’t seem like it was going to pounce and rip him apart. Simon reached out for the affected paw, still humming. “Let me look. Come on sweet thing. I may be able

The brothers all love each other, but I think sometimes they react without thinking. I'm sure Silas will make sure Toby gets a good telling off when they've calmed Daniel down. I think I actually remember writing this chapter. It was originally over the word count and I had to keep cropping sentences untill I got it down enough. Thanks for the comments

Carlos has a hard, thin path to tread. Push to hard he could lose Daniel. Don't push at all and he's not helping Daniel. He'll need to move slowly and carefully. Thank you for commenting

I'm so sorry I missed this comment. If I could I'd like to hug all the boys, they tug at the hearts strings I'm glad you liked the chapter. Keeping things under the word limit can be a challenge, but thats why I like it. Thank you both for the comments

Thank you for continuing to read. All the boys pasts will be revealed, it won't be pretty, but it will be the start of recovery for them. Thank you for all your comments

Just downloaded it on KU, I'll look forward to reading it after work Good luck with the competition

Beautiful timmie. It creates a very stirring image. And I too think we should never forget.

Thanks Tim, the cat is one I looked up on internet. I just hope bookmarked the page I think all parents want soneone to watch the kids do they can escape for an evening Thank you Def... I like doing the unexpected Thanks timmie Thanks Gary nope not giving anything away here Glad you liked it Nephy The characters and scene were given to me by one of @Cia's games. I love the inspiration that can come from her ideas for author games. Thank you everyone for your comments, they mean a lot. To those if you who commented back in March I am so sorry it took me so long to reply. I did read them all I promise, then I intended to spend a day replying to everyone and then it got put off and then...well you the picture. So, again i'm soory and I will try to do better. s to all...

I try to only touch on it briefly. Most of what I know I have found out by asking friends about their experiences and looking online. The only shrink I saw when I was young didn't go well. Thank you for the comments

Thank you

Well, i could tell you but...I'm afraid you'll have to wait and see. Thanks for the comments

Enough people questioned ages that I decided to put them in. The boys are based off one of my favourite TV characters. Thank you as always for your comments

I like to give my readers as much freedom as I can to imagine the characters as they want them. And I am reading your comments, I promise. Thank you for reading, and commenting

Yes, he would have been. Although, as the others said, it is a shame Danny had to suffer to save his brother. Thanks for the continued comments

I'm glad you're enjoying it

All will be explained

Sending 's my friend.

As always well-written timmie, hope everything did/will work out

Nightmares are bad whatever the cause. This poem speaks to me of Hope and Love and Safety. So much said in so few words. (Sorry for late comment, just catching up)

Happy Birthday

Thank you I'm glad you liked it. It was a hard chapter to write to find the right balance.

Gad this helped. That's the problem with posting as I write, I have to do add in chapters. If you see other things I missed feel free to point them out, I will attempt to fix as much as I can.

His plan was thwarted. The sort of man he is doesn't like that. And if he managed to fake an ID once he can do it again

I'm glad you like it so far, I hope you like the rest. Toby can be cocky and overconfident, but his heart is in the right place. I'm sure he'll learn

I too got the characters muddled...a lot. Timothy and I had our work cut out trying to make sure and mistakes still got through This was my first time with so many characters to keep track of. I hope my next attempt will go a bit smoother.