Caz Pedroso

It was needed, but Casey, Jamie, and Andrew would have never asked for/demanded his death. They haven't got it in their characters. Sam was definitely better off dead, for everyone's benefit.

LOL, all this time and rereads and I never saw that. Thanks, TIm, as always your comments help a lot. Glad you're liking it Emi, Yes Tim pointed out that mistake too, it is being changed

I think Sam is the one who needs to be worried. It's a good idea to always make sure your employees know who they're meant to be kidnapping.

I like how Andrew developed as a character. His mate really brought out the best in him and gave him the confidence his parents failed to provide.

Thanks Emi, your continued comments are heartwarming

your comments are wonderfull

for reading and for commenting

Growling can also be very sexy when they as far as Andrew's possessiveness was modeled on my husband Mark. He's an easy going guy and avoid confrontation at all costs...except when it comes to me and Alisha. Someone tried to tell me my writing was wrong, against God (you get the idea ) and Mark laid into them (Verbally i hasten to add) and then he threw them out of our house and we changed churches the next week. Possessive equals protective

I joined GA in December of 2013 after following a link from @Cia's blog. My first comment on site was February 1st, 2014, on A Gay Christmas Carol by @Bill W. I have found the site the friendly and welcoming to everyone. I posted my first story in March 2014 and I haven't looked back since. The comments and support I have received here have kept me going through many writer's blocks and I have learnt many new things. The forums have been a godsend to me. The friends I've made on here have seen me through some bad times and there is always someone online willing to lend an ear. They've also been willing to forgive when I put my foot in my mouth and forget to turn on the filter between my brain and the keyboard. Thank you to everyone involved in creating/supporting/working on/and anything I've missed to do with the site. I am grateful for this site and don't know how I would have developed as I have as an author if it wasn't here.

Sorry for the delay in replying, I really am going to catch up I'm so glad you enjoyed this story. This was my first story that i finished in one go. I felt Ben needed to have the opportunity to stand up to Ian to help him move forward from what happened to him. And as for Adam finishing him off? Well, I had to leave something for the mate to do. Ian had to die, i just wish i could have come up with a more painful way...but...maybe next time Thanks for the comment

Carlos Carlos sat on his bed and dropped his head to his hands. This was not how he’d hoped to finish the evening. He’d planned on allowing Toby to cheer Daniel up and then after they were alone again he’d planned to try and seduce his boy. Nowhere in his plans did he allow for Daniel wanting his brother to stay. Idiot, of course Daniel would want his brother to stay close. Silas was out of reach, he’d want his only remaining family close. Why couldn’t Daniel want him close instead? The boy

You paint a very vivid picture with your words, moggy

Clicking like was hard for this one. But, I may not 'like' the feelings this invokes, but the very fact the poem invokes such strong feelings shows how good it is. You know I will always be here moggy, drop me a PM anytime and I always reply as soon as I can.

Toby When Daniel turned and pressed his back to Toby's chest Toby wrapped him in his arms and held him close. “I honestly don’t know what I did wrong.” Toby felt Daniel take a deep breath and he could hear the tears in his brother’s voice. He held him tighter as he continued his story. “Silas was right in what he told you. Carlos and I had sex. He was so gentle with me. I felt cherished and wanted. For the first time in my life, someone wasn’t using me just for their pleasure. Carlos t

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I think the hardest part of any job that involves helping people, is realising you can't help/save everyone. It must be devastating and I'm sure the losses stay with the people much more than the wins. Thanks again for the comment

Very well written sean

Wonderful...I'm still waiting for the evening to read it to Mark hope to read more when your muse strikes again

I agree with the others. Being alone in a crowd, whether on or off - line, is a horrible feeling.

Daniel “I’ll have to find a way to thank Carlos for organizing this.” Daniel passed another hot chocolate to Toby to set on the tray. “I think it was Tara’s idea actually. All Carlos did was call her ‘cause he was worried about you. She was the one to remind him you had more than one brother.” Daniel winced and felt guilt rise. He’d been so busy missing Silas he’d barely spared a thought for Toby. It had been just him and Silas for so long he was still getting used to having two b

A complete picture in only a few words. Wonderfully done, Sir.

Aww, well I'll think of you while i sit in front of the computer staring at a blank document Lol.

Morning everyone... Bank holiday here so no work today. What about you @Jsgo? Do you still have to work or are you working on something else today? @mogwhy moggy, hope you got/get some sleep.