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Thank you, Drew/ That was such a nice complement. I'm pleased you're enjoying the story. Thank you again for all of your support and your wonderful reviews.

It would be interesting to see the ones responsible for the flauros being on the planet locked in a room with them I hope you enjoy chapter 18 Thank you for reading and your reviews. I appreciate each one.

Chapter 18 Merrick could hear voices around him, but wasn't paying attention to what anyone was saying. His sole focus was on the broken body in front of him. Jenson was so pale and unresponsive. The hand Merrick held was cold. “Where the hell is that damned medic?” he yelled, angrily wiping the tears from his eyes. “Get him here NOW!” Someone entered his field of vision and knelt beside him. “I need you to move, Commander.” The medic’s voice was firm as he moved slightly in front o

I adore Nelson and Nelson and Eric together are incredibly sweet. I love how they used Maria and Tony as a guide for what is an acceptable level of PDA (well up to the sitting on someone's lap part lol). The fact that they are more open means they're both more comfortable with their relationship and the reality of being out in the school. Nelson would have been fine on his own, but I know he worried about Eric. Great chapter Tim!

It's funny that both twins decided to get involved in the BDSM culture. I wonder if its a family thing? It sounds like Daniel's brother is quite a spitfire. Is he submissive as well (I guess he would have to be if he was hired by Tara with his brother) or just very protective? Tara sounds like a force to be reckoned with as well. Maybe that so called 'Dom' needs an hour alone with her? Of course Tim would be excited about twins

Sounds like this 'Dom' is a just a bully with a whip. I'm glad he was stopped before Daniel was too badly hurt. I can't wait to see what Oliver does to the idiot.

And some choices can break your heart... I agree with tim, the only thing we can control are the choices we make, not the choices that people around us make, even if they do affect us (sometimes with terrible consequences.) Life is nothing but choice, and people need to get better at accepting responsibility for the choices they make. I think you captured that here. Wonderfully done, Gary.

lol thank you tim. Working on the next chapter now, so hopefully there won't be too long of a wait. Thank you for reviewing and your support. I appreciate it

No, I don't think whomever is responsible for the flauros being there will enjoy the consequences. Thank you for reading and for your review, Def. I appreciate your support.

I think it will be personal for them. It'll be interesting to see what happens when they find out who caused this. I can't wait to find out myself Thank you for your review and all of your support, B. I appreciate it

lol. I'm working on the next chapter, I promise. Thank you for your review and your support, Val.

Story interruptus? That sounds like quite a painful affliction. It's funny, I didn't actually plan this chapter to end the way it did, the story just took a turn that I didn't expect. I promise not to keep people waiting for too long if I can help it. Thank you for all of your support, Gary. I appreciate

Story interruptus? That sounds like quite a painful affliction. It's funny, I didn't actually plan this chapter to end the way it did, the story just took a turn that I didn't expect. I promise not to keep people waiting for too long if I can help it. Thank you for all of your support, Gary. I appreciate

Thank you, Puppilull. I'm glad you think it was worth waiting for Thank you for your review and your support. I appreciate it.

"non-pounding"... it sounds naughty when you say it like that. lol Working on Chapter 18 now, so hopefully there won't be long to wait. Thank you for your support and your review, John. I appreciate it.

You're welcome, Onim, and thank you for taking the time to leave a review. I'm really happy to hear from you. Hopefully the chapter updates will start to come regularly again now that the holidays are over.

The attack actually came a surprise to me too. I was writing and it just happened so I went with it. Reeling surprisingly good. It means you're invested. Nothing could make me happier than that. Thank you for your review and all of your support, Drew. I appreciate it.

Chapter 17 Jenson rubbed his tired eyes and yawned. It had been a long evening on patrol. He could hear one of the drones passing nearby, although he couldn’t see it through the trees. After the last attack, his father told him a contingent had been deployed from Anglia, along with a team of hunters. The hunters were trained in the trapping and capture of a large number of deadly species from different worlds. They would try to secure the remaining flauros and relocate them back to thei

Well I'm glad you warned me to read this chapter in private There was so much love in this chapter. The love between Jacob and Russ was the most obvious, but there was also the love between Evan and Chris, the twin love and even the love of brothers in law. When Chris called Russ his brother my heart melted a little. The entire interaction between Russ and Jacob was beautifully done. Jacob isn't afraid to be vulnerable and needing validation in front of Russ and Russ isn't afraid to be strong and teasing with Jacob, They compliment and strengthen each other. Their love making was beautiful because of that love. I think if they had sex before this it would have been good, but it was the love (as cliche as it may sound) that took it to another level for both of them. And the proposal? Sigh.. it was everything I expect from these two.

I loved the coffee house scene. Rob seems to have a very strong sense of right and wrong and combines that with strong protective instincts where his brother is concerned. I pity any fool who actually verbally or physically 'bash' Eric. Between Rob and Nelson there wouldn't be enough of the body left to identify I wonder if Rob will go stag with Trevor to prom. I could see it... Rob picking him up, or including him with Rob, Eric, Nelson, Jasper and the gang. Regardless if they went as each others 'date' or not they would get a lot of tongues wagging. The bonus is that Rob know that Trevor likes a statement as much as he does so going 'together' would make a point without leading Trevor on.

You already know I loved this, but I wanted to make sure I left a review too. I enjoyed Bodie's POV. It was good to get to know him in this chapter and confirm how good of a kid we all suspected he was. There were a few things I really enjoyed about the chapter. One was the self-restraint Bodie used when he broke off the kissing in the bedroom. He seems to realize that they aren't ready for that kind of physical intimacy yet. I loved that Big Mike and Colleen invited Bodie to call them Grams and Gramps, and that he is comfortable enough to do that. They are one big family and that showed Bodie that he has been accepted into the family. With the rejection Bodie has faced lately, this would have been very important to him. I loved the simple act of skating with each other, and Bodie seeing how M and K interact with one another. He saw that displays of affection doesn't have to be PDA... even just simple touches and being with each other is a display of affection. Bodie is a mini-Michael and Nate is a mini-Kendall. I like that The fact that Bodie is comfortable enough to let his inner prankster out made me smile There was a lot more that I loved about the chapter, but I will stop my rambling there. Thank you for another great chapter, Gary.

Such a great chapter! I am sad to see the end of this story, but I know there is more to come. I love the interaction between Noel and Diarmid. It's good to see Noel becoming more sure of himself, and more comfortable with his powers. I also like his solution to deal with Keelan, it was probably the best option they had and would show the rest of the clans that they were merciful, but still not to be taken lightly. Wonderful job, Adi.

Happy Birthday, you sexy Scott!! Love you bunches, Dugh

Finding a love like you have with Michael (I assume this is about Michael and not just a random poem lol) can be powerful and strengthening. A lovely way to start the New Year.

Thank you I'm happy you enjoyed the story. Thank you for reviewing