Jason Rimbaud

*shakes head* Nope. Around the twist is a British saying, it means your going more crazy than you are already. . But saying you shouldn't read it, that means you would only see the flaws, which there are many, and not see the unpolished diamond that you had even all the way back then. Whatever fondness you have for this story, don't distorted it by going back. And in all seriousness, if there was a story I'd like to revisit myself, as in writing it, it would be this one. I love the mess of it all. And boy do I see the potential for my craziness to shine. Kind of wish I thunk up this one.

If there are drips, its not from my services sir.

Wow, I said a couple chapters back that young Krista just wanted to break stuff. . I mean, his mother, his dog, his father, his own life, you stripped that poor boy down to nothing. Having him change at the condo so dramatically, without any real reason narratively was jarring in a perfect post punk way. Charlie was a real shit, kept calling Barbie that Slut Carol. So very funny. And much as I suspected, The father did not disappoint, either in the original ending or in this one, didn't even bother to show up to the funeral. His mother turned out to be kind of a shit as well, sold the house and tried to force an 18 year old to live with the asshole father. All around, a messed up scenario. Derek should have ran far away. *sigh* This was a delightful romp in the mouth of madness and this chapter ended perfectly. I now can say I really enjoyed this. It's so, we have no fucks to give and we never had any fucks to give. We aren't out, just didn't come with them. .

So here I was expecting the story had one more chapter. So I was surprised when I read the comments. Then I remembered you warned me over in that other story that shall never be named. So let's focus on ending number one without reading ending number two. We'll skip past all rough patches, the conflicting statements, and focus on the story itself and what you were trying to accomplish. Charlie was a deeply flawed character that had a heart of goodness underneath the insecurity, the anger, the resentment of his parents divorce, the subsequent death, and then his father trying to get back in his life but treating him like a manly man. Julie was very insecure, overbearing, neurotic mess that I loved to pieces. Her projection that she had lots of late night snacks crumbled under the weight of admission that she really didn't. She was the most contridicting character, but for the most part read the same throughout. Though I couldn't see Charlie staying friends with her as she doesn't seem to change. Her hatred for Sara for no other reason than jealousy comes to mind. Derek was fickle, nearly bi-polar without many redeeming qualities. He was very manipulative of Charlie and took advantage of the boy in a very vulnerable time in his life. Which is exactly how eighteen year olds are supposed to act. They don't have it all figured out. And in my part two version, Charlie and Derek don't last long into college. Neither one has fully let go of the past. Charlie, his resentment of giving up basketball. Derek, his holding on to past boyfriend. That entire friend group is headed for disaster. All the stuff aside, I didn't hate it, and it was enjoyable to read. I see the Krista-isms in its innocent stages that I saw blossom in that other story. I really hope you never take this down, its a part of your journey and a blast to read. I would however, recommend that you do not ever read it again. it would drive you further around the twist than you already are. Now off to the second ending with glee.

Not gonna lie, hard to resist that cute face.

Don't know how you write/right, but I just posted a first chapter of a new story. *whistles*

I do love how you have accepted your new designation. *happy dance*. Not to be confused by the peepee dance. Two different emotions.

I think if anyone likes this one, you will.

I hope so, there is a bunch of twists, turns, sex, and violence on the way. .

I believe it will be every Saturday. Frosted Hearts was a race against time, a race. I lost.

Poor Charlie, all alone in a condo by the beach. Why do I think it would be the perfect time to go into detail about wet butts? Mis opportunity.

Its so hard to comment without sounding like I'm bashing the writing. Last Chapter, Derek is pissed because of a kiss, this chapter, he's like, don't be mad. Derek you're all over the place and known of it makes sense. He refused to talk to Charlie for at least twelve hours and the next morning you're all better. Jesus boy, pick a lane. And Charlie, *shakes head*. I can't with you right now.

So this is what I was expecting...a beach scene where angst is queen. I can hardly figure out what to say without sounding like an asshole. It was messy, dramatic, and yet somehow I still like the characters even though they make no logical sense. Derek just said, right up there, it would be fun to find out if Brian was gay. Then like three sentences later he sees one little kiss and he loses it. Then magically they are at some house, sleeping together and Matt decides to press his down there part against Charlie's back there place. What the F is up with this group of friends? This is as tragic as what I imagined high school was like. My wasn't, I was a ghost, but others with friends, crazy times.

Yeah, so I need to know what it was supposed to be...like desperately. In my head, BendtedWreath makes sense....but BenedictWreath does not. Inquiring minds need to know!

“Fuck.” That word summed up exactly how Gabriel Foster felt at the moment. He stared at the ceiling as he lay in his king-size bed. His chest heaved as he blinked his eyes rapidly to clear the aftereffects of his nightmare. As he lay on his back, he took deep, calming breaths to settle his pounding heart as his rational mind told him it had only been a dream. After a few moments, he shifted his head to look at the clock. His pillow and his sheets were wet with sweat. He threw the

Gabriel Foster has a problem; he's a high-priced assassin known only as Robert. Senator Elias Hutchinson got in the way of a broker named Mehmet, who hired Robert to eliminate him. When Robert turns down the assignment, a mysterious man begins stalking him. As he races to stop this unknown shooter, he meets Sean, lead singer of Mysterious Neon, a world-famous boy band. Now he has to elude the Yakuza and a persistent Homeland Agent while juggling his feelings for Sean. Everything comes to a head at Hershey Park as he races to stop his replacement before it's too late.

Unlike the prudish Fabulous One, I will tell you who the bottom is.. .

lets finish the story first. I think I'm going to make it available anyway. This is gettting too easy

The reason this came up, I wrote an alternative ending to Frosted Hearts. A full on three chapter arc to explore the other side of my ending. It's actually really good and I was trying to find a way to use the writing. To change the names to make it a new story, then I feel like it doesn't work as a stand alone because you weren't vested in the characters. But maybe include it as deleted content seems appeasing. At least someone would get to read it.

Of course, all good deeds come with something for something. I win in that I get early content, like Patreon, you win...um...you get the satisfaction of giving me early content.

I was thinking posting it as the very last chapter posting, clearly marked what it is, and in that document, reference chapter and scene. I also toyed with the idea of a completely different collection, for example, Frosted Hearts, in Chapter Three, have footnotes directing you to this new collection for additional scenes and explanation on why it was cut. Just something to give me more work to do, I have about two hours a day I'm bored.

If there is no sex, what's the point. *throws hands up* I'm going back to Good Guys Cum Finish Last, at least there is smut there. Oh, another serious question. If you continue to write, because you did mention you might retire, for your new story, let me choose chapter titles for you. This whole Chapter 11 quote and Chapter 31 quote gets so confusing to my tiny brain. I'll read the chapter right before you post and I'll offer names for you.

She didn't mention pizza *crosses fingers* I might still get my shot

Shit

So there's a chance I don't have to apologize. *crosses fingers*