Jason Rimbaud
-
Posts
2,999 -
Joined
-
Last visited
Content Type
Forums
Stories
- Stories
- Story Series
- Story Worlds
- Story Collections
- Story Chapters
- Chapter Comments
- Story Reviews
- Story Comments
- Stories Edited
- Stories Beta'd
Blogs
Store
Help Center
Writing
Gallery
Events
Everything posted by Jason Rimbaud
-
Not gonna lie, hard to resist that cute face.
-
Don't know how you write/right, but I just posted a first chapter of a new story. *whistles*
-
I do love how you have accepted your new designation. *happy dance*. Not to be confused by the peepee dance. Two different emotions.
-
I think if anyone likes this one, you will.
-
I hope so, there is a bunch of twists, turns, sex, and violence on the way. .
-
I believe it will be every Saturday. Frosted Hearts was a race against time, a race. I lost.
-
Poor Charlie, all alone in a condo by the beach. Why do I think it would be the perfect time to go into detail about wet butts? Mis opportunity.
-
Its so hard to comment without sounding like I'm bashing the writing. Last Chapter, Derek is pissed because of a kiss, this chapter, he's like, don't be mad. Derek you're all over the place and known of it makes sense. He refused to talk to Charlie for at least twelve hours and the next morning you're all better. Jesus boy, pick a lane. And Charlie, *shakes head*. I can't with you right now.
-
So this is what I was expecting...a beach scene where angst is queen. I can hardly figure out what to say without sounding like an asshole. It was messy, dramatic, and yet somehow I still like the characters even though they make no logical sense. Derek just said, right up there, it would be fun to find out if Brian was gay. Then like three sentences later he sees one little kiss and he loses it. Then magically they are at some house, sleeping together and Matt decides to press his down there part against Charlie's back there place. What the F is up with this group of friends? This is as tragic as what I imagined high school was like. My wasn't, I was a ghost, but others with friends, crazy times.
-
Yeah, so I need to know what it was supposed to be...like desperately. In my head, BendtedWreath makes sense....but BenedictWreath does not. Inquiring minds need to know!
- 4,970 replies
-
- 4
-
-
- introduce yourself
- new members
- (and 1 more)
-
“Fuck.” That word summed up exactly how Gabriel Foster felt at the moment. He stared at the ceiling as he lay in his king-size bed. His chest heaved as he blinked his eyes rapidly to clear the aftereffects of his nightmare. As he lay on his back, he took deep, calming breaths to settle his pounding heart as his rational mind told him it had only been a dream. After a few moments, he shifted his head to look at the clock. His pillow and his sheets were wet with sweat. He threw the
- 29 comments
-
- 25
-
-
-
-
-
Gabriel Foster has a problem; he's a high-priced assassin known only as Robert. Senator Elias Hutchinson got in the way of a broker named Mehmet, who hired Robert to eliminate him. When Robert turns down the assignment, a mysterious man begins stalking him. As he races to stop this unknown shooter, he meets Sean, lead singer of Mysterious Neon, a world-famous boy band. Now he has to elude the Yakuza and a persistent Homeland Agent while juggling his feelings for Sean. Everything comes to a head at Hershey Park as he races to stop his replacement before it's too late.
-
Unlike the prudish Fabulous One, I will tell you who the bottom is.. .
-
lets finish the story first. I think I'm going to make it available anyway. This is gettting too easy
-
The reason this came up, I wrote an alternative ending to Frosted Hearts. A full on three chapter arc to explore the other side of my ending. It's actually really good and I was trying to find a way to use the writing. To change the names to make it a new story, then I feel like it doesn't work as a stand alone because you weren't vested in the characters. But maybe include it as deleted content seems appeasing. At least someone would get to read it.
-
Of course, all good deeds come with something for something. I win in that I get early content, like Patreon, you win...um...you get the satisfaction of giving me early content.
-
I was thinking posting it as the very last chapter posting, clearly marked what it is, and in that document, reference chapter and scene. I also toyed with the idea of a completely different collection, for example, Frosted Hearts, in Chapter Three, have footnotes directing you to this new collection for additional scenes and explanation on why it was cut. Just something to give me more work to do, I have about two hours a day I'm bored.
-
If there is no sex, what's the point. *throws hands up* I'm going back to Good Guys Cum Finish Last, at least there is smut there. Oh, another serious question. If you continue to write, because you did mention you might retire, for your new story, let me choose chapter titles for you. This whole Chapter 11 quote and Chapter 31 quote gets so confusing to my tiny brain. I'll read the chapter right before you post and I'll offer names for you.
-
She didn't mention pizza *crosses fingers* I might still get my shot
-
So there's a chance I don't have to apologize. *crosses fingers*
-
Her Avatar is a reddish rose, so reds and pinks
-
The reason why it takes you a year is because you are good. I can do three because I am not. I actually have two complete stories waiting to be posted as I finish Frosted Hearts. So I'll for sure have at least three this year. Yes, we all know, say it with me @weinerdog
-
I actually have a serious question for you. . I promise its serious. I write extremely fast and over write. Do you think its a good idea, once a story is over, that the original author releases alternative scenes, different directions that changed the story so much it had to be deleted to keep the story on track. The reason I ask, in Frosted Hearts, I have about 30K words of scenes that couldn't quite fit into the overall narrative. Do you think, once the story is finished, people would be interested to read alternate endings or scenes?
-
Once again I am wrong. Not surprising, now I have to apologize in public to the Fabulous One. Just another reason why you are the Fabulous One, not upset, matter of fact the entire world is just as it should be.
