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raven1

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  1. raven1

    Chapter 2

    Your poems painted beautiful images of summer and gently touched my heart. Thanks Albert.
  2. raven1

    Good Times

    Hawaii is a beautiful place, and your poem made me feel the same feelings I had when I first went there. Great poem!
  3. raven1

    Chapter 1

    This is a very excellent poem that reminded me of the weeks I spent there. Awesome!
  4. This is a reward that you most definitely have deserved. Your work and talent have produced many of my favourite stories on GA and other sites online. BRAVO!
  5. raven1

    Chapter 9

    Another great chapter as the danger increases for them. The Great Pyramid is a great monument. A photo of the two lovers standing before it was a great souvenir. They are going to treasure that for the rest of their lives.
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    Chapter 5

    I personally applied the duct tape to make sure his lips were sealed. The scarab seems a focal point for what has happened to them. Could it be cursed? How powerful are the people who are trying to get it from them? I agree that a hotel safe doesn't seem the best place to protect the scarab.
  7. Hey all! Hope all is well for you all. Just checking in for a quick minute. Take care.
  8. Hi Albert! I'm only here for a few minutes. I have another birthday to go to tonight, then another tomorrow. Not looking forward to the double hangovers. 🤪
  9. I finally show up and this is the first thing I read.
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    Chapter 2

    Smooth sailing for a carefree start to a great romance is a great way to start a story. I love both Reg and Alex. I think the champagne bottle was a missed opportunity. They should have written a message in the bottle and seal it before throwing it overboard. It would have become a historical artifact instead of trash. 😆. Love your description of the romantic settings too!
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    Chapter 1

    I love the romance of this story. I know readers will enjoy not only the romance, but everything else that will come with the story. Don't forget my advice about Tags and make sure to add Romance to this tale filled with love. Gary is right when he says your romantic side is exposed.
  12. Hi Albert! I got the last three and will work on them tomorrow!
  13. Just a quick update. The river level is much lower and the city cleanup is in full swing. Still the rainy season, but at least the rain has stopped for now.
  14. Good Morning Mischief Makers!
  15. Good Morning Clo and Dughlas!
  16. Good Morning Albert! This looks scrumptious!
  17. I'll look forward to that! Say Hi to the family for me.
  18. Hi Spike Good to hear things are well with you. Teasing Drewster again will get you in trouble my man. I miss you too.
  19. Thanks Gary! I've been missing you all.
  20. Hi All! I see you are all having fun. Gary, stealing sunshine? That's probably why we're sandbagging here in Chiang Mai. The flood here was the worst in 15 years. At least it has freed up some time for me to catch up on projects I can do at home. Hey Clo! I hope the trip to the apple orchard is fun. Make sure to stuff one or two backpacks with disposable diapers. I love the teas you mixed Bucket, that is with the exception of Billy Tea. Drinking eucalyptus sounds so wrong. Drew, buddy, I don't know what you did or said, but Moms are off-limits. Spikeman, how are you? I still see you have to deal with the poaching problem. Good luck! Dughlas, I see your power to see into the future is still as strong as ever! I am so envious. Hey Page, I miss your stories. Catch me up with them sometime.
  21. Looking forward to the message. Take care.
  22. I laughed when I heard that line! How are you doing Texy?
  23. Hi Clo! I've been trying to stay out of trouble. Also, I am working with Albert on his project. Doing a lot of reading and cooking mostly. Tonight is dinner and drinks with my man Aod. How are you?
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