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tim has done it again. A wonderful story that has love lost, and found again! When Bobby realizes that what he's left behind is what he wants for his forever, he goes all in to find it again! A well done tale about figuring out what's really important.

the way you put words together never ceases to amaze me, tim. when Bobby is trying to get back to the man with the beans, you can feel the anxiety (and i know about anxiety, lol!) and the ending! I knew my choice would cause pain to my family and friends, but I also knew I’d done the right thing. I could feel the love in this house and there was nowhere else I wanted to be. In seconds there were squeals of joy, and laughter as the room filled with five tiny beings all different colours, they zipped around on glowing wings, giggling non-stop. Several other fairies, large and small, joined the group; all were smiling. Onagh pulled me forward. “Everyone, this is Bobby.” Then Onagh kissed me and said, “Welcome home.” just wonderful! thank you, for asking me to be a part of your magic and, as always, for sharing it with us

oh, i am so glad you posted this one! let's all hope that we can figure out what moves us before we've run out of time i know i'm like a record on repeat (did i just age myself, lol!) but thank you for sharing your gift with us

tim these again pack so much feeling, emotion, into so few words! such a gift my friend ❤ the first...just yes. just the other evening i experienced again, laying everything into His hands. this second one? shortly after doing the first, i was doing this. floating, not a cane in this case, but the same destination. thank you, again, for sharing your gift 🎁 with us 💋

well done tim! it's my pleasure to read for you!

i often can't find the words so sometimes less IS more

@Solus Magus thank you for this gift! i can't wait to share it with Sir

you have such a gift, tim so many things i'd like to say, the thoughts are swirling and won't come together in any coherent fashion i am speechless and breathless

that you were able to do that, speaks volumes about the way you write xoxo

very nice, tim! the middle two lines of the first one...well i hate crowds, they are my kryptonite, i can feel the press of many bodies, and can hear the din of all those voices, makes me shudder a bit the second one could be the opening sequence of a space movie, the lonely space explorer, looking out the window, the camera pans out and there are more people but Though we are together in this, we are still each of us alone Ahead of us is a life of new chances; it’s a future unknown and the third one, what a choice to have to make, to go to a new place, but leave a loved one behind! that last stanza is just heartbreaking! especially the last line.... Farewell now, you who I miss Always I will treasure your final kiss Life here, we will make right And of you, one day, I’ll no longer reminisce. nicely done! (full disclosure....yes, i'm tim's beta reader, but i did not see these before he posted them here.)

Nothing is life is guaranteed. Everything changes. Some changes are easy, some are hard. What if that change meant that your athletic husband was suddenly mobility impaired? Could you cope with that change? Louis has to. His husband Don has to when one of them is injured in an accident. Now, their whole life must change. Will their relationship survive? Can they adjust and adapt to the "new normal?" Changes follows Don and Louis through this part of their life together. There are ups, and downs; love and anger. Bring a tissue or two, and settle in for a good read!

i love stories like this. they don't really end. the characters go on living their lives; in the imaginations of the writer, and the readers. they are able to do this because they are written so well that they have been imbued with lives of their own. i'm sure that in their world Don and Louis have wonderful adventures with their family. as my daughter would say "Relationship goals, Mom, relationship goals." thank you tim. for sharing them with us, and for asking me to be a part of it.

what a cute little story! my Granddad was of Cornish descent and he told Brownie stories, but they were never like this! His brownies were always helpful! wonder what happens after dinner?

well done! one of the things i like most about how you write, is that the dialogue, the situations, are so real. this story especially, has scenes that hit so very close to home, and they have played out very much like "real life." i say it so often that i hope it hasn't lost the feeling behind it; thank you, thank you for sharing your gift and these people who inhabit your imagination with us.

one of the things i love about you is how you take these things you see, things that affect you, and you turn it into these stirring words it's an amazing gift tim, and we are better for your having shared it with us

thank you Parker, for letting me know that this connected with you, that you got something from it i'd love to see a picture if you do decide to put in on your classroom door! and thanks for your support!

hauntingly beautiful Sir full of longing and love i hope the painting will be finished one day very soon xoxo

thank you Sir

thanks Reader! if you have a dry erase marker, you can put them on the bathroom mirror, they wipe right off! also, writing something out makes it easier to remember, there's a connection formed in your brain

thanks for reading @DynoReads i'm glad this touched you today!

thank you jp for sharing that one i think i'll copy paste that to my file xoxo

thank you Sir i'm glad that this blog spoke to you and thank you for the encouragement

hey tim no, you never quit, and that makes all the difference, doesn't it? that one from Richard Branson hits me too. thank you for encouraging me to write

thanks Def i too, am a brooder. i think that's why last week was so hard. i just couldn't let it go i'm glad this touched you today xoxo

those two questions are actually in my "corrective action" paperwork, i'm glad that this was timely for you, renee thanks for your support xoxo