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  1. your story is fiction, fiction happens outside reality i'm also in Texas i'd like to see stories that help remind what was and what will be again my vote, for whatever it's worth, is post it.
  2. mollyhousemouse

    Chapter 7

    these last two chapters have been filled with memories, both good and bad, but all strong and part of who i am with my husband, thank you for honoring the struggle for intimacy while dealing with physical limitations in such a human, loving way
  3. mollyhousemouse

    Changes

    this story, like all of the stories you write, is full of real people, real dialogue, real life. i feel honored that you share these stories with us.
  4. your love for, and admiration of tim shines in this Sir i thank you for sharing that with us please keep writing, you do it well
  5. mollyhousemouse

    Alone

    WolfM-- i had a friend who was a dancer, i can see her in this. this was in a time before cell phones, she'd call, in tears, from the pay phone in the "locker room" asking me to call the manager, pretending to be the babysitter, so she could leave early. we went to watch her one night, and it was so very sad i see her in this, in every stanza, she did have us, but there weren't any others saying thank you doesn't seem enough when writers share of themselves this deeply, but those are the only words i have so thank you, for sharing this part of you, with us
  6. Sir-- only one who cares deeply would work so hard, and so long to help another overcome these types of deep seated issues would that everyone could find someone to care like you do thank you
  7. you are both, both of those things, and this girl appreciates the care and protection. my Sir does also
  8. Sir
  9. it's water under the bridge Sir lessons learned all around
  10. mollyhousemouse

    Labels

    you said you felt as if you were having "a Dr Seuss moment" and i re-read it with that in mind, and it is Suessian i'm enjoying your foray into poetry WolfM again, thank you for sharing
  11. mollyhousemouse

    Submission

    what a wonderful picture you paint with your words, WolfM any sub would be lucky indeed to have such a Dom again, thanks for sharing this with us
  12. i am glad that i have been introduced to your work, WolfM what i have read so far has all touched me. thank you for sharing You with us
  13. mollyhousemouse

    Chapter 3

    WTH??!!! I was all grinning like a fool. The house is perfect, the granny flat, and the way Louis wanted to make sure that Rena had a covered walkway....perfect. And when Louis calls him my sweet-alpha-baby oh don't I know that one! lol! The guys seem to be navigating this like champs! There is an old Cary Grant movie, "Mr. Blandings Builds His Dream House" your descriptions of the colors remind me of a scene in that movie. I recommend googling it. And then Miriam? Even the name doesn't sound good. Oh now I really can't wait. You have me hook line and sinker...... (marking calendar for next Saturday morning!)
  14. this is wonderful sean
  15. i know
  16. mollyhousemouse

    Chapter 2

    so many things to say.... having been in Louis' place i recognize the anger, and the sadness, and all of it food, it's the universal language we all understand but few speak, i think you speak it, there is something comforting in sharing a meal love the glimpse into Donny with the baklava scene, precious! well done, tim, well done same time next week?
  17. mollyhousemouse

    Harbours

    love u sweetie it's when we find ourselves adrift that we find out who our true friends are you do have a gift for putting words to feelings
  18. thanks @Lyssa you are so right @BlindAmbition
  19. got no words
  20. I was introduced to Khalil Gibran as a young teen: Your living is determined not so much by what life brings to you as by the attitude you bring to life; not so much by what happens to you as by the way your mind looks at what happens.
  21. mollyhousemouse

    Chapter 1

    two words, tim well done again, thank you for sharing this with us i look forward to getting to know these guys better in the coming weeks.
  22. mollyhousemouse

    Seek Solace

    Sir i've been though this piece more than half a dozen times each time the first stanza stops me in my tracks this is how it always starts While mental objects like scattered formations Trip through your mind in disarray this line, says so much Liberation will be found in the submission and the demons are kept at bay for a while and then we are back to the first stanza you have a way with words Sir i thank you for sharing this gift
  23. That's very much what this recipe is Clochette!
  24. Ohhh my heart is happy
  25. OMG! I was wondering if you made it and if Sir liked it. Thanks for letting me know. Have a great day!
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