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Just noticed something while re-reading the chapter. Marc has three "friendly" and/or "paid friendly" newsies. From near the middle of the chapter: “Thank you, Lt. I should be back momentarily. Please see to it I am not disturbed by newsies or civilians.” “Aye Captain.” My head pivoted as I checked to see if my three newsies were watching and I got the nod from one. I am guessing Marc can help steer the coverage the way he would like it, thanks to those three.
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Marc's family -- and Brenden -- understand much better than Amelia what is likely to happen. Amelia is a control-freak busybody who needs to be firmly reeled in. I don't think Amelia has learned her lesson -- yet. She still thinks she can control Adam, and Brenden, and possibly she thinks she can control Marc. She will learn better, but it may take time. Amelia MIGHT tone down for a bit, but that control-freak nature will attempt to assert control again at some point. Great chapter.
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Looking forward to more chapters where additional facets of this will be revealed.
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Fascinating. Marc and Grandma have some work to do to get some of the crew up to needed emergency speeds. Let's hope there is enough time to do that.
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Expecting Guests and Birth of New Atlantis
ReaderPaul commented on R. Eric's story chapter in Expecting Guests and Birth of New Atlantis
@R. Eric, loving this series. If your muse is supplying you with this one almost exclusively, keep going! Wilma, Paul, and Anderson are in for a great time on Gaia. -
A very good chapter, @P. E. Knapp. But I have a terminology question. In the last paragraph of the chapter, the "3-mile-limit" is mentioned. What is the 3-mile-limit?
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A wonderful story, @Lee Wilson. The only flaw I see is -- inflation probably will continue, and twenty dollars per session now would probably be 100 or 200 at that time in the future.
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Ok, @P. E. Knapp -- using what Tom said in the prologue, is Adam the name of the fated made Marc keeps dreaming about?
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A simple cheat -- er, solution? The Horace Wingspanner and Lane Tallfield solution, with the help of Chirka -- the lower level via Engris! Perhaps in another ten tales of Charlie and Company you might consider that. And I want to lobby for a reappearance of Jeremiah Hawkins....
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No, but outside of a spirt dome would be good, so Sefton could attend, and so Eseffa and Jorli and Mompas could be there by projection. (Although Mompas Madracorn dies not know them as well as E and J.)
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Another of Geron's excellent Charlie Boone series I thought I had already reviewed! Though it is worth six stars, the system will only let me give five stars. Though Rick and Adrian speak much less than Charlie and Kippy in this story, what they say is quite pertinent to solving the main problem of the story. Max gives the four boys a concern which they help solve. Max has been too close to the problem to see the obvious, until Kip and Charlie point it out. But solving the problem -- that is another proverbial kettle of fish! Well worth reading.
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@Jason Rimbaud, I'm trying to remember a Charlie Boone story with William & William, or any story from @Geron Kees featuring a William & William -- unless you mean the ghosts, Billy and Will? Geron, did Nicholaas and any of his wives have any kids? You have said nothing regarding children sired by Nicholaas, although you did say Robin (from some later future tales) almost certainly had kids in his 800+ years of life. And you hinted (but did not confirm) that Reudi in a future tale might be Robin's grandson or great-grandson.
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@Geron Kees, near the beginning of the chapter, Charlie muses about being able to go to some airless spot, like the surface of the moon. Do the guys have spacesuits stored anywhere in addition to on Lollipop, on Captain Nema's ship, and on Pacha's ship? Do they have suits stored at the house, or the villas on Engris and Lyrgris? And when will Charlie, Kip, and Horace take Amy and his mother shopping on Engris and/or Lyrgris?
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Excellent chapter, @Lee Wilson. I have to agree with @drsawzall about the insurance situation. Two of my relatives have been dumped by insurance companies because their treatment was costing too much -- even though that was not the official reason. One relative requires a shot every 4 weeks costing $4,000 without insurance coverage. His new insurance is covering that with no complaints. Mads and Colin are great parents.
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Good story, plenty of loose ends left for more stories at irregular intervals.
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Good story. I won't say too much, as short as it is, except -- Any chance of a sequel to this good short story?
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It's A Miracle To Find A New Life
ReaderPaul commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in It's A Miracle To Find A New Life
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"The Case of the Short, Short Prince" is one of the very best of @Geron Kees tales. And it is very good in the first twelve chapters. But then it gets better and better yet If you have not yet read "Journey Beyond the Sea" -- that is another shining gem.
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When Charlie and his three closest friends are invited to a Halloween party, things start happening. They meet someone born years ago, and learn a tragic tale. They search for ways to improve the situation, and do figure it out -- not always as they expected. We also learn about the dance talents of Kip and Adrian. Excellent story.
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A great read at any time of year, this story delves into what is better and what is best, what could be right and what could be wrong, and does all of it in a thoughtful and interesting way. As Charlie, Kippy, Ricky, and Adrian work to solve the problem of Adrian's mother being laid off at Christmas, they learn much more than expected. Well worth reading whatever time of year.
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This is the first of the excellent Charlie Boone series. When I first read this, I had no idea of how many excellent stories would be forthcoming. In this story, the following are some of what is addressed: peer pressure, homophobia, care and concern for others, and fear. Well worth reading.
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Well-written story, and I would like to see it continue. The characters are intriguing, setting realistic, and situation believable. Very short to read, but fascinating. I recommend this.
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Cool chapter. I also look forward to hearing the results of the Tuesday doctor visit. When does the next chapter post, @Lee Wilson?
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You're the Star Atop My Christmas Tree, Charlie Boone!
ReaderPaul reviewed Geron Kees's story in Fiction
Another very good story from Geron Kees. Charlie and friends investigate strange thefts and find something they don't expect. What they find, and how they find it. makes a really good story. The guys are tested in an unusual place and unusual way, but they come through in convincing fashion. Well worth reading. -
Someone Is Stealing Christmas Wishes, Charlie Boone!
ReaderPaul reviewed Geron Kees's story in Fiction
Another happy and fascinating story from Geron Kees. This time, Charlie, Kip, Rick, Rick's Uncle Bob, Adrian, Browbeat, Horace, and Amy join up with two very delightful residents of the town or Twombly to solve an unusual mystery. As they work together, more mysteries manifest. The Twombly Town Conservationist becomes involved, along with other residents in various capacities. With all of this, a wonderful message of care and compassion comes together in fabulous way. I heartily recommend this story.
