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You will be happy to know that Bing says that Atsoft is not a recognized American surname, although there is a surname of Afterwood found in the British Isles, the USA, and Canada. However, in a different subject, this was a great chapter, tying up some of the loose ends. But what other celebrities or wannabees will we learn were at the party? Will we learn more of Chef Andy in the story? How many more chapters do you have planned? Might you write an extra chapter or to, or a sequel or a nearquel to Time Stood Still? (Definition of nearquel , a noun: A story related to another story, with some of the same characters, but not a direct sequel.) Good story, @Jason Rimbaud.
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Well, some of the answers are here. But what is the angle with Mrs. Winterbourne, hinted at in the first chapter especially? And Justin Atwood is a better name than Justin Atsoft. But wouldn't all the drinking be a stain on the family image if word of the party details got out to the public?
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Loved it! Well done indeed!
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Lots of good stuff in the last week.
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Ran across something this week. The sci-fi/horror story Geron was writing was called DEMONS IN GLASS (he capitalized it like that in his reply to a question I asked as to what story we might see next). I rarely read horror stories, but I would have read one from Geron.
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@Myr, if you have any more of these short segments laying around, please consider posting them. I am sure I am not the only one who would like to see more and more of these. Especially so if they are part of the magic series and/or King's Ranger series related. I am reasonably sure some of my fellow readers, including @Bill W, @flesco, @Daddydavek, @drsawzall, and @akascrubber would enjoy more of these, even when not directly continued. Thank you for considering the possibilities.
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Still a lot of unanswered questions. Why is Mrs. Winterbourne so important? Who is Justin? Who is Trish/Courtney? Who is Blake's girlfriend -- or is it another boyfriend? Why is that big and long party being held so close to where Greg lives? Other readers, what questions have i missed?
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direction - Word of the Day - Mon Aug 17, 2026
ReaderPaul commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
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Charlie and the guys are presented a mystery by Robin Hood, and they start investigating a mysterious group of people who turn out to be more than expected. With the help of Horace, Ragal, Casper, Durapar, and Keerby, the guys and Robin end up learning more than they expect in a story which keeps growing in mystery after more mystery. Well worth reading.
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I also seem to remember your name, or perhaps it was one very similar I have seen. Welcome. Perhaps @Myr or @Cia could answer if GA usernames can be recycled after a certain amount of time, or if they are blocked from re-use. This is a great place to read stories of many types. Premium is worth it, in my opinion, because access is so much quicker without having to click around ads -- especially on my phones. Happy reading!
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poise - Word of the Day - Fri Aug 14, 2026
ReaderPaul commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
Well, Poise does not Always Equate with Depends. Perhaps Tena prefers Cora, or Aunt Flow, or such an old brand as Kotex. Sometimes one can Stayfree, and other times one might have to get Rael. But with proper planning one might be Always Discreet. -
Dancing At Chef Andy's
ReaderPaul commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Dancing At Chef Andy's
I am not surprised about Jon Bon Jovi being nice. The nicest celebrities I have met have been singers and musicians of various kinds. Of the persons I mentioned above, all were very nice except one, and he was just okay. Petula Clark and Andy Williams and the Lennon Sisters were especially gracious and nice. Authors ran the gamut from gracious and personable to politely terse. Often the lesser known were more gracious than some of the established authors. I frequented several of the local and regional bookstores -- that is how I met various authors. Some of the owners or managers of bookstores knew the authors personally, and were able to get them to come in for book signings. Have only met a few actors, and most were nice, at least on the surface. Your story has many interesting aspects. I am enjoying reading it. -
Dancing At Chef Andy's
ReaderPaul commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Dancing At Chef Andy's
"Fascinating," Commander Spock would say. "Curiouser and curiouser," said Alice. I have met a few famous people briefly in my time -- Mel Tillis, some of the Osmond Brothers, Andy Williams, Petula Clark, John Davidson (one of the famous persons of that name), some of the Lennon Sisters, some of the Lennon Brothers, and a few others. But except for two of the Lennon Sisters, never talked to any of them more than three minutes. I ahave also met some famous authors. I look forward to next week. Did you say Thursday is coming on Tuesday next week (hope, hope)? -
I enjoyed this story a lot over the years. Charlie and the guys first meet Pacha'ka and Mike in this story, and see two others from another story. Also they meet Sefton and the planet of Engris for the first time. Very well worth reading.
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How am I the first to react to this fascinating chapter? Does Justin have paparazzi stalking him? Will Chef Andy be and Chef Andy's? Will Greg run into the girl and guy again? Will Greg meet a third and fourth hot guy? What secret abilities does Mrs. Winterbourne have? How quickly will Greg surprise the many that seem to underestimate him at the Company? Who is Courtney/Trish? Can I come up with more questions? Probably---
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growth - Word of the Day - Wed Aug 4, 2026
ReaderPaul commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
When in college, I was fortunate to see The Barber of Seville and The Marriage of Figaro performed at the college I attended by a traveling troupe of players. Good and funny! -
Chapter 3- The Mark's Call
ReaderPaul commented on BendtedWreath's story chapter in Chapter 3- The Mark's Call
What @VBlew said is often true in this mortal world, as well. Persons often are so quick to guess that wrong assumptions are all too common. And what @chris191070 mentioned, I agree with. Hopefully future meetings will go more smoothly. I also like @Thirdly's images of characters. Fascinating. Good story, @BendtedWreath. -
@Enoch -- could this be what you are looking for? https://www.wattpad.com/4150522-things-that-go-bump-in-the-night
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The problem is that the guy is NOT hanging off the cliff! Instead he is sinking. Will Greg be in time? Will Justin or anyone else help?
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Those are very good stories. My favorite non-series stories include "The Party of the Third Part" (here on GA) and "An Admission of Guilt" (over on IOMfAtS). "Third Part" has a lot to say about peer pressure, parental pressure, and "elite" expectations. "An Admission of Guilt" talks of party pressure, parent-progeny, and several other things. Some of my favorite lines from "The Party of the Third Part": "Let me get this right," Jerry Masters said, smiling at Amanda Burke. "You want to hire me to be your boyfriend?" Amanda was new in school, having just moved with her family a week or so ago from West Prior. She was an attractive, dark-haired senior, not unlike Jerry himself. She nodded. "All you have to do is go with me, and just act like a boyfriend. Hold my hand some, give me a kiss on the cheek when people are looking - that kind of stuff. Nothing too involved." "And you'll pay me fifty bucks for this?" "Yes. That's not bad for two hours in the evening, is it? And you'll really be helping me out." "Uh huh." He leaned closer. You know I'm gay, right?" Amanda frowned. "Yes, I do. So what? My brother's gay. I'm not concerned about gay. The people over in West Prior don't know you at all, anyway." The frown turned to a smile. "You're good looking and smart. That's all that matters to me." And the story gradually gets better from there....
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I always enjoyed the stories written by Geron, In my interactions with him through email and responses he made in the comments, he always had an active and agile mind. He had many projects started or in mind, including: A. He had started writing a horror story -=- something different for him. B. He had notes for a third Road story. C. He had notes and a small start on a fourth story in the series which started with The Odd, Onward Door. D. He was starting to make notes for sequels to Journey Beyond the Sea and The Case of the Short, Short Prince. E. He was thinking about an eighth Charm story. F. He was considering a fourth story in the Mooi series. G. He has two short stories on IOMfAtS which he and I discussed and felt would be too political for GA. Those short stories are "An Admission of Guilt" and "A Rainbow for Jack". H. He was thinking about another story on the order of "The Third Clue: A Pacha'ka Adventure" -- where other characters than Charlie Boone, Kippy, Rick, and Adrian would be featured from the Charlie Boone universe. I. His story, "Z is for Zombie" takes place in Minnesota, instead of New York state or The Netherlands. J. He was considering a third "Thrift Shop" story. K. He also had ideas for a sequel to "The Stolen Dream." L. He said he had a lot of ideas for others stories, but needed more time to write them. One of those ideas was for a sequel to "The House of Storms." A great talent has been stilled. However, we have wonderful stories to read and enjoy and remember. Rest in peace, Geron.
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I have noticed that when I click "Follow" on a particular story, I then get notices for EVERY new story that author publishes, not just the story on which I click follow. Is it supposed to work that way?
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An excellent story with a number of plot surprises. Beautifully written and the story unfolds in a gentle fashion yet keeps moving along. The interactions among Dr. James Carson, janitor, and Silas, and an additional character later, keep the story moving as they try to unravel a seemingly somewhat tangled mystery. I recommend this.
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Excellent story. Many surprises. Loved it.
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I was going to mention the eye patch, but @Dathi beat me to it. Way to go, Dathi. We must have some of the same questions. I look forward to learning more in the next installment. Good work, Tim.
