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I think Edward is a better observer than most of the others understand. He can keep a secret most of the time, but if he gets mad-- watch out! As a capable observer, Edward can put seemingly random events, actions, and information bits together, whether minutes, hours, days, months, or even years later to arrive at a reasoned or intuitive conclusion. Has Edward been checked to see if he has an undiagnosed case of diabetes? In a diabetic, sometimes blood sugar being way off can cause seemingly unreasoned temper tantrums at times. I have seen this in diabetic relatives and friends.

Wow-- hard to know what will be the end result of all that.

Excellent interview with Brett! Thank you. Brett made the process fascinating in the reasoned way he explained it. I foresee problems with the first interview of the chapter because the interview was NOT aired. Thanks, @Wombat Bill -- another great chapter.

@Mark Hansen and @BigBen -- Jack's website was up and running just now (1:36 a.m. Central Time) when I checked just now. On another site it became known that he is revising the forever saga. The first nine chapters of Forever are active on his personal website.

I don't know why the above posted again.

That was different. I have NEVER had a desire for fisting. But I think they got their point across to Thomas that they are interested in a repeat threesome any time soon. Sometimes, @Wombat Bill -- you have a delightfully droll sense of humor. I mean that in both the American and British versions of the word meaning of droll found at dictionary dot com (to see the British definition, keep scrolling down and eventually the British definition shows up). Thomas need to better control himself or he will be in trouble with multiple persons.

Love does not always conquer all. Thanks for the bonus material for this chapter! It certainly explains more about the household of Mrs. P.

Ah, I see-- it's is an Australian thing, perhaps. I am in the United States, and the common shortening of Jeremy HERE is Jer or Jerry. Jez is sometimes short for Jezebel or Jessie or Jesse, though the last two are more often shortened to Jess. Nicknames are strange things. Several people have called me "Mike." But Mike, Michael, Micheal, Mikel, or Micah are not any of my three names. (I do have a distant cousin named Mike.)

Ah, @Wombat Bill -- now please -- in a future chapter, tell the story of how Brett calls Jeremy Jez instead of Jer. There must be a story there. Perhaps Edward could interview both of them, or a two part program, interviewing Jeremy and Rani in one program, and Brett in the following program? A really good and enjoyable chapter. I am also interested in seeing how Justin works out as Mrs. P's very personal trainer.

Interesting! You are doing a good job of keeping us with questions.

I had forgotten how good Seth is at archery. I look forward to seeing how his skills are used in the future chapters. Is this where Toby starts doing magic, and then suddenly Dennis shows up? (Hint, hint.)

WOW, not something I would like to try, but to each his own..

Absolutely wonderful chapter, Mawgrim. Very well done.

Excellent, Mawgrim. Well thought out.

LOL. Edward got his point across to Oliver, I predict.

You writing reminds me so much on Anne McCaffrey!

@Summerabbacat, you bring up very valid points. I was assuming that they had previously had such a discussion. However, it is possible that they had not discussed fidelity to each other. I predict that @Wombat Bill will inform us further down the line in the story.

Obviously Thomas was thinking with his dick and balls instead of his top head. If two in a couple have not given the other a "hall pass" to sexually be with someone else, trouble can erupt. Good chapter, Wombat Bill. You must plan the stories quite a ways out for the various plots and subplots to be this believable. Well done.

Okay, so far so good. Sounds like we are getting close to observation and action. Is Toby going to be observing as well?

Well, this certainly broadens my thoughts about dance routines, Wombat Bill! I had not previously thought of those possibilities. I can imagine Tristan doing choreography of such dancing to "All Time High" (theme song of "Octopussy," one of the James Bond movies, conducted by John Barry) -- or some other soaring music. I'm sure readers and you could suggest other possible songs to go with such. If you do scenes from such dancing later, please -- include some music titles, so we get the idea.

I am having no problems seeing any comments. Both my phone and desktop computer are having no problems. Using Chrome and Edge as browsers on desktop, and Chrome on phone (Android operating system).

I definitely like the changes I've seen so far. Great redesign, in my opinion thus far.

And I would (just to be very clear) like to see Jeremy again, as well. There are many questions yet to be answered, whether in "Catering With Benefits" or in a separate story. Examples of questions-- A) How did Jeremy get started in waxing and related salon activities? Do Brett and Jeremy have a relationship outside of the salon? C) How did Brett decide to become an apprentice or associate of Jeremy? D) Are either gay or bisexual? (I am guessing both are gay or bi, but that has not been made certain. When I was in open showers in the 1960s in my Physical Education (PE) classes in high school, several guys commented on the size of my penis because I'm more of a "shower" than a "grower." So they were guessing I was bigger than the erect state actually was -- not that any of them ever found out.) So even non-directly-sexual things are noticed by males and females.

I think Chris, above, summed up well most of what I was thinking in regard to Brett. However, I think part of it may also have been that Brett was desiring to do a good job and felt he was still learning, in addition to possibly being slightly distracted by working adjacent to an admirably appealing magnificent and memorable male member, on a very attractive man.