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Ahh, the path to true love. But with whom. You're weaving a great story with very interesting characters. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Chapter 11b - Epilogue Part 2
Defiance19 commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in Chapter 11b - Epilogue Part 2
Thank you for a great story Sasha, and a very very good ending. These two were so accepting of each other, it made their relationship and romance exceptional. And now, not without some bias, I await Nathan's story. -
Chapter 11a - Epilogue Part 1
Defiance19 commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in Chapter 11a - Epilogue Part 1
Three years in, love like the first day. How wonderful for Ashlee and Clem. This made my heart warm. It's going to be bittersweet letting them ride off. -
Nate's takedown was oddly satisfying, considering I'd previously wanted him writhing in pain. I think Nathan was solidly put in his place. By the time Ashlee asked Clem to take him home, I had moved on. Their consumation was incredible and sweet and loving and just well... Amazing. *sigh*
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I marvel at how Clem, who could not find it in him to stand up to abusive Nathan, is now so confident and strong that he can hold hands and make out with his skirt wearing boyfriend at the Rodeo. I am so proud of him. I love how happy Ashlee makes him. I'm glad he has an accepting circle of friends and I think the others were shocked but may come around. Then there's this thing with Suki. If there was ever a time for Nathan to get speared by a bull.... Can't wait for his comeuppance. Loved this chapter... Patiently waiting for the next. Thank you..
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I agree with Clem. Ashlee is something special. I can't say enough how I love this story. Also, my apologies for the Noah Nate gaffe last review....
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Ashlee, Well then! love this little...wrinkle. Clem's excited even if a bit hesitant, with good cause. It's all good. I can't wait though, for Noah's head to explode when he finds out.
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So so happy I read this on my way to work! I was nervous for Clem, anxious with him. He is such a sweet guy, I can't wait to see how it unfolds as he relaxes and finds his way! I like how Ashlee is with Clem, it's so what Clem needs right now. Question, the touch of a hand that gave Clem the shivers at the club, did not belong to Ashlee did it? If not, this is going to be even more interesting. Patiently awaiting next chapter..
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Yay for Clem standing up to that Goon! Even better, he's putting himself out there and he has a date! Woohoo. Clem wants a softer touch and for now if that's a *twink* (and I use that broadly), then so be it. Let's not forget that Clem is drawn to women and however that transforms itself into the men he chooses, remains to be seen. I agree with LitLover that now Clem's away from Nate, he sees more clearly what he wants. An anxiety free chapter, and I loved it. Thank you.
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Well Nate. Thank you for tying my stomach up in knots. Every chance you had of me giving you the benefit of the doubt, because just maybe Clem saw something in you that I wasn't privy too, GONE. I don't want you to redeem yourself, I want you to stay gone! (Ok Sasha?) I hope Clem stays strong and sees his worth and does not self blame or be ashamed of himself. That way he can recognise when the person meant for him shows up. Thank you for another great chapter.
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I kinda think Nathan is who he is. Clem, sweet Clem, seems to be stuck between not wanting to rock the boat and asserting himself. He absolutely knows Nathan isn't what he imagines his all would be. Maybe because it's slim pickings he's overly romanticized the relationship with Nathan. I mean boots look like couples, trucks together. He seems to really want that deep connecting true love. This chapter left me feeling a little less crazed at Nathan (I still don't like him), but wanting to see Clem maybe lift his head out of the clouds a bit? I am anxious to take this journey!
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Ha, Timothy's review was almost another chapter to this story. But everything he said! Mike frustrated me endlessly I literally groaned at the end. Another great chapter! Antsy for more.
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Hey Sasha, I absolutely love your work. This piece is no exception. Though,it's much more than a man and his wolf isn't it? Love is a wonderful thing and true love does accept all things. Oli and Boris' acceptance of their love as it is presented, in spite of their unique circumstances is a beautiful lovely thing. Loved it loved their happy ending. Thank you. That said, in my head, every time there is a blood moon they morph into the same form be it wolf or human.
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I'm so happy I found this story. It and the prequel was absolutely brilliant. I know it's been a while, but might we expect Jon's story in the future? Great writing.
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I so enjoyed this, and I miss them already. Thank you. Also, like everyone else, fingers crossed for college & beyond..
