You know this story seems like something you could read in a YAOI manga
like "mae yori mo dare yori mo" or "One night with my boss"
when i read your story i instantly remember these two mangas ive read
(please check them out so you can understand me)
do i make any sense???
Well anyways, your story is going good so far so please keep up the good wark !! Cant wait for the next chapter!