Amikawrite

Chapter 11 Daniel needed to leave the campus before Sam woke up. He had promised Michael that he would help find a good place for Michael to take his date and Daniel was determined to help out. Another purpose to this was surely to keep his mind off the issue between Sam and him. Daniel needed to go out and clear his mind so that he could think properly. There must be a way out of the arrangement, Sam couldn’t be serious. But all that would have to wait for later. Michael was already waiting a

I will work on the dialogues keeping in mind your suggestions. When I began writing the story I had a very layman understanding of contractual obligations. Having had the opportunity to study about this topic in greater detail I have realized the lack of conceptual accuracy in the story. I will try to rectify these mistakes in the coming chapters. Thank you very much for pointing out the faults. I am glad you liked the storyline.Thank you for reading!

Someone needs to breath some sense into these guys

Thank you so much for your suggestions! I will attempt to incorporate them in writing from now on!

I am really sorry about that. I made a mistake about the last thing copied onto my Clipboard and hence the mistake. Thank you for letting me know! I have the chapter up. Please do give it a read and let me know what you think. Thank you.

I am so sorry. I just noticed. Thank you for pointing it out. I have the chapter up properly this time. Sorry for the inconvenience. Do give it a read. Thanks again.

Chapter 8 Xavier’s POV I always thought that all the talk about people looking gentle and innocent in their sleep was a bunch of crap. Trust Louis to prove me wrong. He looks so sweet and guileless lying right next to me on my bed. He is beautiful, truly so. I think I should call in sick today. That way I can spend the entire day with Louis. It doesn’t seem like a bad idea actually. I don’t want Louis to think that I am being clingy. Fine I will go and get ready for office. But seriously who

Xavier's dad isn't really the type to ask questions regarding Xavier's life as long as he is doing his job well. However Ben has been looking after Xavier from his childhood. Ben will be doing the questioning regarding Louis a little later. I agree with you. Both the guys have a problem of overthinking the simplest things and complicating them. I am sure it will come as a shock for Louis when he learns that he is the first guy Xavier has been with. I think he will learn about this a little later. Depending on how the relationship between Louis and Xavier progresses Louis will have a stand on various things happening around the office. Xavier does have experience with a number of women but he is a bit confused this time about how to handle his attraction towards Louis.It is as difficult for Xavier as it is for Louis. They just have different ways of handling the issue. I am really glad that you liked this chapter. Thank you so much for your detailed feedback. I promise I will work on the areas that you mentioned!

Chapter 7 Xavier’s POV “Dad it’s a work thing,” I lie as I pick up my phone for the nth time during dinner. I am seriously going crazy. Maybe I rushed it and now I have no choice but to wait for a reply. It has already been a week since Louis went out for dinner with me so I decided to invite him out once again. In pursuance of this end I dropped a text stating ‘Dinner tomorrow?’ The issue here is that I haven’t received a reply yet. He has apparently seen my text but hasn’t bothered to reply

I could not stop myself once I started reading the story. The way you depicted the dimensions of the human psyche is astounding. The portrayal of cruelty and the nature of the torture gave me chills. The character of Adam was so intense and you gave it so many layers that the occasional sweetness he showed had me hoping that he would change. I am so glad that you treated the story line in the way you did. Lian was truly a monster and the detailing just made it even more scary. Nye was just the sweetest ever and I kept praying for him to realize that Adam is slowly destroying him. I have to admit that I am usually not one to be interested in reading any story involving hardcore BDSM but I am so glad that I read this story. It is definitely among the best stories I have read in my life. Thank you so much for writing this story.

I am so glad you are liking it. Thank you so much for your support.

Thanks. I will get to work right away.

I hope you find that person soon. Keep looking and if that person can't value you he probably would be super dumb and not worth it.

Thank you for telling me about your doubt. I will work on explaining that part in the chapters to come.

Chapter 6 Louis’ POV I should probably send a text thanking him for tonight. But I already thanked him in person. It is just a text. I don’t want to be rude. What should I write? ‘Thanks for tonight. I look forward to your next treat’ sounds good. No! He will think I am asking him to invite me out again. Just simple thanks should be enough. What is the use of sending out a text if I just write thanks? There is no need to write anything at all. I will thank him again tomorrow. How unprofession