drpaladin
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The car is over the top. Poor Alex is in an alien environment.
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I don't recall anyone brown bagging. Maybe I didn't notice. I was only in HS two years before jumping to college.
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We see the soft side of Enrico. He learned a lesson with Ezra, one he doesn't want Alex to repeat. So don't use Brian as a tool.
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What I find odd is Alex not having a computer aged image.
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Like Alex, I curated the most edible food.
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Alex is functioning as an asset of his father. He knows tradecraft, but this is on the job training. It'll be rough.
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Late start on this and trying to catch up. Blockbuster beginning.
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This punches a hole in the case and causes doubt about the rest.
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Elias' father is a clever man. He can't put Theo or Elias on the stand, but Theo himself can be evidence.
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assailant - Word of the Day - Sat Dec 13, 2025
drpaladin commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
Bullies put the ass in assailant. -
Andrew is fighting a desperate battle within his compromised and tortured mind. His sole stable link is a phantom Jacob. May he continue to protect him.
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Sam is still too young to bail as Monica's slave. She would have to let him.
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Some curve balls in this one. Brian standing up for Shaun, Sam wanting to move in with them, and then Quinn. The last exposes Shaun isn't as comfortable with their lives being open to fans as they thought. It's the same old mountain of fear.
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Did Xue come with a crew of cleaners or is CSIS mopping up the mess?
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Rourke miscalculated. He had expected Sawyer's prominent family to shun him. Theo cock blocked him.
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vitriol - Word of the Day - Fri Dec 12, 2025
drpaladin commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
The internet's layer of anominity has cursed us with easy vitriol. -
And they are oblivious as usual
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Using MAD as a strategy is brilliant.
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Xue is an elegant, lethal wraith. I suspect Alex can protect himself.
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Clint Eastwood would have spit backy on those papers and shot'em all.
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Bobby is a Grady.
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I'll point out a senator doesn't have the power to authorize doodly squat.
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What a corrupt sham. I want to see how you extract Elias from this one.
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imitative - Word of the Day - Thu Dec 11, 2025
drpaladin commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
Many products have become so imitative that they have no character of their own. -
Tell me Sheriff Doerr's first name isn't Buck.
