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Chapter 13 - The *Final* Last Drive-in
drpaladin commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 13 - The *Final* Last Drive-in
Helter Skelter. -
The showdown at the Super 8 Corral. This will be messy.
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I have to wonder at Miss Charters motives. She's not the empathetic and benevolent type and why the desire for secrecy?
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Chapter 12 - The First Shifts
drpaladin commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 12 - The First Shifts
Olona is unknowingly helping the enemy by giving them a powerful weapon. How will she be able to forgive herself? -
orrery - Word of the Day - Mon Jun 10, 2024
drpaladin commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
There are orreries in the Harry Potter books and films. -
I think a bit optimistic is too optimistic.
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Being stupid carries the double burden of ignorance of one's own stupidity.
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Greg is just Greg, a stupid, fat slob. I can't ever see him as a solution.
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Chapter 11 - Dry Land
drpaladin commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 11 - Dry Land
Even as angered as Djaruki was at the time, I feel she would be horrified at the carnage she caused if she knew. They seem to have found a safe harbor for now. -
Connor's attitude has changed, but I can't see him giving birth. I also can't recall him ever being the penetratee.
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M's baby will be a clean slate. His personality will develop from how he's raised. I think the alien powers come from the implant and their baby won't have one.
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What three babies was my question. I know Rosie is pregnant, but I don't see how these other random human babies help the MIB. He could snatch those anywhere.
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What three?
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Why can't creepy Greg experience a close encounter with the MIB? He and Piggy seem to have a lot in common.
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Chapter 10 - To the Sea
drpaladin commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 10 - To the Sea
Their first impressions of a friendly, happy place were deceptive. Tygo's power maybe the greatest we've seen. -
panglossian - Word of the Day - Sat Jun 8, 2024
drpaladin commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
Dr. Pangloss in Voltaire's Candide was inordinately optimistic. -
panglossian - Word of the Day - Sat Jun 8, 2024
drpaladin commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
From Greek, pan (all) and glossa (tongue). -
Connor is indeed blooming into maturity. Fatherhood is good for him.
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Chapter 9 - The Forest
drpaladin commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 9 - The Forest
Djaruki has a chance meeting with Tygo and Filiuo. They all have a common purpose to find an accepting place in this harsh world. On to new adventures! -
If the conch controls the will of all, command the enemy to disarm and go away.
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He didn't 'see' her through the debris, so perhaps he can't detect her.
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Chapter 8 - Gawa & Tisa
drpaladin commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 8 - Gawa & Tisa
Channeling Obi Wan Kenobi, "These aren't the Shifts you are looking for." Despite their initial welcome, they quickly sussed Djaruki wasn't the type to join their activities. Good luck on finding any peace in any of these places as a Shift. -
Thinking of the iratxos bite, it's little different from tetanus or rabies. Even with modern medicine, those are still fatal if you wait too long to treat them. Still, I'm hoping for a miracle for Nathan.
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Given the circumstances, Moonbeam Landing is a propitious sounding place for Connor to land a job. Nathan, evicted from his own room. I'd feel weird in there too. The agent isn't going to know what hit him.
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They'll pick up miscellaneous trash here with a separate truck. I'm surprised at what they'll pick up.
